Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 17, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-34921 Quality of Malaria Data in Public Health Facilities in Three Provinces of Mozambique PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Colborn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 19 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf Additional Editor Comments (if provided): In addition to responding to the reviewers' comments, please consider reading two papers on data quality published in the Journal of Global Health 2019 supplement on Rapid Access Expansion (RAcE) of integrated Community Case Management of malaria, pneumonia and diarrhea. The articles by Davis et al. and Yourkavitch et al. include information from data quality assessments in Mozambique and may provide relevant information to inform/reference in the background and conclusions of this paper. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well-written paper on an important topic that requires more attention by implementers and policy makers. The paper presents important information about malaria case data quality issues at the source of entry, an issue likely applicable more broadly to facility-level reporting. While this paper explicitly focuses on issues of recording patient-specific information into registries (Lines 91-94), it could be stronger by briefly addressing some of the potential system issues that could contribute to the reported results. Consider adding a succinct definition of quality in the methodology section, particularly since the implicit definition used in this paper (high sensitivity and specificity and high Cohen’s Kappa) differs from that used in most DQAs. In the methodology, please clarify the difference between laboratory and outpatient registers, and in which instances authors abstracted data from each if both were available at the facility. This is noted in the analysis section (different source form for different dichotomous outcomes). Assuming both outpatient and laboratory registers have report malaria test results, from which of these forms are data aggregated from individual facilities into the HMIS? Are there instances in which the authors found data recorded appropriately on one form and missing from the other? These system issues, if present, may contribute to the overreporting in the HMIS. The results indicate significant overreporting of malaria cases in the HMIS, attributed primarily to issues of missing registers and poor recording by facility staff. Have the authors considered other contributing factors such as whether data from other sources (e.g. APE data for malaria (iCCM or CCMm)) are being reported into the HMIS at the district level, skipping facility-level aggregation? Did the authors find any missing data in the available registers? If so, this seems an important potential contributing factor. Missing data on testing and treatment may be a symptom of facility-level stockouts of RDTs and ACTs, which has been a widespread problem in Mozambique. I encourage the authors to consider addressing this in the results and conclusions, as appropriate. Reviewer #2: Reviewer Recommendation and Comments for Manuscript Number PONE-D-19-34921 General Comment: The authors present a methodologically sound analysis of the quality of both registry data as well as reporting of data from facility to HMIS in three provinces of Mozambique. Their overall conclusion about the weak quality of the malaria data is supported by the results presented and responds to a practical information gap. They have used methods previously reported on in the literature. Details for consideration: Overall, the writing is clear, however a few points have been identified that could benefit from further clarification. 1. Abstract a. In second paragraph (lines 43-49) would be useful to mention the two lines of questioning the study undertakes: quality of registry data and quality of reporting b. Line 54-55: note that gold standard has not been defined previously c. Line 60-61: this does not align with relatively large difference between registry and HMIS suspected malaria indicator for Cabo Delgado (20%); for Maputo, the number 0.46% is not reported anywhere else in the manuscript—perhaps use this number in Table 3 for clarity/consistency? d. Line 68-69: I think the authors could consider whether the statement about “access to registers” as a remedial measure is the most salient one to be drawn from this analysis (I did not see any data on the availability of registers, though there was mention in the discussion of the possibility of registers being misplaced—line 264—but this is not related to access to registers; the problem is cited a one of “data storage” so perhaps the recommendation should respond to this) 2. Introduction a. Word count permitting, it would be helpful to incorporate a bit more background on state of the art practice in data quality assessment, and also why the approach to measuring quality was chosen 3. Methods a. Line 113-114: to improve flow, introductory sentence could be modified to be more inclusive of the types of specific examples that follow (as is, it only refers to symptoms communicated, when the data actually collected goes beyond that) b. Line 128: would help to include an explanation as to why the 6-month lag was selected (as opposed to a shorter lag) c. Lines 148-155: why were these three outcomes selected to assess factors associated with matching data? d. Lines 155-161: how/why were these predictor variables selected? None capture capacity/training of health worker. 4. Results a. Line 203: for context could mention that November is high transmission period, as it is not mentioned in this paper b. Table 3: was any information collected on registry stockouts that could provide context 5. Discussion a. Line 236: Was it possible to determine whether register stock outs occurred during the period of the study? b. Line 244-245: interpretation appears to be overstated as “correctly managed” factor was only statistically significant for one indicator (‘RDT match’) across provinces (and in one province for ‘RDT result registered’) c. Line 249-252: the differences in quality of data collected at different wards was only statistically significant for one of the outcomes tested (fever match) d. Line 277: The authors could reconsider whether the statement about “access to registers” as a remedial measure is the most salient one to be drawn from this analysis. They did not report any data on the availability/access to registers, though there was mention in the discussion of the possibility of registers being misplaced—line 264; the problem is cited a one of “data storage” and record keeping/management so perhaps a recommendation should respond to this. e. Lines 252-254: Inability to explore influence of health worker capacity (e.g. data management and service provision) on data quality could be considered a limitation if this is due to the fact that data was not collected on such topics f. Line 267: interestingly, the source cited (16) notes that problems with exit interviews resulting in recall bias occur primarily with respect to collecting information about “provision of clinical advice”; this limitation was not reported for information relating to “provision of clinical actions” (such as taking an RDT test, prescribing medication) g. Generally, the reader is not left with a clear message about what should be done with these conclusions—practical implications for improving data quality in Mozambique (only mention improving access to registers) h. It would be useful to see something about future research that could complement this study to understand the “why” behind the data quality issues identified in this paper. Compliance with PLOS One Data Policy: It appears that there are some restrictions to the data used in this study. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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