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Original SubmissionMay 29, 2020
Decision Letter - Dragana Nikitovic, Editor

PONE-D-20-16285

Analysis of opticin binding to collagen fibrils identifies a single binding site in the gap region and a high specificity towards thin heterotypic fibrils containing collagens II, and XI or V/XI.

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Please correct minor typographic errors and shortly disccussed why you focused on opticin binding.

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The authors used electron mircroscopic studies in order to describe opticin binding to fibrillary collagen structures in vitreous and cartilage collagen.

Their comments on opticin binding non altering morphology of the fibrillary structures are fascinating and based om measurements of fibril diameter, but is this sufficient to conclude on morphology?

Opticin is present in vitreous and cartilage but so is e.g. biglycan, so why did the authors choose to address opticin binding only?

Please correct "predominates" to "predominate" on line 64 and "collagen II, IX and IX" to "collagen II, IX and XI" on line 146

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Revision 1

Dear Dr Nikitovic

Thank you for your Email concerning our manuscript. You asked us to submit a revised version on the manuscript addressing the points that were raised during the review process. We hope that these have been addressed in the revised manuscript. Below is our response to the specific issues that have ben raised.

1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at

These have been checked and I hope they meet with the PLOS ONE style requirement.

2. We note that you have included the phrase “data not shown” in your manuscript.

We have removed “data not shown” from line 209 and added in a Supplementary Figure (Fig S5) showing that opticin does not bind to type 1 collagen fibrils.

Responses to reviewer’s comments

Their comments on opticin binding non altering morphology of the fibrillary structures are fascinating and based om measurements of fibril diameter, but is this sufficient to conclude on morphology?

Our previous work has shown that fibril diameter, morphology and molecular composition are interdependent (e.g. Blanschke et al. JBC 2000: 275: 10370-787), so we believe that conclusions can be made on morphology if opticin does not affect fibril diameter.

Opticin is present in vitreous and cartilage but so is e.g. biglycan, so why did the authors choose to address opticin binding only?

Whilst several members of the small leucine rich repeat proteoglycan (SLRP) family have been identified in vitreous and cartilage, we were particularly interested in studying opticin because in vitreous it appeared to be the major macromolecule associated with the collagen fibrils (Reardon et al 2000). Furthermore, we have shown that in vitreous opticin has anti-angiogenic properties which appear to relate to its collagen binding, so it was deemed important to investigate the binding of opticin to collagen fibrils. An additional reason is that, whilst there is previously published data showing the binding sites of class I and class II SLRPs on collagen fibrils, there is no published data on the binding of class III SLRPs.

To emphasise the first of these points (the others have already made in the text), we have added a sentence to the discussion, sentence 2, lines 179 -182, and a reference to a vitreous proteomics study which identified several SLRPs in vitreous.

“Whilst several SLRPs are present in vitreous [19], opticin is of particular interest because it was found to be a major component of a pool of macromolecules that strongly associated with vitreous collagen fibrils [1].”

Please correct "predominates" to "predominate" on line 64 and "collagen II, IX and IX" to "collagen II, IX and XI" on line 146

Predominates has been changed to predominate

We have not made any changes to line 146 as it is not clear what the reviewer would like us to do and as far as we can see it reads satisfactorily.

Some other minor corrections have been made to the text including incorrect reference numbers (these are highlighted).

Yours sincerely

Paul Bishop

Decision Letter - Dragana Nikitovic, Editor

Analysis of opticin binding to collagen fibrils identifies a single binding site in the gap region and a high specificity towards thin heterotypic fibrils containing collagens II, and XI or V/XI.

PONE-D-20-16285R1

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Dragana Nikitovic, Ph.D

Academic Editor

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Dragana Nikitovic, Editor

PONE-D-20-16285R1

Analysis of opticin binding to collagen fibrils identifies a single binding site in the gap region and a high specificity towards thin heterotypic fibrils containing collagens II, and XI or V/XI.

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