Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 12, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-31481 Novel Natural Language Processing techniques using Machine Learning methods to identify ischemic stroke, acuity and location from radiology reports PLOS ONE Dear Dr Ong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 20 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Please also double check the URL and Github link. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thanks for the opportunity reviewing this interesting manuscript. The authors evaluated both traditional machine learning algorithms and deep learning algorithms with several common features for radiology reports-related NLP tasks. The manuscript is well written and easy to follow. While I appreciate authors’ efforts in building annotated datasets and an extensive set of experiments, I feel like additional justifications and experiments should be provided to make this study more robust. Here are some comments the authors could consider to further improve this manuscript: Major comments: 1. The first word in the title is “novel”. However, throughout the manuscript, the authors did not provide justifications of the novelty of their methods. To my knowledge, the algorithms and features the authors evaluated in the present study are pretty routine. The authors need to justify the novelty of their study or remove the word “novel” in their title. 2. The authors need carefully check the second paragraph in the introduction. The definitions of some NLP-related concepts are not rigorous. For example, non-machine learning-based approach can also build NLP systems; text featurization can also converts text into features using non-machine learning-based methods; GloVe is only one type of word embedding algorithms, perhaps not the most popular one. In addition, the first few sentences in the second paragraph seems to be related the general introduction of NLP, however, the sentences since “After converting language into relevant” are related to radiology-specific NLP. The authors should consider to adding some transitions in the between. 3. The justification of choosing the algorithms is not very clear. For example, why choose GloVe over other embedding algorithms, including word2vec, fastText? Why to choose RNN over CNN? 4. The implementations of some algorithms are not very clear. What are the hyper-parameters of RNN? What are the major parameters for the training of GloVe embedding, including dimension, number of iterations, window size, etc? 5. I feel like additional experiments are needed to be done to make the study more robust. For example, the author trained GloVe vector on the radiology reports. To demonstrate its superiority, the authors should also at least test random embedding or pre-trained GloVe em-bedding from general domain. The authors don’t have to report the results in the manuscript, but relevant discussion is necessary. 6. In the last two years, we’ve witnessed the booming trends of using contextualized embed-ding (e.g. ELMo), BERT and other deep learning architectures in clinical NLP. Some relevant discussion should be provided. a. Wu S, et al. Deep learning in clinical natural language processing: a methodical re-view. Journal of the American Medical Informatics Association. 2019 Dec 3. Minor comments: 1. “TF-IDF” is “term frequency–inverse document frequency”, not “Text Featurization-Inverse Document Frequency” 2. Please remove the last dot (.) in page 11, line 162. The current URL can’t be accessed. 3. An overall description of the label corpus, including the distribution of different labels, length of text, etc., should be provided Reviewer #2: Authors present a comparison study where some text featurizations and standard classification methods have been compared against each other on the same test dataset. The manuscript is easy to read but the technical contribution is limited. Author may consider the following points for improvement - 1. Author mentioned that RNN provides the best performance. But, 1,359 reports are too few to train a standard RNN model. May be they are getting this performance as the model is overfitted to their dataset. Author should mention the number of trainable parameters in the network and also try to test with an external test cohort (not from the same institution). 2. Given that all the models' performance is over 0.8, may be the task is also simple for the ML models. Did author try to implement a simple rule-based system with Negation and uncertainty detection? Author should also reports the inter-annotator agreement value. 3. Quality of the figure text is very low and difficult to read. 4. There are also few hybrid NLP models [1] available that combines rule-based with machine learning. Author may also extend their experiment with this kind of techniques. [1] https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1532046417302575 [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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PONE-D-19-31481R1 Machine Learning and Natural Language Processing Methods to Identify Ischemic Stroke, Acuity and Location from Radiology Reports PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 18 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Yifan Peng, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thanks for the revision. Most of my comments have been addressed. Some minor comments: 1. Line 82: “NLP involves” to “ML-based NLP involves” 2. Line 83: remove “using specifically tailored machine learning methods”. Many featurization methods are not ML-based. For example, bag-of-words, TFIDF, etc. 3. Line 85: “tf-idf” to “TF-IDF” 4. Line 86-87: “learn vector representations of word relationships” to “learn a distributed representation for words” [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Machine Learning and Natural Language Processing Methods to Identify Ischemic Stroke, Acuity and Location from Radiology Reports PONE-D-19-31481R2 Dear Dr. Ong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yifan Peng, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-31481R2 Machine Learning and Natural Language Processing Methods to Identify Ischemic Stroke, Acuity and Location from Radiology Reports Dear Dr. Ong: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yifan Peng Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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