Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 3, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-00231 High circulating elafin levels are associated with Crohn’s disease-associated intestinal strictures. PLOS ONE Dear Dr Koon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to the issues raised by the authors, please comment on this: I’m really impressed by all the work that has been put into this paper. The material is rather small, but I realize that these patients are scarce. I’m a bit concerned with the presented data on the multiplex cytokine data. My experience with these assays are that a considerable variation exist especially at low levels. You should include some more on the assay performance (detection level, CV) and some other statics than pure regression (is the observed difference significant). Remember than when you are fishing with so many cytokine, mass significance is an issue. However, you could also delete the cytokine data, I cannot see they add information. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 03 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments to the authors: 1. The title is appropriate and to the point and endeavours to prove the headline statement in the ensuing discussion. 2. In the Introduction section, I suggest a short succinct summary on the mechanisms involved in the fibrogenesis of Crohn’s disease and the link to elafin, clearly establishing the relationship. 3. Also in the Introduction on page 5 line 47 the following sentence should be amended to include the and…but the mechanism of this association is unknown AND has not yet been identified. 4. In the Materials and Methods section it must be made clear that there are 2 separate study groups (a) the serum sample group where only blood was taken and the (b) surgical group where colon and mesenteric fat is sampled. Also, that no blood was collected for the purposes of the study from (b). In the Inclusion and Exclusion criteria it should include whether active IBD at time of recruitment was a requirement for both the two groups mentioned above, especially for (a), or was the IBD quiescent at the time. 5. Further in the Materials and Methods section on page 6 line 47 the following sentence should be reviewed and amended: The healthy subjects did not have concurrent cancer, infection, obesity….. The control group in the surgical group (b) was patients with cancer requiring surgery! Maybe Inclusion and Exclusion criteria for the 2 study groups should be separated. 6. In the Results section the 2 study groups are discussed interchangeably creating the impression that all patients had all procedures. The importance here is that in the serum sample study according to supplementary Table 1 the Partial Mayo score for cohorts 1 and 2 were 3.9 and 4.2 while in the surgical group the colitis score was 6.8. Similarly, the HBI in CD was for the serum sample study was 3.6 and 4.2 for non-stricturing and stricturing disease respectively, while it was 7.4 and 5.0 in the surgical arm. This discrepancy should be explained and the extrapolation justified. 7. Can the authors please explain the discrepancy in the numbers ion Fig1D. The total number of CD patients in the serum study was 95. Where are the rest of the patients as results of only 65 are shown. 8. Finally, in the Results section, the mean age of the control group in surgical arm of the study was 20 years older than the IBD cohorts. Although the results suggest that this should not be of concern please corroborate this a reference as such. 9. The Discussion is generally well written and motivated, but I find some of the conclusions made are due to overinterpretation. From the data, serum elafin will not be a great discriminant for structuring CD as a stand-alone. Prospective testing will also increase the cost as the authors stated that elafin, at this point, is unable to predict future structuring. It should be stated that this may be an adjunct to currently available modes of investigation in CD in general. 10. Finally, the authors must give a schema of the clinical use of elafin in current clinical practice as a conclusion summary. Thank you, Sincerely Erns Fredericks Reviewer #2: Several issues to be raised: What is the characteristic of stricturing CD patients, inflammatory/fibrotic or both?Please explain In cohort 2; samples were taken from the bio bank and is this influence the level/expression of elafin? Any correlation between elafin expression and endoscopiC score for CD? How do you measure the quality of colonic and mesenteric fat samples? what percentage of mucosa is involved?Were tissues inflamed or non-inflamed? Elafin expression/level is also be influenced by several cytokines such as IL-8, and do you look at cytokines expression too? A total of 4 samples were used for next Gen whole transciriptome RNA seq- (are they the same location of stricture? extend of stricture?small or large bowel stricture? was it inflammatory or fibrotic stricture? Does duration of disease and BMI influence the elafin expression' please explain further In discussion subtypes of stricture either inflammatory/fibrotic or mixed potentially may influence the level/expression of elafin? In the past elafin is less expressed in IBD and how do you explain why is it relevant in CD as opposed to UC? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Raja Affendi Raja Ali [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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High circulating elafin levels are associated with Crohn’s disease-associated intestinal strictures. PONE-D-20-00231R1 Dear Dr. Koon, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all the concerns and answered all the queries raised in the first round of review. I feel comfortable that all requirements have been met and that the revised manuscript can proceed to publications. It is a complicated study with many moving parts, but in the end I feel the authors attempted to answer the questions raised in the aims of the study. Congratulations. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ernst Fredericks Reviewer #3: Yes: Huahong Wang |
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PONE-D-20-00231R1 High circulating elafin levels are associated with Crohn’s disease-associated intestinal strictures. Dear Dr. Koon: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pal Bela Szecsi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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