Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 27, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-18160 Prevalence of Pectus Excavatum in an Adult Population-Based Cohort Estimated from Radiographic Indices of Chest Wall Shape PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kim Garcia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 13 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study provided an overview for the prevalence of pectus excavatum (PE) in the general adult population. The measurement protocol is simple, and the large sample size makes for a decent estimation. Currently, PE is most mentioned in neonates and children. Therefore, there lack existing evidence in the literature to effectively evaluate the accuracy of this study. On the other hand, however, this study has the potential to become one of the first in its kind, and could pave the way to future studies in adult PE. There are a few comments that I would like the authors to address. 1.As shown in Table 1, while evaluating the diagnostic indices of PE, was it necessary to include cases with pectus carinatum (PC)? The likelihood of decreased Haller index in PC patients might cause an underestimation in terms of the cases that fits the criteria. 2.What was the diagnostic criteria for the reference pectus cases? Apparently not all referred cases fit both the HI and CI criteria. Providing the detailed diagnostic criteria of these cases could increase the credibility of this sample. 3.While evaluating the paired samples in DHS1 and DHS2, with such a large sample size, parametric tests are usually preferred due to their higher power. Did the samples not follow normal distribution? If so, the possibility of the sample being biased may need to be addressed. 4.The estimated prevalence of undiagnosed, untreated adult pectus excavatum (1 in 250) was higher than the assumed incidence of neonatal pectus excavatum, 1 in 400, in 1975, where CT was much less available. Do the authors have any theory in regard to this phenomenon? 5.What is the clinical significance of this study? Do the authors have any expectation as to what changes this study might lead to in the management of adult PE? Reviewer #2: The authors present a retrospective analysis of thoracic computed tomography imaging studies, reviewing the Haller index, a measure of thoracic axial shape, and the Correction index. They found that very strong inverse association between the Haller Index and weight or BMI suggests that obesity may lead to a more circular axial thoracic shape. Overall, the most important problem of this manuscript is its novelty. Similar studies have been done by other investigators before, with the same modality or other modality both. Just to list a few: Incidence and Classification of Chest Wall Deformities in Breast Augmentation Patients. Aesthetic Plast Surg (United States), Dec 2017, 41(6) p1280-1290 Relationship between cardiac MR compression classification and CT chest wall indexes in patients with pectus excavatum. J Pediatr Surg (United States), Nov 2018, 53(11) p2294-2298 Szafer D, Taylor JS, Pei A, et al. A Simplified Method for Three-Dimensional Optical Imaging and Measurement of Patients with Chest Wall Deformities. J Laparoendosc Adv Surg Tech A (United States), Feb 2019, 29(2) p267-271 Reviewer #3: INTRODUCTION Page 3: First reference [1] is from 1975! Is there no newer data available? Page 3: You describe that radiographic measures can quantify …; but is it always necessary for diagnosis? What added value does CT (radiation exposure) have, especially for patients in adolescence. A small paragraph like diagnosis is based on … would be helpful. Page 3: A Correction Index of 10% - do you mean exactly or greater than? METHODS Page 4: The cases referred for evaluation of pectus …; During which period were the patients selected? How many cases were obtained and how many were included in the study? Why did all patients undergo a CT? Page 5: Definition of Haller and Correction Index thresholds - taken from the literature? RESULTS Page 7: The Haller Index measures … The Correction Index measures …; just a repetition of the introduction / methods - can be shortened. Page 8: You describe significant associations; do the parameters mentioned have a predictive value? Page 9: correlated with age (p=0.0045); for real? Or 0.045?; if you look at the corresponding graph, p does not appear so clearly (see Haller Index / Height; p = 0.074) Page 9: 992 subjects with repeat imaging; any therapy between imaging? DISCUSSION Page 10: Perhaps this explains why most …; what kind of evaluation? Is a CT always necessary? Page 11: Ten-fold fewer DHS1 subjects …; Isn't it better to adjust the threshold for both indices? In general: Is the data of clinical relevance? Is there a predictive value from the parameters for the development of the funnel chest deformity? Should every patient undergo a CT? 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Prevalence of Pectus Excavatum in an Adult Population-Based Cohort Estimated from Radiographic Indices of Chest Wall Shape PONE-D-19-18160R1 Dear Dr. Kim Garcia, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, JJ Cray Jr., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Chai, Jyh-Wen Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-19-18160R1 Prevalence of Pectus Excavatum in an Adult Population-Based Cohort Estimated from Radiographic Indices of Chest Wall Shape Dear Dr. Kim Garcia: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. JJ Cray Jr. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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