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PONE-D-20-00490 Associations between continuity of primary and specialty physician care and emergency department visits among community-dwelling older adults with complex care needs PLOS ONE Dear Mr. Jones, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This is a very interesting manuscript that addresses a relevant topic. Overall, the methods of the study are appropriate, the results are clearly presented and the discussion is well developed. However, there are some questions raised by the reviewers that should be responded. Besides, I observe other minor points to be clarified:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Continuity of care is a popular research topic. Literature has consistently shown that continuity of both primary care and specialty physician care improves health outcomes. Hence, what is the significance to exam it again on the same population which was emphasized on page 4 line 76. Please elaborate. Please also explain why you choose the emergency care as the only outcome in your study? Is it more relevant to your research population? or is there any other reasons? I think it would be easier to understand the advantage of your data profile by providing a flow chart that connects of all of your data sources and variables. (page 5 line 92) Measures I think it is reasonable to modify the original Bice-Boxerman score to make it more appropriate for measuring the long term continuity of care for patients with complex health specialty care needs. However, it is confusing for people who are not so familiar with the formula to comprehend the following two sentences (page 7 line 129- 131). It seems to contradict the earlier description (page 6 line 126- 127). I feel confuse and cannot make a logical connection with the following two paragraph Please provide more detail connection with that. Page 7 line 151-152 Please explain what does “time” mean. Is it a continuous variable or a dichotomous variable? If there were a couple times of emergency visits, how do you define the dependent variable? Page 12-13 line 215-218 The explanation of the line 215-218 is quite confusing and misleading. In the full model, “high vs. medium” continuity of primary care was associated with an HR of 0.96 (95% CI 0.94-0.97) compared to a HR of 0.95 (95% CI 0.93-0.97) for specialty care. Is “high vs. medium” a typo? I think it should be “medium vs. low” not “high vs. medium”. I believe the HR of 0.96 was estimated from the comparison of medium vs. low continuity of care groups instead of high vs. medium groups. Please clearly define the dependent variables of the model 1 and model 2. Does model 1 (primary care only model) only include patients who only see primary care physicians and never see specialty physicians? Or does it only include patients’ primary care visits and not their specialty care visits? In addition, I wonder why coefficients on the “count of physician specialties seen” variable were included in the model 1 (primary care only model). Please explain it. I cannot find fig.1. Line 226-228. The HR of high vs. low specialty care among 4+ specialties was 0.84 (0.81-0.86), while the HRs for patients who saw 3 specialties was 0.90 (0.87-0.93) and 2 specialties was 0.89 (0.86-0.92). Please indicate all the data shown in this sentence to the table. I cannot find those data on table 3. Page 14 Table 4 Please explain why there are empty coefficients in table 4. For example, there are no coefficients on the interaction variable of “Continuity of primary care * Count of chronic conditions” in model 1. Please also explain why there are coefficients on the interaction term of Continuity of primary care * Count of chronic conditions in model 2 which suppose Specialty care only. Reviewer #2: This is a study that examined the association between continuity of care and emergency visits. Overall, this is a well-conducted study, in a large, representative and well-characterized sample. The analyses have also been properly conducted. The findings will have high relevance to clinicians and policy-makers, as it will impact on how we structure our healthcare services, especially with regards to continuity of care. I have several key concerns, that if addressed, I believe will greatly strengthen the manuscript and make the findings more convincing: 1) Methods: It will be good if the authors can show a timeline (in figure form) of which variable is captured at which time, paying particular attention to the time of baseline data & covariates, time of assessment for continuity, and time of outcome assessment. 2) Emergency Department Visits (page 7, line 150): It is unclear why the authors decided to only followup the patients for 6 months, considering that this is a rich dataset which could have provided much more information on the Emergency visits between 2016 to present. I will strongly suggest that the authors extend the followup period to longer than 6 months, and if possible, to the present time. This will improve the power in detecting meaningful interaction effects, which is also a key question of this manuscript. 3) Covariates (page 8, line 162): It is unclear how the authors decided on the specific chronic conditions. Also, why not based on established lists such as the Charlson Comorbidity Index? 4) Results (page 9, line 194): How was Mild cognitive impairment and activities of daily living (ADL) assessed? These information should be available in the Methods section. In addition, I also strongly suggest considering the interaction effects with cognitive impairment as well as with ADL. Apart from number of chronic diseases and number of specialists, cognitive impairment and ADL are also relevant interaction effects that reader will be interested in (especially considering how common they are in this sample, as well as in routine practices). 5) Discussion (page 16, line 277): it may be difficult to conclude on "no meaningful modification", until and unless we can satisfy that there has been sufficient power to do so (cf. point 2 above). 6) Figure 1: It is not clear what is meant by "High v. Med" and "High v. Low". I also wonder why the reference point became "High" in this figure, whereas the reference point was "Low" in the tables. I suggest only showing in the figure the significant interaction effects. For the non-significant ones, probably just mention them (together with the p values) in the text itself. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Associations between continuity of primary and specialty physician care and use of hospital-based care among community-dwelling older adults with complex care needs PONE-D-20-00490R1 Dear Dr. Jones, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. 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Orueta, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments : My personal opinion is that the authors have greatly improved the manuscript and produced a notable paper. I would like to congratulate them for their excellent work Otherwise, I have spotted two typos. Please correct them: • In Abstract: Line#41 the HR for hospital admission should be “HR=0.94 (0.92-0.96)” (instead of “HR=0.94 (0.82-0.96)”) • In Figure 2: The value for Primary Care, All patients (the first row) should be “0.90 (0.89-0.92)” (instead of “0.96 (0.94-0.97)”) Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have responded appropriately to my review comments and made the revision more than I expected. I have no further questions. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Hui-Chu Lang, Ph.D. |
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PONE-D-20-00490R1 Associations between continuity of primary and specialty physician care and use of hospital-based care among community-dwelling older adults with complex care needs Dear Dr. Jones: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Juan F. Orueta Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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