Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 1, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-33285 Evaluation of infrared thermography to measure the autonomic nervous response in sheep PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sutherland, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You will find detailed comments from the two independent reviewers below. Please take them into consideration when revising the paper. I would like to draw special attention to the detailed comments by Reviewer 1. In addition, based on my own reading of the manuscript, I ask that you revise the discussion so that it focuses primarily on the results of your study and how they relate to what has been published previously. As both reviewers point out, there is presently too much overlap with the literature review in the introduction section, and parts of the discussion are not well linked to your own results. A minor detail Lines 73-74 I think you intend to say "Moreover, eye temperature has commonly been measured in many species because this area is not affected by the presence of hair" We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 26 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Competing interests can arise in relationship to an organization or another person. Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting paper investigating changes in eye region temperature as captured with IRT. The work is sound and adds to the growing literature on the potential value of surface temperature measures in stress assessment. However the authors must provide a stronger justification for the use of an epinephrine infusion rather than a relevant stressor. I also have various questions about methodology. In particular I would like reassurance on the effectiveness of habituation and a better description of the experimental procedure with regard to other possible sources of stress. Introduction The relevant literature is nicely reviewed, but I expect a stronger explanation for the rationale of using epinephrine infusion rather than a biologically relevant acute stressor. Almost all other studies in this field have used relevant stressful events to examine surface temperature responses – why was this approach not taken? I suspect there was some activation of stress due to experimental procedures in any case (see comments below) but this was not the aim. Methods The experimental procedures are not at clear in several places and more detail is needed. Specifically: What handling was required to administer the treatments and collect blood samples? What evidence (behavioural, HR, hormonal?) was there that habitation to handling and restraint was effective prior to the experiment starting? Otherwise possible influences on the stress response must be expected and fully discussed. The total duration of thermal recording is not provided – was this as for blood sampling or for longer? Where were the animals during this time? Were they restrained? How was distance from the camera managed if the animals were not restrained? The description ‘camera positioned at a distance of approximately 1 m’ is problematic, as even small distance changes can affect accuracy – what was the range? The IRT variable might be more accurately referred to as ‘eye region temperature’ since structures other than the eye itself were included. Again what evidence is there that habituation to wearing HR monitors was successful? What was the duration of habituation? I ask these questions because for a study on acute stress it is crucial to know to what extent the experimental procedure affected the phenomenon under study. Movie – this is useful but consider rescaling the temperature bar to the right – areas around the eye appear as white which is not in the calibration bar (presumably in excess of 38 degrees C). Results A mixture of P= and P< is reported – suggest consistency with P= except for P<0.001. This applies to the abstract as well. Why are there so few sampling points for cortisol? These are so few as to be rather uninformative. The upward trajectory of the epinephrine treatment line suggests that further increase was possible, particularly given the fact that 15 mins is quite a short timescale for a cortisol response – this should be acknowledged. Given that eye region temperature change is the focus of the paper, it would be good to see some more detailed data rather than a single figure. At least provide mean and SD temperature increase and range – this would allow more ready comparison with other work. Currently this information is difficult/impossible to glean accurately from the figure. Can the authors report which region of the eye was usually the position of their maximum temperature recording? This may be relevant to interpretation (see below). Discussion In the discussion of why some studies show eye temp increases in response to stress while others show decreases, the authors mention differences in timing of recoding (which is fair enough and it is true that the initial drop can be very rapid and so missed) but it is also important to mention that different studies use different definitions of ‘eye’ when reporting temperature change, such that some are imaging the cornea, while others are imaging the whole eye region (and taking maximums from various sub regions thereof). These tissues differ markedly in various characteristics including peripheral circulation and its control by the ANS – this should be reflected in the authors discussion. The authors notice that body surface areas other than the eye may reveal SIH – but say this is beyond the scope of the current study. Fair enough, but this seems a shame since at least one ear seems to be visible at all times in the movie and surface temperature analysis would be feasible. The authors conclude that the HPA axis was not stimulated, but based on the figure I think care should be taken here – see comment above that the upward trajectory of the epinephrine treatment line suggests that further increase was possible. It should be acknowledged that 15 mins is a short timescale for a cortisol response which may well have continued/appeared beyond this time. Lines 345-362 – many relevant factors for effective IRT data collection are discussed, but without adequate reference to the current study – do any of these limitations apply or if not how were they overcome and how do we know that? As it is it is rather generic and does not add much to the discussion. Conclusion Suggest rewording to “Changes in HRV and eye temperature in response to an epinephrine infusion suggests that, in sheep, HRV is a more sensitive non-invasive method than IRT to measure ANS activity (as induced by epinephrine infusion).” – since we don’t know if the same results would have been seen had a biologically relevant acute stressor been applied. This point should also be indicated in the abstract. Reviewer #2: This manuscript approaches an interesting scientific question to the assessment of autonomic nervous response with non-invasive methods. Considering the conclusion “These results suggest that heart rate variability is a sensitive, non-invasive method that can be used to measure ANS activity in sheep, whereas change in eye temperature measured using IRT is a less sensitive method”, authors may consider a change in focus, starting from the title, and put more emphasis to heart rate variability throughout the paper. If temperature remains as part of the title and the objective, authors should give its numerical values in the abstract and in the results section in a more explicit manner. It is important to improve the introduction, to better present to readers the relevance of this work. Please provide an explicit and complete statement of the objective of the work in the end of the introduction. There is excessive repetition of text between introduction and discussion. A major issue with the manuscript is the ambiguity on the effects of treatment on eye temperature, as detailed below. If authors have the thermographic images of the head, they could verify the hypothesis they bring that other regions, such as ears, may be more responsive in terms of superficial temperature. Additionally, the discussion needs considerable improvement through a more extensive review of the literature and increased complexity. Specific Comments L81: Please refine link to previous paragraph, which presented a list of stressful situations. L83: Please explain kind of noxious stimulus and animal species involved, to improve the flow of reading. L219-220: what are the numeric values? L245, 257: Do you mean “affected”? L304-305: Do you have the data on temperature on other body regions? It could significantly improve this manuscript. L274: Was it only a tendency for temperature increase in this study? But how come in the abstract it is stated that there was a difference (P<0.05, L31-32)? Then again in the conclusion it is understandable in the first phrase that there were changes in the eye temperature (L364). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Evaluation of infrared thermography as a non-invasive method of measuring the autonomic nervous response in sheep PONE-D-19-33285R1 Dear Dr. Sutherland, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, I Anna S Olsson, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-33285R1 Evaluation of infrared thermography as a non-invasive method of measuring the autonomic nervous response in sheep Dear Dr. Sutherland: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr I Anna S Olsson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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