Peer Review History

Original SubmissionNovember 18, 2019
Decision Letter - Narasimha Reddy Parine, Editor

PONE-D-19-32028

Association between the rs1544410 polymorphism in the vitamin D receptor ​(VDR) gene and insulin secretion after gestational diabetes mellitus

PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Shaat,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

==============================

ACADEMIC EDITOR:

I request the authors to clear the following queries

1. Explain how the study size was arrived at.

2. Did the authors confirmed the genotyping results using any other methods (sequencing etc.)

3.Please include the genotyping raw data (spss file etc.) as supplementary information.

==============================

We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 16 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter.

To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols

Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:

  • A rebuttal letter that responds to each point raised by the academic editor and reviewer(s). This letter should be uploaded as separate file and labeled 'Response to Reviewers'.
  • A marked-up copy of your manuscript that highlights changes made to the original version. This file should be uploaded as separate file and labeled 'Revised Manuscript with Track Changes'.
  • An unmarked version of your revised paper without tracked changes. This file should be uploaded as separate file and labeled 'Manuscript'.

Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out.

We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Narasimha Reddy Parine, Ph.D

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

Journal Requirements:

1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements.

Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at

http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf

2. We note that you are reporting an analysis of a microarray, next-generation sequencing, or deep sequencing data set. PLOS requires that authors comply with field-specific standards for preparation, recording, and deposition of data in repositories appropriate to their field. Please upload these data to a stable, public repository (such as ArrayExpress, Gene Expression Omnibus (GEO), DNA Data Bank of Japan (DDBJ), NCBI GenBank, NCBI Sequence Read Archive, or EMBL Nucleotide Sequence Database (ENA)). In your revised cover letter, please provide the relevant accession numbers that may be used to access these data. For a full list of recommended repositories, see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-omics or http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-sequencing.

3. Please note that PLOS does not permit references to “data/results not shown.” Authors should provide the relevant data within the manuscript, the Supporting Information files, or in a public repository. If the data are not a core part of the research study being presented, we ask that authors remove any references to these data.

4. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript:

"The study was supported by grants from the Research Funds of Skåne University Hospital and

289 the Skåne County Council Research and Development Foundation. The funders had no role in

290 study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.".

We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form.

* Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows:

 "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.".

Additional Editor Comments (if provided):

I request the authors to clear the following queries

1. Explain how the study size was arrived at.

2. Did the authors confirmed the genotyping results using any other methods (sequencing etc.)

3.please include the genotyping raw data (spss file etc.) as supplementary information.

[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.]

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

5. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: The study aimed to investigate possible associations of polymorphisms in genes involved in vitamin D metabolism with indices of insulin resistance and insulin secretion, and also with development of diabetes after gestational diabetes mellitus (GDM), the manuscript was found interesting, The subject selection and how subjects move through the study is clear. It is a good work.

Reviewer #2: I would like to appreciate the work done by the authors submitted for publication. Overall the manuscript is well designed, experimental study is well executed, statistical data analysis performed is acceptable. Overall the manuscript is well written and the subject of study and findings reported are relevant.

**********

6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.

If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public.

Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.

Reviewer #1: Yes: Moushira Erfan Zaki

Reviewer #2: No

[NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.]

While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.

Revision 1

Response to Reviewers

Academic Editor:

I request the authors to clear the following queries

1. Explain how the study size was arrived at.

Authors’ reply: Briefly, women delivering between 2003–2005 were invited to participate in the study, covering 86% of all pregnancies in the County of Skane in southern Sweden, including four of five delivery departments. The diagnosis of GDM was made using a 75-g oral glucose tolerance test (OGTT) at the twenty-eighth and/or the twelfth week of gestation. In the original evaluation, GDM was defined as two-hour capillary plasma glucose ≥10.0 mmol/l, gestational IGT as two-hour capillary plasma glucose 8.6–9.9 mmol/l, and normal glucose tolerance (NGT) during pregnancy as two-hour capillary plasma glucose <8.6 mmol/l. Among those who accepted to participate in the study and after exclusion of those who had already been diagnosed as having diabetes, 160 women had GDM, 309 had Gestational IGT and 167 had NGT. Women were followed for the development of diabetes using an OGTT at 1–2 years and 5 years after pregnancy, or until the diagnosis of diabetes. The World Health Organization (WHO) 1999 diagnostic criteria were used for classification of diabetes during follow-up. Measurements of both glucose and insulin concentrations at 0, 30, and 120 min during OGTT at 1‒2 years postpartum were performed to calculate indices of beta-cell function and insulin resistance, as previously reported. Serum samples for determination of 25(OH)D3 were collected during the OGTT at 1‒2 years postpartum. In the present investigation, we used the diagnostic criteria for GDM recommended by the WHO in 1999. Based on these criteria and on successful measurements of 25OHD3 concentrations, we identified 376 women who had previously had GDM and who formed the basis of the present study.

We have now revised the Section “Material and methods/Patients” accordingly.

2. Did the authors confirmed the genotyping results using any other methods (sequencing etc.)

Authors’ reply: As the TaqMan Allelic Discrimination Assay is well validated method for SNP genotyping, we have not used any other methods to confirm the genotyping. However, we used positive controls during the genotyping. Moreover, the genotyping results were confirmed by re-genotyping of about 20% of the samples using the same genotyping method.

We think this would be enough to confirm our results and hope it is accepted according to your journal policies. We have now added this information to the Section “Material and methods/Genetic analysis”.

3. Please include the genotyping raw data (spss file etc.) as supplementary information.

Authors’ reply: We would like to bring to your attention that we discovered that two samples of the studied samples were not genotyped because of no available DNA. We have now added this information to the Section “Material and methods/Genetic analysis”. The genotyping raw data is included in SPSS file as supplementary information. Please, let us to know if you need more raw data (t. ex. original genotyping raw data from the TaqMan ® Genotyper ™ Software).

• If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter.

Authors’ reply: No changes to our financial disclosure have been made.

• To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols

Authors’ reply: The genotyping protocol have been deposited in protocols.io. The DOI is: dx.doi.org/10.17504/protocols.io.bcjbiuin

Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:

• A rebuttal letter that responds to each point raised by the academic editor and reviewer(s). This letter should be uploaded as separate file and labeled 'Response to Reviewers'.

Authors’ reply: This is done.

• A marked-up copy of your manuscript that highlights changes made to the original version. This file should be uploaded as separate file and labeled 'Revised Manuscript with Track Changes'.

Authors’ reply: This is done.

• An unmarked version of your revised paper without tracked changes. This file should be uploaded as separate file and labeled 'Manuscript'.

Authors’ reply: This is done.

Journal Requirements:

1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements.

Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at

http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf

Authors’ reply: Your journal requirements have been taken into consideration during revision of the manuscript.

2. We note that you are reporting an analysis of a microarray, next-generation sequencing, or deep sequencing data set. PLOS requires that authors comply with field-specific standards for preparation, recording, and deposition of data in repositories appropriate to their field. Please upload these data to a stable, public repository (such as ArrayExpress, Gene Expression Omnibus (GEO), DNA Data Bank of Japan (DDBJ), NCBI GenBank, NCBI Sequence Read Archive, or EMBL Nucleotide Sequence Database (ENA)). In your revised cover letter, please provide the relevant accession numbers that may be used to access these data. For a full list of recommended repositories, see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-omics or http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-sequencing.

Authors’ reply: The data are uploaded. The EGA accession numbers are:

RNAseq: EGAS00001004042

GWAS: EGAS00001004044

Phenotype: EGAS00001004056

This information has been added to the revised manuscript.

3. Please note that PLOS does not permit references to “data/results not shown.” Authors should provide the relevant data within the manuscript, the Supporting Information files, or in a public repository. If the data are not a core part of the research study being presented, we ask that authors remove any references to these data.

Authors’ reply: We have now provided data within the manuscript. Please, see “Table 2” in the Results Section.

4. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript:

"The study was supported by grants from the Research Funds of Skåne University Hospital and

289 the Skåne County Council Research and Development Foundation. The funders had no role in

290 study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.".

Authors’ reply: We have got a little bit confused. You request in the next point that funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of our manuscript. Please let us know if we have misunderstood your requirements. Please, see our response to the next point.

• We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form.

* Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows:

"The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.".

Authors’ reply: We have removed any funding-related text from the manuscript. We want to update our funding information as follow: “The study was supported by grants from the Research Funds of Skåne University Hospital, the Skåne County Council Research and Development Foundation and ALF Region Skåne. The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.”

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Authors’ reply: There are no questions raised by the reviewer.

________________________________________

2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Authors’ reply: There are no questions raised by the reviewer.

________________________________________

3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Authors’ reply: There are no questions raised by the reviewer.

________________________________________

4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Authors’ reply: There are no questions raised by the reviewer.

________________________________________

5. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: The study aimed to investigate possible associations of polymorphisms in genes involved in vitamin D metabolism with indices of insulin resistance and insulin secretion, and also with development of diabetes after gestational diabetes mellitus (GDM), the manuscript was found interesting, The subject selection and how subjects move through the study is clear. It is a good work.

Authors’ reply: There are no questions raised by the reviewer.

Reviewer #2: I would like to appreciate the work done by the authors submitted for publication. Overall the manuscript is well designed, experimental study is well executed, statistical data analysis performed is acceptable. Overall the manuscript is well written and the subject of study and findings reported are relevant.

Authors’ reply: There are no questions raised by the reviewer.

________________________________________

6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.

If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public.

Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.

Reviewer #1: Yes: Moushira Erfan Zaki

Reviewer #2: No

[NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.]

While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.

________________________________________

In compliance with data protection regulations, you may request that we remove your personal registration details at any time. (Remove my information/details). Please contact the publication office if you have any questions.

Attachments
Attachment
Submitted filename: Response to Reviewers.doc
Decision Letter - Narasimha Reddy Parine, Editor

Association between the rs1544410 polymorphism in the vitamin D receptor ​(VDR) gene and insulin secretion after gestational diabetes mellitus

PONE-D-19-32028R1

Dear Dr. Shaat,

We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements.

Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication.

Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org.

If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org.

With kind regards,

Narasimha Reddy Parine, Ph.D

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

**********

2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

**********

6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: no comments for authors, good work, the conclusion showed that he overall early ANC booking in Ethiopia was very low compared with

WHO recommendation for pregnant women. Both sociodemographic and obstetric

factors significantly affect early initiation of ANC. Strategies targeting advocating

women education and standard piece of information concerning what pregnant women

should expect and do during the prenatal period, universal access of family planning

and prenatal care service and establishment village outreach health facility should be

addressed by Ministry of Health and its stake holders to improve early initiation of ANC.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

**********

7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.

If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public.

Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.

Reviewer #1: Yes: Moushira Zaki, National Research Centre,Egypt

Reviewer #2: Yes: Prof. Dr. Nadeem Sheikh

Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Narasimha Reddy Parine, Editor

PONE-D-19-32028R1

Association between the rs1544410 polymorphism in the vitamin D receptor ​(VDR) gene and insulin secretion after gestational diabetes mellitus

Dear Dr. Shaat:

I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department.

If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org.

For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org.

Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE.

With kind regards,

PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff

on behalf of

Dr. Narasimha Reddy Parine

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

Open letter on the publication of peer review reports

PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.

We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.

Learn more at ASAPbio .