Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 14, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-10675 Influence of perceived threat of Covid-19 and HEXACO personality traits on toilet paper stockpiling PLOS ONE Dear Mr. Toppe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 18 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I think this could be a useful reference, given the relevance for your work. Van Bavel, et al. (2020). Using social and behavioural science to support COVID-19 pandemic response. Nature Human Behaviour. Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements: 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.plosone.org/attachments/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.plosone.org/attachments/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 2. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the Methods section, please ensure that you have specified (1) whether consent was informed and (2) what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. 3. Please include additional information regarding the survey or questionnaire used in the study and ensure that you have provided sufficient details that others could replicate the analyses. For instance, if you developed a questionnaire as part of this study and it is not under a copyright license more restrictive than CC-BY, please include a copy, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study is pretty unique and relevant to understand hoarding behaviour during the COVID-19 pandemic. The manuscript reads well and the mechanisms suggested by the authors are well explained. There are some explanations that are worth including as the readers could learn more of the rich data the authors have collected. I hope the authors continue expanding this line of research in the near future. Data collection: 1. Authors are clear about the methods for data collection. 2. Authors are clear with how they collected their data. 3. Add in the sample description personality traits and threat variable. The authors have quite a rich data and the reader would be benefited from having summary statistics by countries if the number of observations allows it. If this is not possible, I suggest the authors to provide a comparison between Canada/USA vs Europe. Data analysis: 1. Good practice to test measurement invariance for each personality dimension for both German and English versions. 2. When modelling, the authors need to consider the differences across countries based on the exposure to the disease (distance between data collection and the first case reported in the country). This new variable can also facilitate the authors to explore to what extent “perceived threat” is correlated with the exposure of the disease in the country of residence. Lockdown is correlated with this variable, but it is not necessary controlling for the level of exposure to the disease, those countries that got exposed much later had the chance to learn from the ones initially exposed. This can also explain why Europe shopped more than North American residents as the level of uncertainty was higher. 3. Add models in the manuscript as this will ease the understanding of your results. In particular, make explicit in your models the reference categories when using interactions. When analysing interactions, explain the results based on your reference categories. 4. The relationship between threat/emotionality and toilet paper shopping is difficult to understand in Figure 1, see the dispersion of the points. What do they mean? Can the authors offer a different way to present these results? Are these bivariate regressions? 5. The authors need to consider per capita stock of toilet paper, instead of stock, as this considers the natural demand for toilet paper given the household size. In the manuscript, it is not clear whether the authors considers a per capita measure or not. 6. In 263-264 lines, do you mean participants who are more open to experiences stocked less toilet rolls than those who present lower level of openness? If so, rewrite this lines to make this point clearer. Further suggestions: 1. Can the authors provide an official reference for the content in line 41? 2. Despite the little variation of variables explained in lines 143-148, I recommend the authors to explain a bit more on which values/categories the data was concentrated the most. 3. Authors are finding associations, not impact or effects. The reviewer strongly recommends adjusting the language reflecting this (for instance, see lines 195 and 198). 4. Could the authors clarify whether those people who tend to stockpile as a result of the uncertainty of the consequences and causes of the disease can be considered selfish? If not, where would this explanation enter the reasons outlined in pg. 3. 5. Could the authors offer a brief discussion of what sort of framing governments could use when delivering messages to deter stockpiling during crisis? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Influence of perceived threat of Covid-19 and HEXACO personality traits on toilet paper stockpiling PONE-D-20-10675R1 Dear Dr. Toppe, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-10675R1 Influence of perceived threat of Covid-19 and HEXACO personality traits on toilet paper stockpiling Dear Dr. Toppe: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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