Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 30, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-35982 GeoSES: a socioeconomic index for health and social research in Brazil PLOS ONE Dear Prof Barrozo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This is a very interesting paper and an important contribution. Based on the reviewers´ comments and my own reading I still believe the paper needs some revision. The reviewers comments are detailed below. Please, considered the very careful suggestions they made:
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We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 4 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper aims to introduce the GeoSES, a composite index that summarizes the main dimensions of the Brazilian socioeconomic context for health research purposes, to evaluate and monitor inequalities, and to develop resource and service allocation strategies. I would first congratulate the Authors of this manuscript of their extensive work. However, there are some important issues, listed below, that should obligatory be discussed / corrected / improved. 1 - In my opinion, the main contribution of the paper is methodological and the authors should highlight and discuss this. If the authors don’t agree with my opinion, then it would be good for them to advance a little bit. 2 –Intra-municipal index (lines 102-103). I suggest that the authors bring (and discuss, if necessary) how many municipalities, among 5,565, fit this criterion. (“GeoSES-IM, for municipalities with three or more Census sample areas”). 3 - How effective is the index for health research taking into account that the data is ~10 years ago? The authors could discuss this in the discussion section, conclusion section or in a section about the limitations of the work. 4 – Lines 417-420. The authors state that the index "can easily update it for each edition of the Demographic Census." There is an important discussion in Brazil about what the 2020 Census will look like and what issues will remain in the questionnaire, since the government has already signaled for the budget cut, which will affect the size of the questionnaire and so on. Therefore, it can be imagined that some variables used in this study will no longer be there as of the next Census. How do the authors see this and what could be proposed? Furthermore, and assuming that some variables will not be in the next Census, or were not in previous censuses, how can the index be compared in time and space? I would appreciate a discussion about it in the paper. Reviewer #2: This is a potentially interesting paper describing a new composite index of socio-economic well-being (the so-called GeoSES) for the more than 5500 municipalities in Brazil around 2010. Such index, which is constructed on the basis of the 2010 Census data, could be potentially used both by researchers and policy-makers. Yet, there are many aspects of the paper that should be improved. 1. In general, the paper is not very clearly written, and in some sections, it is confusing. While readers acquainted with the literature on the construction of composite indices might have an intuition of what the authors are talking about, this might not be the case for the general reader. In addition, some references look arbitrary or strange. The literature on epidemiology and health inequalities is huge, and the authors have chosen a curious selection for their reference list. Last but not least, the paper needs a thorough English revision. 2. The paper needs to be much more clear and transparent as regards the explanation and justification of the methodological choices. This applies to the entire “Methods” section (i.e. from page 5 to page 11). For instance: - What is the meaning of the segregation component? From its definition, I understand it can take negative values. How is that interpreted? - The authors are mixing all kinds of variables, very often going in opposite directions, so to say. For instance, higher values of the income variable are normatively desirable, whereas higher values of the poverty variable are normatively undesirable. If all the data crunching exercise has to have some meaning, it is crucial that all the variables point to the same direction (e.g. the higher the values, the better/the more desirable). It is unclear to me if this basic recoding exercise has been carried out by the authors. - The subsection of “Data collection and processing” is particularly obscure. - In the “Preprocessing” subsection the authors say they have added a value of 10 to their indicators to avoid problems with the zeroes, arguing that this does not affect the correlation structure of the data. This looks like an extremely arbitrary decision. Why not adding 1, or 100? What would happen to the results for these alternative choices? If the results are overly sensitive to the values of such constant, perhaps the use of PCA techniques is not the best one. - When explaining the steps followed to construct the GeoSES index, it is unclear to me why do the authors need to perform PCA up to three times. I understand the first one (to generate aggregate indices within each of the six/seven dimensions) and the second one (to bring all dimensions together into an overall component). Why then a third round of PCA? More explanations and justifications should be provided. - It would be helpful if the authors explained what do the extreme GeoSES values of -1 and 1 truly mean. That is: what would need to happen in a municipality to get a score of 1? - Again, the subsections of “Interpretation” (page 10) and “GeoSES extensive creation” are unclear. Very often, the authors take many things for granted and do not explain them (or even show a reference). Examples: Explaining what Moran’s I coefficient is and what it means, the same for the Geographically Weighted Regression models (GWR), the “Queen” neighborhood criterion to choose neighbors, and so on and so forth. Again, even if these are well-known methods for the specialist, they might be unknown to the general reader. 3. In the empirical section of the paper where the authors “prove” the validity of their measure by predicting certain health outcomes, the text lacks order and clarity. The authors add decorative maps (e.g. Figures 3 and 4) that are barely mentioned in the text, but nothing substantive comes out of them. 4. The authors try to sell the relevance of their approach by highlighting the limitations of currently existing approaches (e.g. like the municipal level HDI, or HDI-M). Yet, they should also point out the several limitations of their own approach. There is no such thing as “a perfect measure”, and all approaches have their advantages and disadvantages. For instance: (i) Composite indices have the advantage of simplifying complex information, at the cost of hiding important patterns that might exist in the data. (ii) In this line, composite indices are sometimes difficult to interpret, as they are made up by averaging all sorts of variables (e.g. a GeoSES score of, say, 0.1, might be obtained from high levels of poverty and low levels of segregation, or from very low education levels and high incomes, and so on). Thus, when policy makers have to make decisions on the basis of the GeoSES index, it is crucially important to know the values of the underlying variables. (iii) The use of PCA techniques might complicate comparisons over time. If the GeoSES index wants to be replicated with the new (2020?) Census or with previous censuses, the different components of the index will get different weights. Thus if the GeoSES index equals 0.2 in year 2010 and 0.3 in year 2020, we do not know if there has been a real improvement in the underlying variables or simply a variable reweighting through the PCA algorithm (or both of them simultaneously). (iv) PCA is one among several other dimensional-reduction techniques. Why not using, say, Factor Analysis? 5. In several parts of the paper, the authors state that the choice of variables included in the GeoSES index was driven by theoretical considerations. Looking at the list of selected variables and the standard questionnaires included in Censuses, I would rather say that the choice was driven by data availability issues. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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