Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-00127 Possible factors driving dog owners' decision to castrate male dogs - Self-reports of Dutch dog owners on received professional advice, their opinions on castration and behavioural reasons for castrating male dogs PLOS ONE Dear Dr Roulaux Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Many thanks for submitting your manuscript to PLOS One Your manuscript was reviewed by three experts in the field All three see merit in the work and they have recommended that some changes be made to the manuscript. If you could write a detailed response to reviewers, that will speed up the second review I wish you the best of luck with your revisions Many thanks Simon ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 29 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting paper examining the reasons for choosing castration of male companion dogs and its perceived behavioural consequences. The work seems sound but it was problematic not to have sight of the questionnaire, and the statistical approach is very simple and limited. See specific comments below. The paper is generally well written but there are some minor issues with grammar in several places (e.g. “Assumingly,”) – the manuscript would benefit from review from a native English speaker. Introduction The specific knowledge gap filled by this study could be clearer. The claim that we do not know the behavioural effects of castration is contradicted by studies cited which examine this. “why dog owners decide to (not) castrate their male dog” is not helpful wording, suggest “why dog owners decide to castrate their male dog or not” Methods Please include a copy of the questionnaire as an appendix or supplementary material – this is normal practice in studies of this type. Currently the reader cannot see the range of reasons presented for castration, for example, which makes review of the paper difficult. The methods do not describe the collection of any demographic data, yet this data appears in results. Again, we need to see the questionnaire and all aspects of the questionnaire need to be described in the methods. The statistics are rather simple and very limited. For example, use of Chi square required the collapsing of five point Likert scales into binary categories which seems a shame and represents a loss of detail in the data. By assigning a score based on the Likert scale, many more multivariate analysis options are available which are much more appropriate. Currently no effects of demographics are included in the analysis – then why collect this data? The authors should strongly consider complete re-analysis of their data with more sophisticated techniques, or justify why this is not done. How were the 491 analysed selected from the total of male dogs? Did this introduce bias? Discussion The discussion covers a lot of relevant ground but has two major omissions (1) Possible bias in the study sample based on online self-selection – this is a major issue with online recruitment (2) Effects of demographics (which were not statistically analysed) See: Wonsaengchan, C. and McKeegan D.E.F. (2019). The views of the UK public towards routine neutering of dogs and cats. Animals 9(4): 138, DOI:10.3390/ani9040138 Reviewer #2: The manuscript tackles an important issue. There are many concerns regarding the manuscript. 1) The "introduction" section emphasizes that desexing has predominantly no effect on aggression behavior but misses recent review studies that indicate a beneficial effect of desexing of male dogs in reducing the risk of dog bites and male dog-directed aggression (D'Onise et al., Inj Prev, 2017; Urfer & Kaeberlein, Animals (Basel), 2019). 2) There is neither information on sample size calculation nor on the power to detect differences with the sample obtained. 3) There is no information on how the questionnaire was developed. Is it based on a previously validated instrument? With no specific information on the validity or reliability of the questionnaire, the results are questionable. 4) This is a convenience sample and may not reflect the profile of the owners of dogs in the region. Therefore, with no information on how the sample matches the profile of the population of dog owners, the results might well be biased. 5) Statistical analysis is poorly described and conducted. For instance, there is no need to present Chi-square residuals (tables) we need to know, at least, the p-values associated with each comparison. 6) The presentation of results is confusing and may not reflect actual data. For instance, from table 3, I can see that 10% of owners of castrated dogs agree that castration may have affected aggressive behavior against only 3% of owners of non-castrated dogs. So, beyond the fact that we have almost 30% of missing data for that question and that most owners do not agree, it seems that castration increased the likelihood of a "positive" response (from 3% to 10%), indicating that the experience of castration may have changed the perception of the owner regarding the issue. 7) In any case, it is not very easy to compare different people with different experiences. I may well have not castrated my dogs because my dog is not aggressive or because I simply do not believe in castration for such a purpose. In a counterfactual world, what would be my response if otherwise my dog has been castrated independently of my previous opinion? Of course, this is not represented by the answers of owners of castrated dogs, because these owners might well have decided to castrated their dogs because their dogs were much more aggressive than those of non-castrated dogs. So, comparisons here are not adequate for any causal inference. 8) Results sometimes are interpreted against the facts. For instance, from Table 4, I would say that, compared to dogs castrated for other reasons, dogs castrated for behavioral correction showed a substantial decrease in putative behavior. However, authors prefer to emphasize that "Castrated dog's aggression changes were reported on most as 'no change'." 9) The emphasis on "increased" aggression behavior is not rooted in the data. Increased aggression was the smaller change observed and may reflect just variation of owner perception since it is not based on any objective measure. Reviewer #3: The article "Possible factors driving dog owners' decision to castrate male dogs - Self-reports of Dutch dog owners on received professional advice, their opinions on castration and behavioural reasons for castrating male dogs" is of interest but some points need to be properly treated to improve the quality of the manuscript. -The text (specially introduction and discussion) is very extensive and convoluted. It must be fully improved. -Tables are not properly formatted. They are not self-explanatory and do not contain essential information (P-values and proportions). -The results of the statistical tests are confusing and present unnecessary information (values deviated from expectation; residuals; test statistics calculated from sample data during the hypothesis test...) -I strongly suggest that the authors read and adapt the article to the STROBE-Vet guideline. This must be submitted as supplementary material. https://strobevet-statement.org/ -The study area must be described in detail. -The studied population should also be better described. What are its characteristics? What is the external validity of the results? - The authors only mention that "targeted dog owners via websites, social media channels and newsletters directed at dog owners". Such a process should be better described. Based on what has been presented, the representativeness of the sample and the possibility of selection bias cannot be assessed. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-20-00127R1 Self-reports of Dutch dog owners on received professional advice, their opinions on castration and behavioural reasons for castrating male dogs PLOS ONE Dear Dr Pascalle Elise Maria Roulaux Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Many thanks for resubmitting your manuscript to PLOS One It was reviewed by the same reviewers as previously, and they have suggested further changes to the manuscript prior to acceptance If you could write a detailed response to reviewers, that will expedite review when resubmitted. I wish you the best of luck with your changes Hope you are keeping safe and well in this difficult time Thanks Simon ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 26 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Simon Russell Clegg, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors made an immense effort to modify the manuscript to take care of my comments. Although I still cannot entirely agree with some statements and conclusions, I understand that we got into the difficult line between reviewer's necessity and authors' latitude to decide the way they want to show their results to the community. Therefore, I will only maintain two points that I still think are necessary for eventual publication in PLOS One. 1) Regarding sample size, I do not think the text included is neither sufficient nor correct. Authors should be able to calculate the power of the study for detecting, for instance, a difference in a certain proportion, say 10%. Please provide this using standard formula, not references for average differences. 2) Regarding the presentation of results, there was no improvement. In this type of study, in which you have two groups (castrated vs. intact) and proportions as responses, you need a better approach to present results. As I already mentioned, there is no reason to present deviations from expected values; we just need p-values for each comparison. Table 1 could be seen as three 2-by-2 tables comparing advised or not by a certain professional and being castrated or not. For instance, we can see that 81% of owners of castrated dogs received advice from veterinarians against only 63% of owners of intact dogs, is this difference statistically significant? The same question applies to therapists and trainers. Three comparisons, three p-values, that's all we need. There is no need for presenting deviations, the value of the chi-square or the df. The same applies to all tables. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Self-reports of Dutch dog owners on received professional advice, their opinions on castration and behavioural reasons for castrating male dogs PONE-D-20-00127R2 Dear Dr Pascalle Elise Maria Roulaux We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Simon Clegg, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Many thanks for resubmitting your manuscript to PLOS One As you have addressed all the reviewers comments, and two of the reviewers are in agreement to accept, I have recommended the manuscript for publication You should hear from the Editorial Office soon It was a pleasure working with you, and I wish you the best of luck for your future research Hope you are keeping safe and well in these difficult times Thanks Simon |
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PONE-D-20-00127R2 Self-reports of Dutch dog owners on received professional advice, their opinions on castration and behavioural reasons for castrating male dogs Dear Dr. Roulaux: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Simon Clegg Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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