Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 29, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-31941 Acceptability and usability of a mobile application for management and surveillance of vector-borne diseases in Colombia: An implementation study PLOS ONE Dear Dr Rodriguez, Thank you very much for submitting your manuscript "Acceptability and usability of a mobile application for management and surveillance of vector-borne diseases in Colombia: An implementation study" (#PONE-D-19-31941) for review by PLOS ONE. As with all papers submitted to the journal, your manuscript was fully evaluated by academic editor (myself) and by independent peer reviewers. The reviewers appreciated the attention to an important health topic, but they raised substantial concerns about the paper that must be addressed before this manuscript can be accurately assessed for meeting the PLOS ONE criteria. Therefore, if you feel these issues can be adequately addressed, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We can’t, of course, promise publication at that time. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 17 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present the results of a pilot acceptability and usability mobile application to help GPs with diagnosing arbovirus and leptospirosis (although it is ignored in most of the text which is centered on arboviruses), and allow them to report cases directly for surveillance purposes. The paper is well written, and I found the mhealth application interesting, useful and well-though. However, the study presented here is very limited, biased and, although it is a good first step, the study needs to be expanded in order to warrant a manuscript rather than a short communication. I would suggest expanding the study to other settings and the sample size. In the introduction, the authors need to introduce why FeverDX is particularly suitable to improve the adherence to CPGs and surveillance, who is it designed for and how are mhealth tools particularly suitable (something novel is not necessarily better). Some of this information is already in the discussion, but I think it would help construct the argument better if placed in the introduction (for example, lines 208-215 and lines 216-219). Moreover, the whole argument is centered around that performance evaluations have not been performed for mhealth interventions (lines 69-70), which is not entirely true. There is a whole body of literature that does exactly that, and although not all mhealth tools are validated, there are performance evaluations. The reference provided for that claim, does not support it exactly. In Methods, I would suggest making the first paragraph describing the mobile app clearer. As I continued reading, I understood the app but it is very confusing at the beginning. I would make Fig 2, Fig 1 instead. However, I am most worried about the usability evaluation. Did it happen during the training session, after the simulated emergency consultation? Or some time after? Did the authors measure actual engagement after the training session? I worry that the high scores are influenced by courtesy bias, apart from the selection bias already mentioned by the authors. Besides, the sample size is too small to even speculate about the external validity of the results. In the results: How was CPG knowledge measure? In lines 164-165 the authors mention that the majority of the GPs agreed that the app matched the CGP information, but in the previous sentence that almost half actually read them… so that could be also indicating courtesy bias? In the discussion, the first sentence speaks about the novelty of the study but uses a very restrictive situation so, yes it is novel for that… Also, I do agree that more usability and feasibility studies are needed for mhealth but is this study enough to state this? Is a one-time (not longitudinal) and with a very small sample. This limits the interpretation of the results and I worry about speculations as the one presented in lines 205-207. In lines 219, the authors may have omitted other apps. Of the top of my head I can think of Kidenga, for example. What are the other 26 apps relevant to surveillance referring to? Lines 236-237 seem to talk about the general public but this app is not intended for that. Minor: Lines 145-147: it is not very clear how the evaluation form was given in this sentence and Table 1 is presented in Results. I would suggest including the evaluation form as supp. material and improve this sentence. Lines 150-151: I assume that the authors referred to median and IQR as is stated in the following paragraph. Line 183: “as (un)acceptable”? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-19-31941R1 Acceptability and usability of a mobile application for management and surveillance of vector-borne diseases in Colombia: An implementation study PLOS ONE Dear Dr Rodriguez, Thank you very much for submitting your manuscript "Acceptability and usability of a mobile application for management and surveillance of vector-borne diseases in Colombia: An implementation study" (#PONE-D-19-31941R1) for review by PLOS ONE. As with all papers submitted to the journal, your manuscript was fully evaluated by academic editor (myself) and by independent peer reviewers. The reviewers appreciated the attention to an important health topic, but they raised substantial concerns about the paper that must be addressed before this manuscript can be accurately assessed for meeting the PLOS ONE criteria. Therefore, if you feel these issues can be adequately addressed, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We can’t, of course, promise publication at that time. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 02 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Abdallah M. Samy, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have responded to my concerns in a satisfactory way and although my concerns about bias and external validity remains, they have been able to make those limitations more explicit. They have greatly improved the manuscript, although minor changes need to be addressed before I can recommend it for publication. Abstract 1- In the background it says: “A large number of mHealth tools are available; however, very few have been evaluated regarding usability and acceptability.” This is not appropriate as discussed in the previous review and addressed in the reviewer’s comments. Look at the second paragraph of your introduction and use that argument. Why mhealth can help address the problem. 2- In the results is says “Seventy-five percent of the evaluators reported being aware of the Colombian Ministry of Health’s guidelines.” This is not in the results though, either include in the results or only indicate that less than half had comprehensive knowledge (see comments on the CPG knowledge section of results). 3- In the conclusion it says “Despite a large number of mHealth tools available, the literature lacks evaluated and evidence-based mobile technology.” This is not completely true as described previously. The new discussion section address this pretty well, so you need to revisit that argument here and match the discussion. 4- Conclusions section is too general, you need to answer why FeverDx could help advance or improve practice based on the results of the pilot study. Also briefly mention the limitations (e.g., although it was a pilot study with a small sample size, FeverDx…) Introduction 5- Where it says “…time and ease of use, access to content and particularly in a critical step of the reporting process of mandatory notifiable diseases.” Change for “…time and ease of use, and access to content in a critical step of the reporting process of mandatory notifiable diseases.” 6- Where it says “This particular feature, we hypothesize that could potentially improve the currently manual registration and report process, mostly using physical resources (paper forms, physical files)[10].” Which feature are you referring to? Maybe rephrase it as: “We hypothesize that these features (ease of use and rapid access to content) can potentially…” 7- Where it says “There are a recently increasing supply and demand of mobile applications development in the healthcare area”. Change for “Supply and demand of mobile applications development in the healthcare area have been recently increasing.” 8- Where it says “This study evaluates the usability and acceptability of FeverDx…” Briefly mention who valuated it and where. Use the first sentence from Methods. Methods 9- Where it says “Moreover, an infectious disease specialist reviewed the included recommendations.” Moreover can and should be removed. 10- Where it says “Obtained data from registration, evaluation and reporting is storage” Change storage for stored. 11- The following phrase is confusing: “The evaluation form comprises a 25 item measure that includes four objective quality - information quality, engagement, functionality, aesthetics, and two subjective subscales-quality and impact.” All items are subjective in the strict sense, based on the S1 File provided, I would recommend that you rephrase it as: “The evaluation form comprises 25 questions measuring quantity and quality of information (Section A), engagement (Section B), functionality (Section C), aesthetics (Section D), impact of patient management from the practitioner perspective (Section E) and acceptability by health practitioners (Section F) (S1 file).” 12- Where it says “The evaluation test is scored by determining the mean scores of the app quality subscales and the total mean score.” You should rephrase it as: “A global score was obtained for the evaluation form test by determining the median scores of each subsection.” 13- S1 file: I suggest some changes: Seccion E: the brief description is the same as Seccion D. This section measures impact on patient management from the practitioner perspective. Seccion F: This section measures acceptability of users. Include this in the description. Results 14- In the CPG knowledge section, to improve readability, I suggest rephrasing the whole section as: “The proportion of GPs with comprehensive knowledge of the Colombian’s CPG for diagnosis and management of arboviruses (dengue, chikungunya, and Zika) was less than half of GPs evaluated (9/20) and less than one third of them applied them in their practice (6/20). Of those GPs who reported having comprehensive knowledge of CPG, more than half (5/9) wholly agreed and, 4/9 partially agreed that the application information matched with CPG information.” 15- Table 1: change subjective assessment of quality by acceptability 16- Where it says “Regarding the "interest generated by the application" item, GPs scored a median of 5 (IQR=4-4.5).”, which section is this in the table? Be consistent with names. Also the median doesn’t match the IQR, check that. 17- Where it says “Moreover, all the GPs recommended the app”, change it for “Moreover, all the GPs would recommend the app” Discussion 18- Where it says “Mobile applications designed for epidemiological surveillance of arboviruses are scope limited”, rephrase it as: “Mobile applications designed for epidemiological surveillance of arboviruses are limited in their scope” 19- Where it says ”On the one hand, a study conducted in 2018”, “On the one hand” is not appropriate. You should remove it. 20- Where it says “...that aimed case reporting and outbreaks..”, change for aimed at case… 21- Where it says “…some limited by country, the language with narrow applicability…” Do you mean that the language limited their applicability because they were mostly in English? Were they designed to be used by English-speaking users or in developed countries? Making that more explicit will help your argument. 22- Where it says “However its implementation in clinical scenarios is scarce”, do you mean they are not designed to be used by GPs in clinical scenarios? Rephrase accordingly. 23- Where it says “A striking find was”, change for “A striking finding was” 24- This phrase “…although the majority of the GPs agreed that the application content was according to management guidelines.” is not necessary here and interrupts the flow. Moreover, using although implies that is in contrast with the previous statement which is not. I would remove this phrase altogether. Limitations 25- Consider including a statement about their applicability mostly restricted to Colombia, given the country specific CPG and surveillance systems. Reviewer #2: Even though the article is clear and the mobile app is interesting the findings does not correspond to an orignial article, it is more suitable for a short communication. Abstract: in methods I would add the grade scale of uMARS, if not results are not understandable without reading the full article. Introduction: it is not clear which is the potential impact of the using of the app among GP. Line 67, this paragraph should be at the end of the introduction or even in methods. Methods: Fig2, when referring to alarm signs that includes all dengue warning signs? if so it should be stated. Results: CPR knowledge prior of after using the app? It is not clear if the app was used in clinical context, with how many patients, if it was useful for the final diagnosis. Discussion: there is no future plans for further research or for the app. General thoughts: First of all, it could be missleading using an app for fever which do not discriminate malaria or bacterial infections at the begining. An algorithm of fever in the tropics should rule out the most dangerous causes first, and if it is not a malaria zone it should be stated; nevertheless bacterial infections are distributed worlwide. Although the info about this app should be shared with the community little information could be extracted from this article. I would suggest to compare two GP groups, one using the app and the other not using it and seeing the differences; but the most important thing is that the app is not validated with confirmed cases, apparently the purpose of the app is only to apply the guidelines, if it is so it should be explained. Could be much more interesting if this app can be used by health care workers who not are doctors. Maybe the app should focuse more in epidemiological vigilance. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-19-31941R2 Acceptability and usability of a mobile application for management and surveillance of vector-borne diseases in Colombia: An implementation study Dear Dr. Rodríguez: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Abdallah M. Samy Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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