Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 26, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-08676 Machine learning prediction of combat basic training injury from 3D body shape images PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Thomas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 15 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: * Very cool motivation for the study. The data is preexisting from 3D body scans for uniform fitting so there is not additional cost (from a real-world application point of view) to employ such a method. Overall I like this study but there are a few areas of missing details and baselines which should be addressed before acceptance. * The authors make a good point about the applicability of body measurements possibly having a high correlation with "overuse injuries", and BMI is known to be a poor metric. However, there is likely little to no correlation with other sports and military injuries such as the authors mentioned femoral neck injuries. In hockey and likely other areas these injuries are highly situational and not about being "out of shape". It would be wise for the authors to separate any sort of repetitive stress injuries from these more situational injuries, the correlation will likely be much higher, but it seems such data was not available to the authors. * "...total recruit percentages of 18.9% black, 4.8% Asian, 0.8% Native American, and 11.9% Hispanic (22)" This doesn't add to 100%. Please update. * The authors state that 97 subjects had injuries resulting in separation, but the confusion matrix only shows 33 injuries? * The description of the ANN model used is not included. Is it a MLP? How many layers? * A correlation with BMI and injuries would be a nice baseline to justify these 3D scanners are superior to a basic measurement like that. The reviewer thinks such a comparison is pretty crucial to be added. It seems this work was done in previous studies and currently no comparison with previous work is provided. This would provide a nice connection with previous studies. * With such limited data, why did the authors do 3-fold cross validation? Something like 10-fold is more common. It gives more training data. The authors don't need to redo all the experiments, but it might lead to superior performance (more training data + more powerful ANN can be used to get better performance). * Possible suggestions on future work: 1) Don't rely on the identified body measurements, directly use the 3D scans and methods from the computer vision community to possibly identify better features than those which are optimal for uniform measurements. 2) The false positive rate is a big concern for applicability. The authors should think of ways to address this to have any chance of real-world application. Reviewer #2: The authors propose to predict the risk probability of injury due to basic combat training. The authors use the 3D body shape images captured by a device to extract 161 features to describe the subject. Then reduce feature dimension to 126 by averaging and then clustering them. To model these features, the authors use logistic regression, random forest, and a neural network. The NN performs better than the other modeling methods with AUC 0.70. This is an application paper. Questions and Comments: Q1 Line 27-30 What is the basis for postulating that certain body characteristics (as captured in the 3D body shape images) can be used to predict the risk of injury due to physical activity? Q2 Line 40-42 How can you be certain that this is due to the correlation? Do you have features extracted from the 3D body shape images captured before the physical activity to compare? Q3 Line 48-50 What purpose does it serve? This is a technical paper. Q4 Line 176 Explain the choice of the hyperparameters used in logistic regression and random forest. The authors note that NN performs better. However, there is no architecture or NN design choices. Please provide. Q5 Line 213 - 218 Did you apply both averaging and k-means clustering to reduce the feature dimension from 161 to 125 or just used averaging? Please explain clearly how did you get the final features. Q6 Please provide an ablation study on the NN choice. I suggest the authors use transfer learning to improve performance. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Machine learning prediction of combat basic training injury from 3D body shape images PONE-D-20-08676R1 Dear Dr. Thomas, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for addressing all of my concerns. Congratulations on your revisions and your great work. Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing my questions and comments. One final note on the data availability. The authors note that they will help "anyone" who is interested in accessing the data. And also, state that the data needs to be requested and "authorized" from the United States Army. I request the authors to address who can request, share, and for what purpose. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-08676R1 Machine learning prediction of combat basic training injury from 3D body shape images Dear Dr. Thomas: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ulas Bagci Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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