Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 31, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-36052 Integrated Crop-Livestock Systems achieve comparable crop yields to specialized systems: a meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Peterson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript is wwell written and to the point and I feel it takes few corrections to be acceptable in Plos1. Please answer the comments given by the reviewers, which were consistent each other. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 05 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PLOSONE REVIEWER COMMENTS MS No. PONE-D-19-36052_reviewer Title: Integrated Crop-Livestock Systems achieve comparable crop yields to specialized systems: a meta-analysis COMMENTS The manuscript argues a study addressed to three main objectives: - understand the effect of crop-livestock integration on crop productivity under normal and adverse weather conditions; - determine likely production outcomes across environments and integrated crop-livestock systems types; - identify the most important moderating variables governing production outcomes for each type of integrated crop-livestock systems. The topic and the objectives of the study are very interesting from scientific point of view, therefore stimulated me to a careful reading. The manuscript is well structured and organized, according to the journal directions (Introduction; Methods; Results; Discussion; Conclusions). Each part of the manuscript is well written and understandable. Nevertheless, I found some little faults. So, I reported below some observations and considerations. I understand that the Authors included in the meta-analysis the studies that met specific criteria, but the fact that the study was only concentrate on North America, South America, and Australia determines a little limitation. In the methods, the Authors specified that crop species were grouped according to broad agronomic similarities and animals were grouped into small ruminants and cattle. So, what about the grouping for climate type, such as Mediterranean and continental? This aspect needs to be included to sustain the considerations reported in the discussion and conclusion. In figure 3, 5 and 6: "the dotted vertical lines represent ungrazed system yields"; I see just a vertical line at zero, where are the others? Figure 3: the error bars in dual-purpose crop and in forage rotation that are much larger than others is a little bit strange, please check them. The analysis that considered the dry or normal precipitation years (such as that reported in fig 5) could be absolutely correct but must be referred to the climate type. This because 500 mm can be normal precipitation in the Mediterranean climate and at the same time 1000 mm can be normal precipitation in the continental climate. I would like to suggest the distinction by climate type. So, I would suggest that a little improvement with minor modifications of the manuscript is needed for publish it on PLOSONE. RECOMMENDATION: I suggest MINOR revisions to the manuscript before the accepting it. Reviewer #2: This paper adds some interesting insights, supported by quantitative data from a systemic meta-analysis, to the evidence base on integrated crop livestock systems operated at medium and large scale. I read it with interest. Smallholder crop livestock systems were not included which is not a shortcoming but should be highlighted a little more strongly when describing the literature surveyed; and even in the title perhaps. The study itself, quite legitimately given the nature of the studies used in the meta-analysis, uses only crop yield as an outcome variable. This leads to a number of difficulties in interpretation. Why on earth would any rational farm manager opt for dual purpose crops on the basis of this analysis? This is easily resolved by clearly acknowledging that crop yield is not the best outcome variable for evaluating such systems “holistically”. There are economically valuable outputs from the livestock components which mean that crop yield and total system output do not correlate well (e.g. for dual purpose crops). At present I can only see this being hinted at in line 406 and the impression left is that it is only eco-system services that justify the inclusion of livestock and not the tomahawk steaks. Not having the data to evaluate this trade off does not kill this paper, in my view, as the implications for crop yield and soil factors and the discussions around these are important and well-articulated. This issue should, however be alluded to in relevant sections. Related to this, using the term “broad production outcomes” in the abstract is a little difficult to justify! Reviewer #3: This is a carefully conducted and well written meta-analysis on yields of integrated (crop-livestock) cropping systems as compared to arable cropping alone. I trust that the statistical analysis is well done – personally I cannot judge it and I hope that another reviewer will. I have just a couple of comments. 1) “Crop production (…) remains uncertain and a barrier to adoption” (line 16). Why is this? Are really yields the major barrier to adoption? Based on my (European) experience, I would not have this hypothesis. In my experience, the trend towards specialized cropping – and the inexistence of a trend towards ICLS – is due to organizational aspects and labour costs, mostly. Not crop yield, but – if any – the yield performance of livestock systems. 2) “Studies (…) did not include application of manure as slurry or compost” (line 205). The application of organic manure is a key feature of integrated farming systems – at least in my experience. Did they really not include organic manure application – or just not report about it? 3) The four types of ICLS are not fully self explaining. I would appreciate a short description (a sentence or two) describing each of the four strategies, and also the control systems that they were compared to. This could even be a table, instead of text. Please also briefly elaborate on the livestock type. I only realized at line 308 that small ruminants were also included. Were these many studies? In particular regions? 4) I would probably make sense, in the discussion, to more explicitly point out that the study does not compare the systems but only looks at the specific aspect of crop yield. To compare the systems, also livestock performance would have to be evaluated and the two “yields” would need to be evaluated together. In addition, other aspects would also need to be evaluated (environmental, economic, social). This is beyond the scope of the article, of course, and it is implicitly also mentioned. I would just summarize it in two or three sentences – as this is the kind of analysis that would actually be needed. And: Figure 5 and 6 x-Axis: do they really have to scale to 100%? Rather scale to 50% or 25%? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Commercial Integrated Crop-Livestock Systems achieve comparable yields to specialized production systems: a meta-analysis PONE-D-19-36052R1 Dear Dr. Peterson, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Sergio Saia, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-19-36052R1 Commercial Integrated Crop-Livestock Systems achieve comparable crop yields to specialized production systems: a meta-analysis Dear Dr. Peterson: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Sergio Saia Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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