Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJanuary 23, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-02104 Breeding practices and trait preferences of smallholder farmers for indigenous sheep in the northwest highlands of Ethiopia: Inputs to design a breeding program PLOS ONE Dear Dr Abebe Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Many thanks for submitting your manuscript to PLOS One It was reviewed by two expert reviewers who have recommended some minor revisions be made prior to its publication If you could address the reviewers comments and write a response to reviewers, this will expedite second review I wish you the best of luck with your revisions Many thanks Simon We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 09 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript aimed identifying breeding practices and smallholder farmers’ trait preferences for indigenous sheep in Ethiopia. This kind of study is important since smallholder practices of animal breeding requires different approaches and information are scarce in the literature. The manuscript are well written, but some points need better understanding (attached I provide some comments in the own text). The discussion needs more attention since repeat several times the results. I suggest review it. Reviewer #2: The manuscript was well-written. Topic is very unique. I suggest to publish the manusript after minor revision. Introduction -I would suggest shortening the introduction in term of general context, and including more information about Breeding practices and breeding program for indigenous sheep in Ethiopia. - I would suggest describing what kind of research work/studies has been done with various; methodological approaches are available to identify breeding objective traits in sheep in Ethiopia. Materials and methods - The survey area: It is good to have the map but also add some statistics. How many square miles, relative size to the whole of Ethiopia, what is the population of people, livestock species in the region of study versus the whole country etc. - How were the sampled villages/ districts chosen? Give more details. What information was there before hand? -The quality of Figure 2 is not good. Moreover, for the method choice scenario, it is advisable to use 2 choice scenarios and a third scenario called "no choice". How can you further explain your approach and justify its limitations? -Explain further, how you conducted your focus group discussions. -You can use the articles below to enrich the Materials & Methods section and the discussion section: 1. Traoré, B., Govoeyi, B., Hamadou, I. et al. Analysis of preferences of agro-pastoralists for the attributes of traction dromedaries in harness cultivation: A case study of the Koro district of Mali. Pastoralism 9, 19 (2019). https://doi.org/10.1186/s13570-019-0153-9 2. Tindano, K., Moula, N., Traoré, A. et al. Assessing the diversity of preferences of suburban smallholder sheep keepers for breeding rams in Ouagadougou, Burkina Faso. Trop Anim Health Prod 49, 1187–1193 (2017). https://doi.org/10.1007/s11250-017-1315-7 3. Siddo, S, Moula, N, Hamadou, I, Issa, M, Marichatou, H, Leroy, P and Antoine-Moussiaux, N 2015. Breeding criteria and willingness to pay for improved Azawak zebu sires in Niger. Archive of Animal Breeding 58, 251–259. 4. Issa Hamadou, Nassim Moula, Seyni Siddo, Moumouni Issa, Hamani Marichatou, Pascal Leroy, and Nicolas Antoine-Moussiaux. Valuing breeders' preferences in the conservation of the Koundoum sheep in Niger by multi-attribute analysis. https://www.arch-anim-breed.net/62/537/2019/aab-62-537-2019.html -I suggested to include the survey questionnaire. Results - The chaper was very well described. Discussion: - The chaper was very well described. -The conclusion should be developed on the outlook for your work. -The paper is very interetsing, but it can still be improved by exploiting all the collected data. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-02104R1 Breeding practices and trait preferences of smallholder farmers for indigenous sheep in the northwest highlands of Ethiopia: Inputs to design a breeding program PLOS ONE Dear Dr Abebe Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, your manuscript requires some very minor modifications prior to acceptance. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Many thanks for resubmitting your manuscript to PLOS One Your manuscript was reviewed by the expert reviewers and they are happy to accept this subject to a proof read To aid with this, I have performed the proof read of the manuscript for you and made some minor suggestions. If you can make these minor modifications, the manuscript will be accepted. Please dont feel that you need to write a response to reviewers comments. I wish you the best of luck with the minor modifications Hope you are keeping safe and well in this difficult time Thanks Simon ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 04 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Simon Russell Clegg, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: As the expert reviewers recommended that the manuscript be reviewed by a native English speaker, I have carried out this review for you. The comments below are generally minor. If you could make the suggested changes (mainly just additions of commas), the manuscript can then be accepted. Please don’t write a detailed reviewer response, just a simple line saying that they were all done is more than sufficient. Line 27- …sheep attributes, while descriptive …. Line 29- …keeping sheep, followed by … Line 33- …selection criteria, followed by … Line 40- change ‘objective’ with ‘objectives’ Line 51- …of the country, where Farta sheep …. Line 58- …for Farta sheep, while Gullilat …. Line 61- …multilaterally, but largely related … Line 65- ..crossbreeds, due to having higher exotic genotypes (I think that was what you were trying to say but please check) Line 68- ..breeding system, without being … Line 73- … have not yet been identified Line 77- sheep in Ethiopia, for instance … (link the two sentences) Line 79- change attributes to attribute Line 80- …attribute levels, giving adequate …. Line 82- …conduct a live animal ranking method … Line 85- highlands of Ethiopia, using a ranking … Line 93- should recoded be recorded? Line 97 …production, compared to the other eight …. Line 102- …mixed farming, where livestock …. Line 102- …and the livelihood of small …. Line 108- …average daily temperatures, whereas the minimum …. (link the two sentences ) Line 124- … and researcher, with the latter … Line 126- ..importance, both at the …. Line 132- ….interviews, using a …. Line 133- …[16] , who …. Line 167- …picture representations …. Line 180- …alternatives, excluding … Line 220- …setting an appropriate initial value…. Line 227- …preferences, thus were omitted …. Line 243- …school, while …. Line 251- delete ‘is’. (…of breeding ewes accounted for …) Line 269- …controlling external parasites …. Line 275- …breeding rams, but all … Line 276- …had access to ram services …. Line 277- replace ‘staying’ with ‘stayed’ Line 286- …breeding rams, followed by … Line 302- …was 9.78 years, while rams were …. Line 319- ….presence of horns …. Line 320- ….preferred over a ram with small ears. Line 321- ..tail type of the ram is the most … Line 321- …preferred attribute, while ear size … Line 324- … preferred ewe attribute, followed by predominantly Line 326- …preferred attributes, while good tail …. Line 326- is this twining or twinning (have 2 offspring)? Line 340- …levels, ewes with good …. Line 342- … than ewes with poor… Line 362- ..in a crop-livestock …. Line 362- …system, while …. Line 372- …qualitative nature, implying that …. Line 384- …characterized by a fatty tail type …. Line 385- …orientated ears …. Line 391- …longer periods, while breeding rams …. Line 392- stay within the flock for a relatively short period. (reword) Line 394- …in the flock, that could …. Line 395- …related sheep, thereby increasing …. Line 404- …selection criteria, although the .. Line 420- Unexpectedly, a ram with small ear size was preferred to a ram with larger ears, although ear size is the least important attribute in terms of the magnitude of the utility coefficient. Line 429- …to be profitable, even under …. Line 429- One reason could be…. (reword) Line 440- Unlike for the breeding ram, ewe preference analysis revealed significant scale heterogeneity ….. Line 443- …one or a few attributes…. Line 452- change ‘objective’ to ‘objectives’ Line 453- …for body size, while growth can … Line 456- …ability of ewes that highly influenced … Line 459- …thus are difficult to incorporate …. Line 459- …breeding objective, despite their … Line 460- change ‘decision’ to ‘decisions’ Line 462- …should be taken into account, for example, in addition to … (merge sentences into one) Line 463- remove because. (It has been said that…) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Simon Clegg [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Breeding practices and trait preferences of smallholder farmers for indigenous sheep in the northwest highlands of Ethiopia: Inputs to design a breeding program PONE-D-20-02104R2 Dear Dr. Abebe We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Simon Russell Clegg, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Many thanks for resubmitting your manuscript to PLOS One I have reviewed your manuscript and wish to thank you for addressing the reviewer comments. I have recommended your manuscript for publication, and you should hear from the Editorial Office soon It was a pleasure working with you, and I wish you all the best for your future research Hope you are keeping safe and well in these difficult times Thanks Simon |
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PONE-D-20-02104R2 Breeding practices and trait preferences of smallholder farmers for indigenous sheep in the northwest highlands of Ethiopia: Inputs to design a breeding program Dear Dr. Abebe: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Simon Russell Clegg Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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