Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 30, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-26721 Osteoporotic hip fracture prediction from risk factors available in administrative claims data – a machine learning approach PLOS ONE Dear Mr. Engels, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been reviewed by two external experts, who both ask for some modifications to be made, please see their detailed commends below. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 12 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publications, which needs to be addressed: Reber, Katrin C., et al. "Development of a risk assessment tool for osteoporotic fracture prevention: A claims data approach." Bone 110 (2018): 170-176. In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed 3. Please amend either the abstract on the online submission form (via Edit Submission) or the abstract in the manuscript so that they are identical. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors are presenting results on the prediction of osteoporotic hip fractures using various machine leaning techniques (logistic regression with forward selection, random forest, support vector machine, adaptive boosting with random undersampling) and compared the individual results to a meta learner/ super learner making use of all base learner. The data base consists of administrative claims from a German health insurance including more than 280000 individuals without the need for basic care. Hip fracture was recorded in a 4-year follow up and possible predictors entered the models from the baseline (e.g. age, gender, prior fractures, drugs). The authors achieved an AUROC of about 0.7. The authors presented their results in an intelligible fashion and the paper is well written. It contains necessary data description and supporting information on the methods (with packages used in R) to allow reproducibility. The methods are well summarized. Besides the good overall impression, I have some questions and remarks which should be addressed and which would further improve the paper: 1. Data a) It could be of importance to add the working status at baseline as another predictor, since you are including individuals aged 65 years and older. Furthermore, I advise to include the number of drugs prescribed per person as a continuous variable as well as the the number of drugs related to osteoporosis and number of drugs not related to osteoporosis. b) Are there other exclusion criteria than described? I am thinking of individuals passing away during the 4-year follow-up, individuals who switched to another health insurance during the follow-up (you only wrote, that you excluded cases with incomplete 24-month pre-baseline). c) Is your response variable the all-cause hip fracture or do you distinguish between osteoporotic and non-osteoporotic hip fractures? d) It would be nice to see the prediction performance on time scales of the outcome variable: hip-fracture occurring e.g. within 6 months, 12 months, 24 months and 48 months, since the drug prescriptions could have a higher predictive value within the first 6 months than within 48 months. 2. Methods a) You should think of including other boosting methods such as XGBoost and Gradient boosting to allow a better comparison of current (state-of-the-art) ML techniques. b) Under-sampling should be compared with other methods such as Up-sampling (e.g. with SMOTE). Do you also repeated the random sampling to create multiple training sets? c) Have you tried to drop the sampling strategy and tried to optimize the F1-Score instead? The F1-Score is independent of balancing. Please do add the numbers of false positive and false negative in the validation set. d) Think of including interactions (with age or gender) in your regression models. Line-by-line comments on the manuscript: 65: Germany does not have one of the highest hip-fracture rates – its rather midfield, especially in the 10y probability of major fractures. Better refer to the high rates in Northern Europe (Denmark, Sweden, Norway). 66: In the original paper it is 610,000. 68: Punctuation error before reference number 82: Cox proportional hazards regression 86-87: What do you mean with ‘advanced’ ML methods – please name those 87: ‘may have the potential’ – How large is the expected effect on the AUC? Please refer to other papers on disease predictions where those new methods outperformed classical approaches. 97: The present study is 109: Is this the LKK (Landwirtschaftliche Krankenkasse)? I havn’t found ‘German agricultural sickness fund’. 143: How many folds have you used? Define k. 167: SVM already abbreviated 170: Which kernel have you used? 171: RUSBoost is an abbreviation, please add also the full name. 196: Why do you use 3:7 sampling? I there any recommendation giving in the literature? 219: I just see 20,456 individuals used for training and 20% of 288,000 for testing. To the analysis did not include 288,086 individuals. 221: Please write the number in numeric form: 2.4% 223: 0.6% of all samples 234: Please add columns with the number of individuals with and without 4yr-hip-fracture to allow univariable comparisons (and probably important for inclusion in meta-analysis). 249: The MSE for SVM can be calculated in R using caret, see https://www.quora.com/How-can-I-calculate-the-mean-square-error-MSE-for-SVM-in-R 257: Suggested section title: Predictors 267: Table header suggestion: Coefficients of multivariable logistic regression to predict hip fracture 267: Please add the p-values. 267: Please add the unit of ‘Age’ to make clear that this is the beta-coefficient for 1 year difference. 282: Full stop after algorithms and add citation 293: I disagree, this is not computationally expensive – it can be directly extracted from the model 302: Please compare your results with described performances in the literature, … AUC in model with bone density information is 0.82 … 306: Please add citation 313: If your intention was to find complex interaction, why do you just present results from the logistic regression without any interaction? 319: I don’t see any memory problems arising from a data frame with 20000 individuals and probably less than 100 features. 359: software Reviewer #2: Review for manuscript titled with “Osteoporotic hip fracture prediction from risk factors available in administrative claims data – a machine learning approach” This retrospective study applied several algorithms , including super learner method to predict osteoporotic hip fracture using administrative claims data and found out the the super learner achieved similar predictive performance compared to other algorithms Introduction: 1. Well-written 2. The sentence started from the line 80 “ Moreover, claims data in Germany ……within the observational period” was not clear, please clarify Methods: 1. In the paragraph of “sample”, the baseline for the study was not well defined. For an example, in line 108, the baseline is April, 1 2010 and pre baseline is 24 months. Were patients allowed to enter the cohort after April, 1, 2010? 2. In the paragraph of “ Outcome variable”, “hip fracture occurring within 4 years of baseline” was the outcomes of interest? Please clarify baseline and prebaseline. 3. It was not clear whether the patients were allowed to have multiple fractures or only the first one. 4. Please explain why some variables were evaluated using 2 years pre baseline, but some factors were evaluated in the seven month before baseline. 5. This paper used prescribed medications as a surrogate for diseases associated with fracture risk, however, many medications have multiple indications. Has these surrogates been validated yet? 6. Suggest to also use logistic regression backward as it is has been reported more conservative 7. The analysis section is clear and well written Results: 1. Suggest the authors to add the time period for the medications in table 1 2. Please also provide the characteristics for patients risk during the follow up time. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Osteoporotic hip fracture prediction from risk factors available in administrative claims data – a machine learning approach PONE-D-19-26721R1 Dear Dr. Engels, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for addressing all my comments, questions and remarks and making appropriate changes to the manuscript. Minor typos / corrections: 81: Please write 'area under the receiver operating characteristic curve (AUC)' to introduce the abbreviation instead of line 201 144: 10-fold cross-validation 145: remove space before comma 164: gold standard 247: Lost to follow-up, death within four years, Death within the first year, Death within two years, Death within three years, Death within four years, 51,476 250: With regard to the Brier score, 252: Brier score 256ff: Stick to one notation of either '95%CI', '95% CI', or '95%-CI', the same accounts to 'super learner'/'superlearner' 264: Brier score 267: dot before 'Thus' 268/270: Chi-Square instead of x² Typos/grammar in the supplement: p1/RF: An ensemble method p1/RF: remove additional white space before 'on' p1/LR and RF: add dot at the end of the sentence p2: better: 'otherwise the model is likely to be adapted too much to the training data and is therefore not generalized to the validation data set' p2: 10-fold cross-validation p2: Table S2 p2: subsample=0.8 p3: prediction p4: prediction p5: distinguish ********** 7. 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PONE-D-19-26721R1 Osteoporotic hip fracture prediction from risk factors available in administrative claims data – a machine learning approach Dear Dr. Engels: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. Lars Kaderali Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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