Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 17, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-04653 Effects of Grazing Intensity on Soil Water-stable Aggregates and Their Stability and Organic Carbon Fractions in an Alpine Swamp Meadow in the East Qinghai-Tibet Plateau PLOS ONE Dear Mr Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Should you decide to revise the paper, please be aware that a thorough revision of the whole manuscript is necessary, including English style. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 01 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In addition to this, there are many improvements in scientific style that must be made: - the discussion is too long and should be more focused; - there is almost no information about soil properties, such as pH, texture, classification… Differences in soil nature among points could influence the results - tables and figures need to be self-explicative; also, it is not clear in Figures 2-4 what is plotted as the SOC-LFOC-POC sections of the bars - the objective of the stepwise regression analysis performed is not clear [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The eastern part of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau is an ecologically fragile area, and it is also a main carrying area of China's alpine livestock industry. How to coordinate the relationship between the development of animal husbandry and ecological environment protection is the main problem facing sustainable development in this region. This article uses experimental research methods to study the changes in soil aggregates and organic carbon under different grazing intensities, and provides a valuable reference for the rational planning of grazing intensities in the alpine pastoral area of the eastern Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. At the same time, the experimental data and results in the paper are of reference value for similar research. However, the current MS focuses on too many parts which are not well connected, and the emphasis is not outstanding. Here are the detailed comments: 1. Title is too long and research is not focused enough. This study involves grazing intensity, biomass, soil water-stable aggregates, SOC, LFOC, POC, MWD, etc., but these aspects have not been well connected, making the focus of the paper ambiguous. I suggest shortening the title to focus on one scientific issue. 2. Above-ground and underground biomass were measured in the study, how does this part of the study support for the conclusions of the paper? If biomass study does not contribute much to the core content, it is recommended to delete it. 3. The conclusion section does not sufficiently summarize the content of the results and discussion. It is suggested to answer the three questions raised in the introduction according to the content of the research. 4. The keywords section should also include some key words not in the title. 5. The remote sensing image in Figure 1 should also include a scale bar. In the map of China in Figure 1, should there be a nine-segment line in the South China Sea? 6. Many important results in the paper are based on the statistics of the samples, such as Figure 2, 3, 4. The screening of outliers in sample data is very important for the robustness of the results. Similarly, when studying the relationship between MWD and SOC using statistical methods, it is also necessary to identify the possible error samples. 7. It is recommended to combine the three figures of Figure 2, 3, 4 into one large picture, which is also convenient for readers to compare. 8. The abbreviation mentioned for the first time in the body of MS (other than the abstract) should explain its meaning, such as SOC, LFOC, POC, etc. 9. How is SOC classified? LFOC should correspond to HFOC, POC should correspond to WSOC. 10. In Table 2, why there are two capital letters behind the statistics of above-ground biomass with grazing intensity of LG? 11. The formulas should be followed by serial numbers in the MS. 12. At the end of the MS, the future research trends should be prospected, and suggestions should be made for the coordinated development of animal husbandry and wetland swamp meadow ecosystems in the eastern Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. Reviewer #2: General comments: The manuscript provides very informative results on grazing Intensity on soil water-stable aggregates in in an Alpine Swamp Meadow in the East Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. However, the main weakness is the English style, which has to be changed in many places. Detailed Comments: Line 11-12: it is hard to understand Line 15:Something missing/unclear, NWD. Line 15-16: do you mean SOC and its fractions in bulk soil or aggregate? Line 16-17: I do not find mechanism study about soil aggregate formation in this study; you want to state that the percentage of larger aggregates under no grazing plots was more than …… As mentioned above, I tried to give many remark as possible; Editing by a native speaker would be highly recommended. So, I encourage the authors to improve the language and then to resubmit their work. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Effects of Grazing on The Allocation of Mass of soil Aggregates and Aggregate-associated Organic Carbon in an Alpine Meadow PONE-D-20-04653R1 Dear Dr. Wang, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Remigio Paradelo Núñez Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-20-04653R1 Effects of Grazing on The Allocation of Mass of soil Aggregates and Aggregate-associated Organic Carbon in an Alpine Meadow Dear Dr. Wang: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Remigio Paradelo Núñez Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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