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PONE-D-20-03165 Remote monitoring of clubfoot treatment with digital photographs in low resource settings: is it accurate? PLOS ONE Dear Dr Smythe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 07 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors sought to assess correlation between the Assessing Clubfoot Treatment (ACT) score and photographic assessment of Ponseti-treated clubfeet. ACT scores were obtained for each child. They were classified as success or failure (borderline scores were combined with success). Photos were taken of 79 feet and these were reviewed by 2 blinded orthopaedic surgeons who rated the feet as success if they saw valgus or neutral alignment of the hindfoot and plantigrade or dorsiflexion of the ankle joint. All others were deemed as failure. These ratings were then compared to the ACT scores. Comparing photograph-based evaluation with the ACT scores, the authors found the sensitivity was between 83.8% and 88.3%, while the specificity was between 57.9% and 73.3%. They noted that the ability of raters to correctly identify a foot that had failed treatment according to the ACT score was low. The authors concluded that photos may help confirm, but not exclude, success of clubfoot treatment; further work was needed to standardize the how the photos were taken and establish photographic parameters to more accurately assess treatment outcomes from the photos. Thank you for allowing me to review this excellent manuscript. I have the following questions for the authors: 1. Introduction section, line 85: How was the ACT score validated? 2. Methods section: Am I correct to assume none of the patients in the cohort developed a relapse necessitating repeat cast treatment or surgery as this may influence patient symptoms and caregiver satisfaction? 3. Methods section, line 137: It might he helpful to the reader to include an example of the 3 good sets of photographs. Is there evidence in the literature to suggest differences in tightness of the soleus and gastrocnemius muscles In Ponseti-treated clubfeet? I have not found this; perhaps you have. 4. Results section, line 179: Were the ACT scores and photographic outcomes calculated for each ‘child’ or ‘foot’? Gray et al. (Clin Orthop Relat Res (2014) 472:3517–3522) found that patients with bilateral clubfeet have a high correlation between right and left feet for baseline severity and response to intervention. Accordingly, they argued that results in 2 limbs of the same patient do not represent independent observations. Could their observation have impacted your study? 5. Results section, line 184: Should this read Table 3? 6. Discussion section, paragraph beginning on line 235: You seem to infer a patient with a residual or relapsed clubfoot deformity—but who has no symptoms or shoe wear problems, and high caregiver satisfaction—would not benefit from repeat cast treatment or surgery to prevent the later onset of symptoms? Is there evidence to support this viewpoint? Children may tolerate or adapt to residual deformity more readily when very young, but less so with age. One may argue that it would be better to manage a residual or relapsed deformity early because it is likely to worsen and may become more refractory to correction in older children. If the latter argument is correct, then the usefulness of photographic evaluation by a remote expert may prove even more useful than you have concluded. Reviewer #2: The research topic is timely and the study is worthy of publication. In general, the methodology is sound and the conclusions appropriately derive from the research. Under question #3 above, a url needs to be appended to the LSHTM database reference in accordance wit the stated requirement I submit the following comments in the interests of helping the authors improve the quality of the publication. There needs to be some minor revisions as follows: In the abstract the authors state that this is a prospective, single center cohort study. I question that it is prospective. The title of the research indicates that it is a diagnostic accuracy study. It includes two study periods of the same images to evaluate intra-observer validity, but this does not make it prospective. I note that it is "piggybacked" on a research study by the same group published in the Journal of Foot and Ankle Research, reference #8 in the reference section. The patient cohort in this study is drawn from the cohort in the previous study. That publication is a level II diagnostic study. I suggest this study is the same and the word "prospective" needs to be deleted from the abstract. In the methodology the authors used three digital photographs of the patient's lower limbs, two of which are in standing position and one supine with passive dorsiflexion. These are demonstrated in the appendix. It is stated that the passive dorsiflexion with knee in extension and the weighted dorsiflexion with knee flexed are to simulate the Silverskjold test for contracture of the gastrocnemius muscle. To be comparative these two tests should be done in similar manner, either supine unweighted, or weighted. Since the crux of the research relies on measurements of the submitted photographs, the authors need to clarify in the text why they chose their technique. Of relevance is the known discrepancy between measured dorsiflexion passively and weighted, with weighted dorsiflexion giving increased angles. (See Baggett & Young, J Am Podiatr Med assoc. 1993 May;83(5):251-4). It would have been more clear to standardize all three photographs in the standing position. I wonder if some of the difficulties in establishing the "borderline" cluster of patients came from discrepancy between these two images (see lines 160/161). The authors are encouraged to go back over their data and see if discrepancy between the weighted and unweighted dorsiflexion views were problematic in evaluating the classification. They are encouraged to discuss the choice of position and possible impact on the final result in the text. Line 143 states "the lateral views were repeated for the other leg if there was bilateral foot involvement". Was the standing review in the coronal plane from the back to assess the degree of residual hind foot varus not done? Also, in unilateral cases, were photographs taken of the non-involved side? Data gleaned from the normative side would have been useful as a control particularly since actual goniometric measurements were performed and not just a visual evaluation of plantigrade or not. I found the results section difficult to read and had to read it several times to make sense of it. I am sure other readers will have the same difficulty. This section should be rewritten for clarity purposes. • There should be better segregation of the ACT score and photographic scores for clarity. This should also apply to the tables, where more clear distinction between the act score: and photographic columns could be made. • Line 184 incorrectly refers to table 2 for the referenced data. I am presuming the reference is for table 3. • The digital photography data presented in line 183-185 is not reflected in any of the tables despite the erroneous reference to table 2. There must be alignment in the text and the submitted tables. • Line 181-183 elaborates on those patients who had poor quality pictures or suboptimal patient position. How is this data reflected in the submitted tables? Were these patients excluded, or put into the borderline category? Evaluation of this group should be clearly identified in the text and the tables. The limitation section, line 255, indicates that fully a third of images were assessed with only two of the three views. How were the evaluations made in these circumstances? • In the methodology section, lines 46 to 48, the methodology for obtaining the photographs is discussed. It is not clear whether these images were taken by physiotherapists in a clinic situation or on outreach. At issue is how standardized the procedure was. There will obviously be differences in the standardized referral clinic environment as compared to outreach situations. Was the research done by clustering the subjects in a research clinic environment, or did it mirror the desired condition of performance in a non-specialized community scenario. A statement in this regard is relevant in order to understand why there were images of poor quality. This issue should also be elaborated in the discussion section since it impinges on the methodology of obtaining photographic images in the clinical scenario remote from a specialized center. • Lines 192-196 elaborate on the inter-rater reliability. Comment is made that rater 2 was more conservative than rater 1 at 70%. The table shows 70.9 versus 74.7. At the second go round the percentages are 69.6 Versus 74.7 as expressed in table #4. The question is whether these differences are statistically significant? I recognize that the sample size is small, but it appears to me that these are not significant differences. One editing correction: Line 88 utilized “DF” without prior clarification of “dorsiflexion”. 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Remote monitoring of clubfoot treatment with digital photographs in low resource settings: is it accurate? PONE-D-20-03165R1 Dear Dr. Smythe, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, James G. Wright Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Revisions have addressed questions posed in the initial review. i am happy that the paper can be submitted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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