Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 11, 2019 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-19-33902 Communicative competence in assessment for learning: effect of the application of a model on teachers in Spain PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Torres-Gordillo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Athough the topic is interesting, changes are mainly required in the delivery of the content, the introduction and the methods sections, as per reviewers comments. Given the qualitative nature of the study, the accuracy of language and content is deemed significant. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 29 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Vasileios Stavropoulos Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 2. We suggest you thoroughly copyedit your manuscript for language usage, spelling, and grammar. If you do not know anyone who can help you do this, you may wish to consider employing a professional scientific editing service. Whilst you may use any professional scientific editing service of your choice, PLOS has partnered with both American Journal Experts (AJE) and Editage to provide discounted services to PLOS authors. Both organizations have experience helping authors meet PLOS guidelines and can provide language editing, translation, manuscript formatting, and figure formatting to ensure your manuscript meets our submission guidelines. To take advantage of our partnership with AJE, visit the AJE website (http://learn.aje.com/plos/) for a 15% discount off AJE services. To take advantage of our partnership with Editage, visit the Editage website (www.editage.com) and enter referral code PLOSEDIT for a 15% discount off Editage services. If the PLOS editorial team finds any language issues in text that either AJE or Editage has edited, the service provider will re-edit the text for free. Upon resubmission, please provide the following:
3. PLOS ONE will consider submissions that present new methods, software, or databases as the primary focus of the manuscript if they meet the criteria of utility, validation, and availability described here: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-methods-software-databases-and-tools. To meet these criteria, please provide supporting materials enabling other teachers and researchers to replicate your teaching intervention such as sample worksheets, a detailed lesson plan or curriculum or other educational materials. If you include supporting materials, they should not be under a copyright more restrictive than CC-BY. 4. Please state specifically whether the IRB approved the study. 5. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified (1) whether consent was informed and (2) what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information. Please provide a copy of the topic guide as Supplementary Information as well as English translations of the screenshots and provided materials. 6. We note that Figures 1 and 2 in your submission contain copyrighted images. All PLOS content is published under the Creative Commons Attribution License (CC BY 4.0), which means that the manuscript, images, and Supporting Information files will be freely available online, and any third party is permitted to access, download, copy, distribute, and use these materials in any way, even commercially, with proper attribution. For more information, see our copyright guidelines: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/licenses-and-copyright. We require you to either (1) present written permission from the copyright holder to publish these figures specifically under the CC BY 4.0 license, or (2) remove the figures from your submission: 1. You may seek permission from the original copyright holder of Figures 1 and 2 to publish the content specifically under the CC BY 4.0 license. We recommend that you contact the original copyright holder with the Content Permission Form (http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=7c09/content-permission-form.pdf) and the following text: “I request permission for the open-access journal PLOS ONE to publish XXX under the Creative Commons Attribution License (CCAL) CC BY 4.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/). Please be aware that this license allows unrestricted use and distribution, even commercially, by third parties. Please reply and provide explicit written permission to publish XXX under a CC BY license and complete the attached form.” Please upload the completed Content Permission Form or other proof of granted permissions as an "Other" file with your submission. In the figure caption of the copyrighted figure, please include the following text: “Reprinted from [ref] under a CC BY license, with permission from [name of publisher], original copyright [original copyright year].” 2. If you are unable to obtain permission from the original copyright holder to publish these figures under the CC BY 4.0 license or if the copyright holder’s requirements are incompatible with the CC BY 4.0 license, please either i) remove the figure or ii) supply a replacement figure that complies with the CC BY 4.0 license. Please check copyright information on all replacement figures and update the figure caption with source information. If applicable, please specify in the figure caption text when a figure is similar but not identical to the original image and is therefore for illustrative purposes only. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors of this paper sought to establish a framework for communicative competence (CC) assessment in Spanish classrooms and establish the acceptability of using a tablet-based tool for this assessment. The qualitative methods were appropriate and the authors summarise many useful themes that will be helpful in furthering the design and implementation of their tool and program. However, this manuscript was challenging to read in parts and could benefit from considering the following suggestions for improvement: * The manuscript requires English editing to improve the clarity. For example the authors state, “This leads is to go deeply into the link…” but it is not clear which linked concepts are being explored. I assume they mean the link between CC in the curriculum and accountability in teaching programs? Phrases such as “Future research projects will have to set out from the rhythms of learning of the teachers themselves when implementing improvements in the evaluation of the key competences” do not quite make sense i.e. it is not clear to an English speaker what “rhythms of learning” means. * One focus of English editing should be more consistent use of tense. It is not always clear if the authors are describing something that was done or found in their study (past tense) or something that currently occurs in classrooms (present tense). * The rationale of the study is not clear from the first two paragraphs. The authors clarify this somewhat later, however this rationale should be clear from the beginning of the paper, as should clear definitions of key concepts, particularly CC. * It is not clear why the learning assessment framework is being introduced where is appears, or what its role is. Is this an established framework for integrating CC into curriculums? Or is this a framework the authors proposed might be useful for achieving this? * The definition of Learning assessment is circular and should be expanded upon. * It is not clear to a reader not familiar with this area what the term “Denomination” refers to specifically in this context. Please clarify this. * I’m not sure what the source “own elaboration” for Table 1 refers to? * More detail is required regarding how the themes were established and categorised. What established thematic framework was used? Who specifically were the raters? How were disagreements addressed? Who synthesised and summarised the data once it was categorised? * I am not clear what “ad hoc designed computer application” means. Custom-designed? Reviewer #2: Overall, this is an interesting and worthwhile area of research, with implications for improving assessment of primary school students. Further review of the paper by the authors is recommended prior to publication, to ensure that all important terms are clearly explained, the rationale for the research is more clearly outlined at the outset, the methodology is clearly linked to the data analysis, and both aims are clearly defined. Please note that the "no" comment to the manuscript being presented in an intelligible fashion is referring to the clarity of writing overall. There are many strong aspects to this paper, but also important areas that could be written more clearly. Please see below for comments about each section of the paper. Introduction The Introduction could be clearer in providing an orientation to the topic and key questions to be addressed. It mentions PIRLS without explaining this, and while this might be common knowledge for those working in education, some brief explanation of PIRLS would be helpful for other readers. Furthermore, it is not quite clear what is being said in regard to improvements or changes in primary school students – when saying, “The results of the improvement in reading of Spanish students in Primary Education (hereafter, PE) present a slight improvement on the PIRLS assessment (2006; 2011; 2016)”, it is not clear what improvements are being discussed, what is meant by a “slight improvement”, and over what time period this is being mentioned (i.e. is it since the last PIRLS assessment?). This slight improvement appears to be discussed as an area of concern, but again, it is unclear why this is of concern, so more background and context here would be helpful. There is good discussion of what is meant by Communicative Competence; however, it would be helpful to more clearly outline earlier what was meant by the results of CC not being what was expected, so as to clarify how they were not what was expected. Aims Generally clear, but Aim 1 could be more specific – given you are discussing PE teachers, it would be good to specify here whether the CC assessment model was based on PE curriculum development. Method In this section, please briefly clarify why a multiple case study design has been chosen as the methodological framework, so there is a sound rationale for this. More detail is needed here to conform to the Consolidated criteria for reporting qualitative studies (COREQ): 32-item checklist, in all domains listed in that checklist. Please review this checklist and add in missing information. While it appears that participants were teachers rather than students, students are mentioned as if they are part of the sample. It is important to clarify whether they were participants, and if so, what procedures were used for informed consent. Results As with the Method, this does not conform to all domains of the COREQ, so further review of these is recommended. The chosen methodology is a multiple case study design; however, the results do not appear to be written in this manner. You may wish to either reconsider whether the multiple case study approach is appropriate (I would suggest it is not, given it typically involves multiple sources of information for each case), and rewrite this section with a different methodology as appropriate. Discussion Generally clear, with the second aim of the study being discussed well. Writing more clearly about the first aim of the study would be helpful here – it is discussed, but could be clearer. Limitations Good discussion of limitations, such as potential lack of digital competence within teachers, which is an important area for further education and research. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Alana Howells [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Communicative competence assessment for learning: the effect of the application of a model on teachers in Spain PONE-D-19-33902R1 Dear Dr. Torres-Gordillo, We are pleased to inform you that based on the two reviewers recommendations your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Vasileios Stavropoulos Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Great work on improving this paper. It is now much clearer and straightforward. You have addressed all the issues appropriately. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Alana Howells |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-19-33902R1 Communicative competence assessment for learning: the effect of the application of a model on teachers in Spain Dear Dr. Torres-Gordillo: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Vasileios Stavropoulos Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .