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Original SubmissionMay 29, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-16218 A novel pre-vascularized tissue engineered chamber as a site for allogenic and xenogeneic islet transplantation to establish a bioartificial pancreas PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please answer the comments of especially reviewer #2 very carefully, as he/she had several important technical concerns - these have to be addressed - both reviewers noted a lack of novelty, but I believe that confirming concepts is indeed very important in science and PlosOne is appropriate for this. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 06 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see the following video for instructions on linking an ORCID iD to your Editorial Manager account: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xcclfuvtxQ [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is in principle an honest and straightforward study on implantation of a longitudinally cut silicone tube filled with matrigel to induce pre-vascularization. Subsequently, islets from autologous, allo or xeno origin are then transplanted and outcome monitored. It was found that the longer pre-vascularization went on, the better outcomes tended to be. Since the device is essentially open, both allo and xeno islets required immune suppression (here by anti-CD45 and anti-CD40L). Finally, in these longterm surviving islet recipients, some evidence of tolerized immunity was observed. The problem is not data quality or clarity of the report but rather my impression of lack of novelty. Did we know vascularization matters greatly to survival? Yes. Will an open device like this accommodate protection against alloreactivity? No. And then the clinical question is whether immune suppression as in this paper is acceptable in the future. Likely not. So the paper fails to show an improved safety efficacy-perspective in my mind. Minor comment: the authors state that 'the principle concern in clinic is weight'. I see more problems that that so best omit this statement. Reviewer #2: The introduction summarizes well the shortcomings of intra-hepatic islet infusions and captures nicely the main challenges of extra-hepatic islet transplantation, including tissue capacity, kinetics, and adequate oxygen and nutrient delivery to the graft. The paper hypothesises that the ability and timing of transplanted islets to normalize blood glucose in diabetic mice correlates to the degree of pre-vascularization of the tx site and the number of transplanted islets, respectively. By employing a tissue engineering technique developed in the late 80’s and combing with Matrigel, the authors examine the degree of vascularisation in the tissue engineered chamber (TEC) 7d, 14d, 28d and 35d after implantation and the effect on blood glucose when 300 syngeneic islets are transplanted into the TEC after 0, 14 and 28 days of pre-vascularization of the TEC. The effect of islet numbers on blood glucose lowering is examined by transplanting 100, 200 and 300 syngeneic islets after 28 days of pre-vascularisation. The authors examine if allo- and xenogeneic islets can survive and function for prolonged time in the TEC by treating the diabetic mice with anti-CD45RB treatment for 7 days +/- anti-CD40L for up to 14 days. The authors show, that a 28d pre-vascularised TEC is permissive for long term (90d) islet function and survival in syngeneic transplantations and that increasing islet numbers decreases the time interval from islet injection to blood glucose normalisation. Furthermore, the authors provide data indicating, that combination treatment with anti-CD45RB (7d) + anti-CD40L (14d) is permissive for allo-and xenogeneic islet transplantations in this model. The observed effect of pre-vascularization is in accordance with numerous studies on the effect of oxygen on islet survival and function in vivo and the protective effect of anti-CD45RB (7d) and anti-CD40L has also been demonstrated previously. The introduction section is relatively well written and addresses relevant background information. The result section, however, appears to have been written in haste, with little proof-reading. Graphs are mixed up, legends flawed, there are incomplete references and both linguistic and argumentative flaws. The discussion section appears written in haste as well, with several errors and lacks perspective. I have listed some of the issues below, but the list is by no means exhaustive. I recommend the authors to revise the language to improve readability and correct the flaws before the manuscript can be properly reviewed. I have therefore chosen not to follow the otherwise helpful outline of how to review, since it does not make sense at this stage in my opinion. In its current form, I am inclined to reject the article. Issues to clarify/correct: 1. The authors refer to allo- or xeno islet transplantation as a potentially promising solution for insulin-independent diabetes mellitus both in the abstract and on p 16, p 21. Do the authors mean insulin-dependent? 2. On page 16, the authors write that they explored whether anti-CD45RB (7d) and anti-CD40L could prolong the survival of the mice. Do they mean survival of the graft? 3. Page 16 bottom, the authors state that the data in Fig 4B indicates that glucose tolerance was dependant on the number of transplanted islets. This does not make sense in that context. Please correct. 4. On page 20-21, the paper lists several sites that have “never been used clinically”, including omentum, muscle and anterior chamber of the eye. It the authors mean to state, that these sites have never been tested clinically, this is incorrect. 5. Fig 3: Fig 3A and 3B has been switched. Thus, the text and the figure legend refer to the wrong graph. The x-axis legend on current fig 3B must be corrected (not 28d). In Fig 3C, please state the number of islets (300?) 6. P15, referral to suppl. Fig 1 for bodyweight. However, this is Suppl. Fig 2. Please correct. 7. Please double check references; the method of creating the TEC is referred to 23 and 24, Hussey et al. and Menger et al. but the method is only described in Cronin et al. which is mentioned in the text but not on the reference list. 8. Fig 4: in the legends of the graphs (red line), what is meant by “uncontrol”?. In the text legend to fig 4, how can 5/5=80%? 9. Fig 3: The 5 animals in the group given 300 islets on d 28 are the same in the two graphs (A & B). Were these two experiments run simultaneously? 10. Since the paper concludes that the TEC is a promising strategy for islet transplantation due to the vascularisation induced by Matrigel, it would be of interest to hear the authors view on the usability of Matrigel in the clinic and the scalability of this technology? 11. The method of creating the TEC and transplanting the islets is unclear and should be clarified, since the referenced papers do not. Are the islets inserted into the tube through the fat pad/ bone wax used to seal the tube? Does this require reopening of the surgical incision made to insert the silicone tube? 12. Histology: Please check if 5mm thick sections are correct. Also, please clarify the spatial origin of the tissue shown in Fig 2: is this from the periphery, the centre or the end of the tube? Is the vascularisation evenly distributed throughout the TEC? Please show HE stained sections from the tissue surrounding the TEC to support the statement that the silicone is well tolerated. Are the images in row 1, 2 and 3 in Fig 2 from the same/adjacent sections? 13. Fig 2. Please clarify if sham is control silicone tube with no Matrigel and no Heparin as in Fig 3. If it is inguinal adipose tissue with no tube, please show sections from the no Matrigel control. 14. The inner diameter of the silicone tube is said to be 3.7 mm. Please show histology of islets in the centre of the tube/tissue chamber.1.85 mm is a long diffusion distance for oxygen to reach the central tissue and may significantly impact the capacity of this technology by only allowing survival of islets in the periphery of the tube. 15. In the discussion, the paper mentions that grafts were removed if teratoma or malignant transformation was observed. From where did teratomas arise? Adult islets do not contain pluripotent cells. Does the Matrigel induce uncontrolled growth of the islets or native cells? Please discuss how this affects the safety and relevance of this model. 16. It would be of interest if the authors would discuss the scalability of this approach to clinically relevant numbers of islets (in the range of 400K-800K IEQs based on portal vein injections in 60-80 kg patients) 17. It is concerning, that only 5 animals are included in each group, and I am surprised to see so little variation, since there normally is significant variation among animals. Raw data should be reviewed. Statistical analysis of samples from 5 animals is not sufficiently robust to draw solid conclusions from. Has power analysis been performed? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-16218R1 A novel pre-vascularized tissue engineered chamber as a site for allogeneic and xenogeneic islet transplantation to establish a bioartificial pancreas PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All comments addressed. All comments addressed. All comments addressed. All comments addressed. All comments addressed. Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing previous comments. Regarding statistical analysis, the Authors argue to my previous comment 17 (group size too small) that the use of GraphPad Prism ensures scientific and reasonable data analysis. This is not a valid argument for defending a small group size. A power analysis supporting n=5 in the experimental groups should be shared, since this data is the backbone of the manuscript. Regarding the language, there are still numerous grammatical errors and unclear sentences throughout the manuscript. As an example, on p 17 top and mid: “This indicates that maintain euglycemia in recipient mice was dependent on the islets which transplanted into the TEC” “We could re-implanted xenogeneic islets to the mice which reversal of hyperglycemia had failed, and to explore whether could maintain euglycemia over the long-term following dual anti-CD45RB plus anti-MR-1 antibody treatment.” I do not feel obliged to provide an exhaustive list but urge the authors to critically and thoroughly revise the language throughout the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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A novel prevascularized tissue-engineered chamber as a site for allogeneic and xenogeneic islet transplantation to establish a bioartificial pancreas PONE-D-20-16218R2 Dear Dr. Zhao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Matthias G von Herrath, MD PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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