Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-32075 Grandparents’ Wealth and the Body Mass Index Trajectories of Grandchildren PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Huang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 12 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an impressive study showing convincingly that grandparent wealth is associated with grandchild BMI trajectory. For the most part, the research questions are well-justified, the analyses are rigorous, and the conclusions are valid. However, I also offer the following critiques intended to improve the manuscript: 1) First, the Introduction could be improved with a more focused discussion of why we might expect to see race differences in the association between grandparent wealth and grandchild BMI. The existence of a race-based wealth gap is clear (and cited in the manuscript), as is the existence of race-based differences in obesity risk. However, the Introduction does not seem to include a focused argument for why the ASSOCIATION between wealth and BMI may be different in African American vs. White families. 2) The discussion of the results of the analyses of race differences could also benefit from further development. While it is true that the relevant estimates for the White families tend to be statistically significant, and the estimates for the Black families tend to be non-significant, the actual point estimates are larger for the Blacks than the Whites. This detail, I think, should be noted in the manuscript. Given this pattern of results, I do not know that it is reasonable to conclude so starkly that grandparent wealth plays a "vital" role for White, but does "not seem to matter" for Blacks. 3) I would suggest avoiding the use of the terms "accelerated" or "decelerated" to describe inter-individual differences in BMI trajectories. An intra-individual trajectory may accelerate or decelerate, but when comparing one person's (or group's) trajectory to another's, these terms do not apply well. So, for example, in the Abstract, I would suggest editing the Results section to read: "Further, increases in grandparental wealth in childhood are associated with a SLOWER BMI growth rate." Reviewer #2: The paper uses the Panel Study of Income Dynamics (PSID) merged with the Child Development Supplement (CDS) and Transition to Adulthood (TA) Supplement to examine the relationship between parental (G2) and grandparental (G1) wealth in early childhood and children’s BMI. The paper finds that additional grandparental wealth leads to lower BMI, mainly for white children. This paper represents a useful example of the impacts of multi-generations on child well-being. While there are many studies demonstrating the importance of parent SES, there are only a few studies showing the benefits of grandparents. The paper could be improved by providing additional details on the relationship between G1 wealth and G2 income and wealth. All of these are correlated and could be influencing the regression results. While the paper creates wealth rankings, it uses the parental income levels directly. The rankings could be masking the importance of large wealth levels. Households in the bottom two quintiles of wealth have very little wealth (the bottom quintile even has zero or negative net worth). In addition, it would be useful to present the correlation between G1 and G2 wealth (and rankings), as well as between G2 income and wealth. It could be that the G1 results are driven by the households who have both high G1 and G2 wealth. The authors could consider including a G1*G2 term, or use a categorical variable for G1 and G2 wealth quartile indicators and their cross-terms. The authors should also explain the troubling result that parental wealth actually increases the initial BMI. In addition, it is counterintuitive that the paper finds that G1 wealth has a larger impact on reducing BMI than G2 wealth. This could all be due to the correlation between G1 and G2 wealth. Finally, the results in Table 3 suggest that all of the effects are accruing to white children. Again, this could be due to the distribution of wealth. As Table 1 shows, the distribution of G1 wealth among white children is much more disperse than among black children (CV of 2.2 for whites compared to 1.2 for blacks). The authors could consider including black and white interaction terms for the age squared terms in the model in Table 2. It could be that all of the action will be in the white interaction terms. However, the authors need to spend some time discussing the mechanisms for why G1 wealth impacts the BMI for white children and not black children. The authors suggest that this could be due to other factors such as neighborhood effects. The authors could examine this by using the restricted access PSID data with geocodes. One issue concerns the data set; do all children have grandparents and how does that impact the results for those children without living grandparents or without grandparents, and are these the maternal or paternal grandparents or only those who are in the survey. The latter could also lead to some selection ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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