Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-13089 Modelling the developmental spliceosomal craniofacial disorder Burn-McKeown syndrome using induced pluripotent stem cells PLOS ONE Dear Raymond, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. As you will see, both reviewers were generally very positive and they both agreed that the manuscript would be suitable for publication after Minor Revisions. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 05 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manucript, carefully prepared by Wood et al., the authors describe their experimental approach to establishing the link between congenital mutations of TXNL4A (a compoent of core spliceosomal subunit U5 snRNP) and the predominant craniofacial phenotype of the stemming Burn‑McKeown syndrome. The team has prepared induced pluripotent stem cells (iPSCs) of the patient's, patient mother's and unrelated controls' PBMCs and induced its differentiation into neural crest cells (iNCCs). Upon this induction, the authors observed slower proliferation and partly defective differentiation of the patient's iPSCs compared to mother and controls, but not any difference in apoptosis. In both cell types (iPSCs and iNCCs) the authors obseved differential expression and splicing when comparing patient and controls (including mother), both of which were more pronounced in the iNCCs. The differentially expressed and spliced genes were enriched in pathways and processes connected to NCC differentiation and function, e.g. the EMT, which is a substantial part of the NCC differentiation. Finally, the authors characterized the subset of exons that were differentially skipped in the patient iNCCs compared to controls and observed some conserved properties among these exons in terms of their length, length of theis surrounding introns, etc. The manuscript is clearly and rigorously written. The methods and experiements are described into sufficient detail, the discussion is a little bit longish but comprehensible and logically evolving. The experiments seem to be rigorously contucted and analysed, well corroborating the findings. I have only minor comments that can be found below. Minor comments: page 18: „Unlike all other patients with BMKS described to date, the patient displays developmental delay and severe intellectual disability; however, whole exome sequencing has not revealed any genetic variants that could account for this significant cognitive impairment.“ Was the patient tested for structural variants? In any case, the possibility of a structural variant underlying the cognitive imapairment ought to be mentioned. The text is sometimes a little bit longish. There are a few passages that describe numbers that can be easily observed from a table or a figure, e.g. at page 31, lines 681-684. Lines 922-923: „However, we did not observe any global changes in splicing factor expression in our BMKS iNCCs.“ As I understand it, the authors did not observe any significant changes in the level of splicing factors expression (except of TXNL4A). However, potentially even splicing changes between patient and controls in a splicing regulator that could be NCC-specific or just important for EMT might be of high relevance, possibly explaining the differences in mis-splicing between iPSCs and iNCC, at least in part. Did the authors observe the results in that way? Line 566: one of the control iPCS lines is depicted here as „SW71A“ but as SW171A elsewhere. I guess this is a typing error. Lines 667-669: „For these genes which were not expressed in either the iPSCs or the iNCCs, it was unclear whether, if the gene had been expressed in both iPSCs and iNCCs, it would have been differentially spliced in both cell types.“ In fact, I do not understand why you mention that. It seems very logic and clear to me, but I see not point in particular commenting that. Line 747-748: typping error: „S6 Fig.“ (reverse words order than usually used in the manuscript). Line 916: one of the „mis-expressed“ words should be replaced by „mis-spliced“ I guess. Reviewer #2: Wood and colleagues study a rare craniofacial developmental disorder, the Burn-McKeown syndrome, caused by the 34 base pair deletion in the promoter region of one allele of TXNL4A gene, combined with a loss-of-function variant on the other allele, resulting in reduced TXNL4A expression. TXNL4A gene encodes a component of the U5 snRNP, one of the core components of the spliceosome. The authors hypothesize that the TXNL4A mutations observed in BMKS patients can cause reduced assembly of the human tri-snRNP, thus affecting the splicing of a specific subset of pre-mRNAs. To test this hypothesis, they generate induced pluripotent stem cell (iPSC) lines from a patient with BMKS and her unaffected carrier mother, and from unrelated, unaffected individuals, and characterize the developed models for proliferation, differentiation and gene expression. RNA-Seq analysis revealed transcriptome-wide mis-expression and mis-splicing, in particular aberrant exon skipping, affecting distinct subsets of pre-mRNAs, with an enrichment for genes involved in processes important in NCC specification, highlighting a decreased response to the WNT signaling. Overall, the experiments are well conducted and the obtained results could be relevant for the potential advances in the rare BMKS disease. However, the manuscript is quite dispersive in the current form and too long; it would benefit of a general shortening, especially in the introduction and discussion sections. Therapeutic potential of the developed findings should be discussed. A few clarifications and key control experiments are nonetheless required: 1. The experiments in Figure 3A need to be quantified in some way. Ideally, the authors should perform a morphological analysis by using specific markers of differentiation. Quantification of their signals should be performed. 2. The GO analyses are not convincing and could be ameliorated by changing the selected parameters, including the EASE score and the graphical representation. In particular, in figure 4A and 4B it seems that each GO term displays the same fold enrichment. P value for each GO term should be added. 3. Validation of GE changes were performed using the patient sample and the pooled control. Validations should also be performed by taking separately samples from mother and unrelated control. Minor points: Figure 1A – Western blot analysis to show and quantify TXNL4A protein expression in the derived iPSCs should be performed. In the figure legend please specify that the qPCR analysis is performed to monitor TXNL4A expression. Table S3, S6, S7 and S10: It would be suitable to represent the results of the Ingenuity Pathway Analyses by using charts and cluster dendrograms or pathway graphs. Table 2 and Table 3 could be represented with graphs or pie charts. ********** 6. 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Modelling the developmental spliceosomal craniofacial disorder Burn-McKeown syndrome using induced pluripotent stem cells PONE-D-20-13089R1 Dear Raymond, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Emanuele Buratti, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors addressed all my comments to my full satisfaction. The manuscript is ready for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Lucie Grodecká Reviewer #2: No |
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