Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 5, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-33739 Corticosterone and testosterone treatment influence expression of gene pathways linked to meiotic segregation in preovulatory follicles of the domestic hen PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Navara, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Minor revisions are necessary to improve the paper. If you like to revise the paper in accordance with each of these comments, please create an "author response" file with a point-by-point response to each comment, clearly describing how they have been addressed in the revision. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 28 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This genomic study has been properly designed and performed. I do not have any remarks concerning methodology of the study including genomic tools and statistics used. However, since the small number of the studies in this area I have few comments to the general idea of the study. 1. Authors investigate the influence of two hormones on sex selection in hen. One of these hormones, namely corticosterone, plays a role of stress hormone in birds (as cortisol does in mammals). So maybe the hypotheses of sex selection given in the paper should also include the idea that stress factors (resulting in corticosterone release) bias offspring sex ration in female birds. If there is no stress (no corticosterone release) the standard “physiological setting” of sex selection is male-directed. This could explain obtained data that testosterone treatment resulted in significant regulation of only one gene. This is surprising since the testosterone administration resulted in significant increase of plasma testosterone level but the gene expression in GD seem to be unaffected. Bearing in mind the number of genes investigated in the study the number of differentially regulated genes by testosterone is quite small. 2. One of the drawbacks of this paper is lack of clinical evaluation of treatments applied. In my opinion part of the birds from each experimental group should be kept further for the evaluation of male and female progeny ratio produced after treatment. Therefore few questions arises: • We have here the data shoving effectiveness of hormones administration (increased plasma level of both hormones after administration – Fig 1) but we do not know whether i.e. corticosterone administration influenced also endogenous testosterone and vice versa. • Moreover, we do not know whether these treatment in fact changed male or female embryos ratio, so the study evaluates only the influence of the administration of these two hormones on gene expression in GD of F1 follicles but not on offspring sex selection. • Data cited by the Authors suggest the influence of time of hormones administration before ovulation on the offspring sex selection. As I assume by administering the hormone roughly 5 hours before ovulation the Authors expected the skew toward male offspring. But why they decide to select the timepoint 5 hours before ovulation and not i.e. 3 hours before ovulation. 3. Why Authors did not validate obtained results by Real-time PCR and were not trying to measure the level of proteins encoded by regulated genes. There are some suggestions in the paper that post-translational modifications could play here the important role, so the question arises whether the pure genomic approach is sufficient to give any hypotheses concerning sex selection. 4. Did Authors received in genomic analyses also the significantly regulated unknown genes? Since the process of sex determination in bird offspring is in fact not well understood maybe the key role in this process play genes (and proteins) not previously described (and not taken into consideration in ontology analyses by different software). Reviewer #2: Offspring primary sex ratio bias in birds has been a very popular topic and the idea that outcome of meiotic division could be non-random inspires both basic and applied research. The study by Wrobel at al. is a step forward into investigations on how hormonal levels in the female just prior to ovulation could affect outcome of sex-determine meiotic division in birds. This is probably the second study that looks at gene expression in the germinal disk in avian pre-ovulatory oocytes (after Aslam et al 2015), and the first one that does it following manipulation of hormones. Authors demonstrate that injections of hormones affect gene expression patters in the germinal disk, but do not study the outcome of meiosis in those disks, as this would probably be not technically possible. However, they also do not provide information on how accurate are testosterone and corticosterone manipulations in altering offspring primary sex ratios. Recent meta-analyses (Merkling et al. 2018 and Podmokla et al. 2018) show that such effects are rather weak and more likely to occur in response to testosterone manipulation. Thus, the current study provides some valuable new data, but leaves several questions still open. The experimental design is appropriate and sample sizes are good. The pilot study reassures that hormonal injections are effective. Molecular analyses are carried out up the standards. I have reviewed this manuscript before, and currently, I was happy to find that the presentation of the study has greatly improved. Few remaining issues are listed below. Line 70 – Sex steroids and glucocorticoids can influence telomere length. Please specify the tissue in which the cited references studied telomere length. Line 101-2- The current study does not look at the differential segregation of the sex chromosomes. Line 225 – Please check degrees of freedom for the denominators. Line 646 – Should be “selected”, this also refers also lines 653, 657. Supplementary materials are incomplete – original data for plasma hormone levels following injection of the hens is not provided. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-19-33739R1 Corticosterone and testosterone treatment influence expression of gene pathways linked to meiotic segregation in preovulatory follicles of the domestic hen Dear Dr. Navara: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Aneta Agnieszka Koronowicz Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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