Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 25, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-08606 Characterization of white and red sorghum flour and their potential use for production of extrudate crisps PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Aldrich, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 13 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript is well written and technically sound. Some questions and comments to be addressed before publication follow below. This study relies on only two samples (which the authors have acknowledged in the discussion) and this should be addressed in the abstracted and early in the manuscript. Suggest adding "one white and red..." on line 6 and "The white and red sorghum..." on line 7. On line 10, revise to read "The white and red sorghum used in this study..." At line 210 revise to "The white and red sorghum varieties used in this research..." At line 214 change to "...Alvarenga et al [9] when a red sorghum.." On line 223 change to "...current study, a white sorghum and a red sorghum..." Lines 236-239. Related to starch damage and grain hardness, it would be beneficial to include grain hardness measurements of the two samples used in this study to relate hardness to starch damage. This could also be inferred from the particle size data as particle size has been used to measure grain hardness. Line 246- and other places in the publication. The authors have stated that nutritional differences may exist and have hinted this may be related to grain color. However, pericarp color is under control of specific genes and has never been linked to endosperm composition (see chapter of W. Rooney in Handbook of Sorghum Technology which lists known genes and their impacts or the work of Lloyd Rooney and pericarp color and genetic controls). There is no evidence to support the idea that overall grain composition/nutritional profile is may be linked to or influenced grain color (other than phenolic content and composition), thus the manuscript needs to be revised to remove those suggestions. Lines 252-254. There are many, many book chapters that review sorghum grain composition and all show the variability that sorghum can have in grain composition (protein, starch, fat, phenolics, etc...). Thus it is misleading to state that the literature contains inconsistent results...the variability present in the literature is due to the variability within sorghum which is very well documented at the genetic and chemical level. This statement needs to be revised to more clearly state the variability that can be present in sorghum. Lines 269-270. Consider measuring amylose levels and add to the manuscript to support this speculation. Reviewer #2: This study analyze the milling process and flour quality of white and red sorghum and their extrusion as a potential process to produce sorghum crisps. I consider this idea is very valuable. However, the paper needs improvements, some important information is missing and some results only a limited explanation is given. The objective to measured salmonella should be described/discussed in introduction section. I wonder if the salmonella analyzes and results are a necessary part of this work? The objective of this study was to evaluate the milling process and flour quality of white and red sorghum and evaluate extrusion as a potential process to produce sorghum crisps. However, in the opinion of this reviewer no variable conditions of milling process were tested to gain knowledge. Tempering and milling conditions were chosen but clear explanation should be done about the election of processing variables. Why 16.5 % and 19 h were used? Are there these condition optimized? Since the objective of this study was to evaluate the milling process, did the authors tested different conditions? Clarify L64. Milling process stabilization? Did the authors make more than one testing/analysis on flour sample evaluations? Or only one test of each lot? Clarify L82. It is not clear what (7+2 mg) means. Clarify Extrusion process. Include barrel diameter and barrel length to diameter ratio Was the extruder barrels heat by any mean? Clarify Did the extruder have temperature probes in the barrel? Clarify All the steam was added in the pre-conditioner? Where the temperature of pre-conditioner was measured? In the opinion of this reviewer the temperature (47-48°C) of the pre-conditioner is too low according to the amount of steam addition How was the extruder configuration chosen? Did the authors try different configurations? Change hr by h (hours) L135-138. The order of the statement should be change as follow: A compression test was performed using a 25 mm cylindrical probe at a pre-test speed of 2 mm/s, test speed of 2 mm/s, a post-test speed of 10 mm/s, and strain level of 90%. The first peak fracture force, and the number of positive peaks were taken as a measure of hardness and crispness, respectively. Each extrudate was measured alone? Clarify Only flour from HRFM was tested for salmonella? Extrudates? Results L157-159. It is not clear for this reviewer what do the authors mean with: “13.74 + 0.41 to 15.90 + 0.99 % (wb), and from 13.38 + 0.31 to 15.21 + 0.73 % (wb) for WS and RS, respectively” “(59.03 + 8.676 and 57.02 + 2.67 %, respectively”. Clarify L224-225. “However, it is noteworthy that hybrids within each sorghum variety may have different nutritional and physiochemical properties.” This phrase is not clear for this reviewer. Do the authors know the hybrids and/or varieties evaluated? Did the author evaluate the flour/extrudates color parameters? Were there any differences among samples? L307-315. There are some points that needs more discussion: high steam but low temperature in the pre-conditioner, very high IBM. Please discuss more deeply. L318. Please discuss and compare the screw configuration used. Why is aggressive? How aggressive is? L332-334. Could the authors explain these behaviors? Or expand the discussion of the cited references As the authors have mentioned in the discussion, the lack of statistical differences were not observed in the current study due to high variably within treatments, which in turn depend of experiment design. In the opinion of this reviewer it should be mentioned in conclusions also ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Characterization of white and red sorghum flour and their potential use for production of extrudate crisps PONE-D-20-08606R1 Dear Dr. Aldrich, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Leonidas Matsakas Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments to my suggestions have been addressed in the revision of the manuscript and the manuscript from my perspective is ready for publication. Reviewer #2: After reviewing the manuscript for a second time, I note that the manuscript has improved significantly in order to be published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-08606R1 Characterization of white and red sorghum flour and their potential use for production of extrudate crisps Dear Dr. Aldrich: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Leonidas Matsakas Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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