Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 30, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-02752 Molecular epidemiology, genetic diversity and antimicrobial resistance of Staphylococcus aureus in chicken and pig carcasses and carcass handlers PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Okorie-Kanu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses all the points raised by the reviwers during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 02 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please also ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics section of your online submission will not be published alongside your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments: 1. There are sloppy mistakes in the abstract including not abbreviating Staphylococcus after the first use, even the capitalization in the title is inconsistent. 2. Inconsistent tense in lines 97-98 3. Line 162 they use t045, t002, and CC5 without any prior explanation. they need to write for a broader audience that doesn’t understand their jargon. 4. Line 187-190: I don’t think you can use Chi-square on percentages. There are much more applicable tests. 5. Line 194 don’t repeat numbers in the text that are already in Table 1. 6. Table 1: add a more explanatory description of the contents, including what is CI. How is chicken 28/600 = 0.93%. I don’t need a calculator to know that is less than 0.5%. Same for 17 out of 600 for pig 7. Line 201: presence of the MecA doesn’t necessarily mean resistant to methicillin. 8. Line 211: tell the readers why you used the spa gene! Not everyone is a Staph person. Same for the significance of the repeat successions. 9. Line 214: what is the significance of saying they were “automatically” submitted? 10. Finally on line 221 they define CC. They do list a bunch of t numbers but they have not adequately defined the importance of t numbers. I work in a different species of Staph and I don’t know what the importance of t numbers, or spa types. Thus, the impact factor of the findings is minimized. How does ANY of this relate to the global picture of S. aureus? Place Nigeria in the context of the S. aureus pan genome. 11. BURP is used many times before it is defined in the title to Figure 1. Figure 1 is very uninformative and poorly introduced. Evidently CC084 and t084 are related some how? What is the significance of the size of the circles or the colors? 12. I am perplexed why the spa typing was not related to the drug resistance profiles. That seems to be a serious under-utilization of what they have set up. They could relate spa profiles with drug resistance but they ignore it and only focus on the host source. 13. I know there is still pervasive antibiotic use in Nigeria but that is not mentioned. Was there any survey of antibiotic administration in the flocks/herds they sampled or are they all on AGP (antibiotic growth promoters)? 14. Finally at line 356 they start explaining the relevance of spa typing and BURP. But after they used it. 15. Line 361 they start to bring in a more global perspective but then dodge away. 16. They intimated that they did MLST but they did not. they used single locus typing. I actually had to go to the Ridom server and find the Home page to figure that out. Overall: the results are worth publishing but not in the form presented. They need to go back and reanalyze their data without solely focusing on Nigeria. There is a big literature about clades of S. aureus out there. They could place the Nigeria samples in that context, without making it all just about Nigeria. They can re-work this paper and make it more readable for a wider audience and focus on the need to understand the population structure of S. aureus clades in Nigeria domestic animals and the handlers. It is not at all surprising that they can isolate pig or chicken isolates from handlers. There are numerous examples of that, but are any of them causing disease? See the PNAS paper by Ross Fitzgerald many years ago for an example. Reviewer #2: This is a report of a cross-sectional study of S. aureus contamination of 600 chicken and 600 pig carcasses from slaughterhouses in Nigeria. There was an appropriate sampling strategy and the swabs were taken from the surface of the carcass. The chicken carcasses were handled differently (dipped in a communal water bath) than the pig carcasses which could explain the higher prevalence of contamination. In addition, they report on anterior nares colonization of 45 workers with chicken carcass contact and 45 workers with pig carcass contact. The prevalence of contamination was 4.7% in chicken carcasses, 2.8% in pig carcasses. Prevalence of anterior nares colonization was 11.0% and 6.7% respectively among the worker which is low. The low colonization rates suggests that these workers are not at increased risk because of their occupations. Spa typing, detection of the mec and PVL genes and antibiotic susceptibility was performed and analyzed appropriately. The results are presented in a very detailed fashion. Suggestions for improving the discussions: 1. The rationale for the study is to look at animal-to-human transmission. There are overlapping spa types between workers and carcasses; however, you do not know whether the workers contaminated the carcass with SA or the carcasses transmitted SA to the workers because of the cross-sectional design. This limitation is not mentioned. There was no clear mention of what proportion of the SA isolates were livestock associated spa types; it appears from the discussion at least some were human spa types. This key point should be given more attention. 2. There was no discussion of how this compares to contamination with optimal slaughterhouse practices and what might change this contamination. The conclusion that this is an urgent public health threat is overstated. Suggestions for improving the abstract: 1. Include the % of carcasses and workers contaminated/colonized 2. Overall #’s are distracting e.g. 1200 food animals and 90 workers- just include 600 chickens and 600 pigs and 45 chicken workers and 45 pig workers Suggestions for Methods: 1. Include how the carcasses were swabbed – for example how much of the carcasses was sampled? How does this compare to other studies that have been done? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Douglas Duane Rhoads Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-02752R1 Molecular epidemiology, genetic diversity and antimicrobial resistance of Staphylococcus aureus isolated from chicken and pig carcasses and carcass handlers PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Okorie-Kanu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised by reviewer #1. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 24 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review PONE-D-20-02752R1 Molecular epidemiology, genetic diversity and antimicrobial resistance of Staphylococcus aureus isolated from chicken and pig carcasses and carcass handlers Comments to authors: 1. Need a comma after carcasses in article title 2. Line 31: Unnecessary to include ‘(S. aureus)’ 3. Line 32: This study not The study 4. Line 34: include punctuation to properly associate the conjunctions. Perhaps they need a copy editor to clean up the punctuation and English. 5. Line 38, 46, 101: same problem. I will leave this issue to the editor to resolve, and not comment further. 6. Line 50-51: using abbreviations for antibiotics that are not defined. 7. Line 58 same problem as line 31 8. Line 130: purposively is not needed 9. Lines 227-228: Suggest the section title as: Clustering of isolates by spa typing and BURP analyses 10. Line 297 vs 305: antimicrobial resistance profile changes to antibiotic resistant profile and then they define an acronym. Suggest you choose one term and define early. Makes it cleaner. 11. Line 68, 201 and 307: MDR defined already 12. Line 320-321 vs 297-299: they already indicated earlier that ‘All the isolates from the four sources were resistant to penicillin’ and they seem to be repeating information in a slightly different manner in these two places. Suggest they compare these two paragraphs and remove redundancies. 13. Line 330-1: what is the point and what is the basis for the beta-lactamase screening. They just seem to be repeating numbers from the tables and they would be better just pointing to where they are drawing results from. The results still seem to just be a recitation of numbers. Just trying to encourage them to consider their readers for the importance of some of the numbers. 14. Line 334: they are back to using Staphylococcus aureus! 15. Line 366: don’t need to redefine MSSA and MRSA. 16. The bibliography needs cleaning up, to meet PLoS One format. Only some journal titles are abbreviated. I am certain the editors will catch this on acceptance. Overall: the manuscript is far superior and highlights the importance of the work, with a focus on fitting into the global and African importance of the work. They need to clean up the coverage in the results, fix some punctuation, and get it published. Reviewer #2: This is a report of a cross-sectional study of S. aureus contamination of 600 chicken and 600 pig carcasses from slaughterhouses in Nigeria. There was an appropriate sampling strategy and the swabs were taken from the surface of the carcass. The chicken carcasses were handled differently (dipped in a communal water bath) than the pig carcasses which could explain the higher prevalence of contamination. In addition, they report on anterior nares colonization of 45 workers with chicken carcass contact and 45 workers with pig carcass contact. The prevalence of contamination was 4.7% in chicken carcasses, 2.8% in pig carcasses. Prevalence of anterior nares colonization was 11.0% and 6.7% respectively among the worker which is low. The low colonization rates suggests that these workers are not at increased risk because of their occupations. Spa typing, detection of the mec and PVL genes and antibiotic susceptibility was performed and analyzed appropriately. The results are presented in a very detailed fashion. All of my prior suggestions have been incorporated. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Douglas Duane Rhoads Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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