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Original SubmissionJanuary 17, 2020
Decision Letter - Stefan Pöhlmann, Editor

PONE-D-20-01538

Cross-sectional prevalence study of MERS-CoV in local and imported dromedary camels in Saudi Arabia, 2016-2018

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Reviewer #1: In the present manuscript Tolah and coworkers present their findings from a comparative screening study for MERS-CoV neutralizing antibodies and viral nucleic acid in imported dromedaries from Sudan and Djibouti and in local dromedary camels in Jeddah/Saudi Arabia.

While local cohorts of dromedaries on the Arabian Peninsula had been extensively surveyed before, less information is available for dromedaries imported from Africa. Few studies have been conducted on assessing the prevalence of MERS-CoV-specific antibodies and MERS-CoV RNA in local dromedary camel herds in different African countries that export animals to the Arabian Peninsula. Moreover, data on MERS-CoV prevalence in imported dromedaries have so far only been obtained for animals held at quarantines, abattoirs and markets, and thus leave the possibility for (i) infection of imported animals by local MERS-CoV variants and (ii) for exchange of MERS-CoV variants between dromedaries imported from different sources. As a result, it is difficult to tell whether imported dromedaries that are tested MERS-CoV-positive were already infected/antibody-positive before being imported to the Arabian Peninsula or if infection occurred after import.

Tolah and coworkers analyzed samples taken during the transport of dromedaries from the Horn of Africa (countries: Sudan and Djibouti) to Saudi Arabia (Jeddah) in order to assess the prevalence of MERS-CoV in dromedaries before they touch ground in Saudi Arabia and might get in contact with other imported animals (from other African countries) or local animals. The authors report that imported dromedaries had significantly higher seroprevalence than local animals. In contrast, prevalence of MERS-CoV RNA was significantly higher in local dromedaries. Interestingly, the authors found gender-specific differences in the MERS-CoV RNA levels, an observation that has been also made by other groups. Further, a link between age and seropositivity was observed.

This work fills a gap of our knowledge on MERS-CoV prevalence in dromedary camels that are imported from Africa to the Arabian Peninsula. The manuscript is well-written and the data are clearly presented. Overall, I can recommend this manuscript for publication without further modifications.

Reviewer #2: The mansucript by Tolah et al compares MERS-CoV seroprevalence and viral RNA detection rates between imported and local dromedaries in Saudi Arabia between 2016 and 2018. The authors used previously established PCR and neutralization tests. The main findings are that imported camels had higher seroprevalence compared to resident animal in contrast to RNA detection. Seroprevalence significantly increased with age and viral RNA detection rate was 2-folds higher in camels <2 year-old compared to older animals. Interestingly, concurrent positivity for viral RNA and nAbs was found in >87% of the RNA positive animals which has implications for vaccination strategies.

The manuscript is overall well written and the data support the conclusions. The fact, that many dromedaries with neutralizing antibodies were also RNA positive confirms previous observations. Although the novelty might not be striking, the direct comparison of seropositivity and MERS-CoV RNA among imported vs resident dromedaries has not been studied in detail.

I have a few remarks:

1. The authors should emphasize more that a previous study was already based on the same sampling (El-Kafrawy, Lancet Planetary Health, 2019). Otherwise, readers might wonder why the authors did not include phylogenies etc.

2. The authors state in line 146 that they left the serum-virus mix on the cells for 3 days. This seems uncommon, please check.

3. In Figure 4 the authors compare ct values. How did the authors guarantee that all PCRs had the same efficiency? Did they use a control RNA, or an in vitro transcript as standard?

4. African dromedaries were sampled 2016 until 2018. The resident dromedary samples were exclusively collected in 2018. A direct comparison of e.g. RNA detection rates between African and Arabian dromedaries is therefore only possible for the year 2018. This limitation should be addressed.

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Reviewer #1:

In the present manuscript Tolah and coworkers present their findings from a comparative screening study for MERS-CoV neutralizing antibodies and viral nucleic acid in imported dromedaries from Sudan and Djibouti and in local dromedary camels in Jeddah/Saudi Arabia.

While local cohorts of dromedaries on the Arabian Peninsula had been extensively surveyed before, less information is available for dromedaries imported from Africa. Few studies have been conducted on assessing the prevalence of MERS-CoV-specific antibodies and MERS-CoV RNA in local dromedary camel herds in different African countries that export animals to the Arabian Peninsula. Moreover, data on MERS-CoV prevalence in imported dromedaries have so far only been obtained for animals held at quarantines, abattoirs and markets, and thus leave the possibility for (i) infection of imported animals by local MERS-CoV variants and (ii) for exchange of MERS-CoV variants between dromedaries imported from different sources. As a result, it is difficult to tell whether imported dromedaries that are tested MERS-CoV-positive were already infected/antibody-positive before being imported to the Arabian Peninsula or if infection occurred after import.

Tolah and coworkers analyzed samples taken during the transport of dromedaries from the Horn of Africa (countries: Sudan and Djibouti) to Saudi Arabia (Jeddah) in order to assess the prevalence of MERS-CoV in dromedaries before they touch ground in Saudi Arabia and might get in contact with other imported animals (from other African countries) or local animals. The authors report that imported dromedaries had significantly higher seroprevalence than local animals. In contrast, prevalence of MERS-CoV RNA was significantly higher in local dromedaries. Interestingly, the authors found gender-specific differences in the MERS-CoV RNA levels, an observation that has been also made by other groups. Further, a link between age and seropositivity was observed.

This work fills a gap of our knowledge on MERS-CoV prevalence in dromedary camels that are imported from Africa to the Arabian Peninsula. The manuscript is well-written and the data are clearly presented. Overall, I can recommend this manuscript for publication without further modifications.

We thank the reviewer for the positive feedback.

Reviewer #2:

The manuscript by Tolah et al compares MERS-CoV seroprevalence and viral RNA detection rates between imported and local dromedaries in Saudi Arabia between 2016 and 2018. The authors used previously established PCR and neutralization tests. The main findings are that imported camels had higher seroprevalence compared to resident animal in contrast to RNA detection. Seroprevalence significantly increased with age and viral RNA detection rate was 2-folds higher in camels <2 year-old compared to older animals. Interestingly, concurrent positivity for viral RNA and nAbs was found in >87% of the RNA positive animals which has implications for vaccination strategies.

The manuscript is overall well written and the data support the conclusions. The fact, that many dromedaries with neutralizing antibodies were also RNA positive confirms previous observations. Although the novelty might not be striking, the direct comparison of seropositivity and MERS-CoV RNA among imported vs resident dromedaries has not been studied in detail.

I have a few remarks:

1. The authors should emphasize more that a previous study was already based on the same sampling (El-Kafrawy, Lancet Planetary Health, 2019). Otherwise, readers might wonder why the authors did not include phylogenies etc.

The Following statement was added in the results section page 9, line 202-203 “Genetic characteristics of the domestic and imported strains together with phylogenetic analysis are discussed in a previous publication [40].”

2. The authors state in line 146 that they left the serum-virus mix on the cells for 3 days. This seems uncommon, please check.

We followed the protocol by our group in “Evaluation of MERS-CoV Neutralizing Antibodies in Sera Using Live Virus Microneutralization Assay” by Abdullah Algaissi and Anwar M. Hashem Book series: Methods In Molecular Biology, Book: “MERS Coronavirus”, ” DOI: 10.1007/978-1-0716-0211-9_9”

3. In Figure 4 the authors compare ct values. How did the authors guarantee that all PCRs had the same efficiency? Did they use a control RNA, or an in vitro transcript as standard?

In the PCR reactions, we used a control RNA and found that the Ct values for this control are within 5% difference between runs.

4. African dromedaries were sampled 2016 until 2018. The resident dromedary samples were exclusively collected in 2018. A direct comparison of e.g. RNA detection rates between African and Arabian dromedaries is therefore only possible for the year 2018. This limitation should be addressed.

The following statement was added in page 16-17, lines 343-347 “Although the sampling time frames of imported and domestic camels are different, as imported camels were sampled between 2016-2018 while domestic camels were only sampled in 2018, the results are still indicative of the prevalence of MERS-CoV in both groups and require further investigation and continuous screening programs to evaluate the seasonality of the infection.”.

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Cross-sectional prevalence study of MERS-CoV in local and imported dromedary camels in Saudi Arabia, 2016-2018

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