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Original SubmissionJanuary 14, 2020
Decision Letter - Itamar Ashkenazi, Editor

PONE-D-20-01236

Why, what and how do European healthcare managers use performance data? Results of a survey and workshop among members of the European Hospital and Healthcare Federation

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Reviewer #1: In this paper, the authors investigated the data for evidence-based decision-making by managers in hospitals and healthcare organization in Europe in 2019. From the discussion and conclusion, this paper emphasized the data how to be collected and used. This paper seems interesting for readers to understand Europe's managers why, what and how to use performance data. The authors may add the sections of suggestion and further study in this paper.

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Revision 1

Dear Editor and Reviewer,

Thank you for giving us the opportunity to submit a revised version of the manuscript entitled: “Why, what and how do European healthcare managers use performance data? Results of a survey and workshop among members of the European Hospital and Healthcare Federation” (PONE-S-20-01560).

We greatly appreciate your comments and those of the reviewers. Please find below a point-by-point reply to the comments made.

All revisions to the manuscript have been added using track changes. A “clean” revised version of the manuscript has also been submitted, in line with journal’s requirements.

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We proceeded accordingly and aligned the supporting file names with PLOS ONE’s style requirements. Throughout the manuscript, when referring to the supporting files, appropriate amendments have also been made.

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We apologise if this was not made clear enough in the original submission.

The data set, underlying this paper’s findings, was made freely and publicly available using a data repository service. Before doing this, and due to collection of certain personal information in the questionnaire, we sought the advice of Amsterdam UMC’s Data Privacy Officer. Following their suggestion, and prior to making it publicly available, the data set was anonymised. Nevertheless, the available published anonymised data set allows for a complete reproduction of the analysis done in the paper. The data set is additionally complemented with a data codebook, awarded a digital object identifier (doi: 10.5281/zenodo.3607986) and make available on the following link: https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3607986.

Reviewers' comments:

R1. In this paper, the authors investigated the data for evidence-based decision-making by managers in hospitals and healthcare organization in Europe in 2019. From the discussion and conclusion, this paper emphasized the data how to be collected and used. This paper seems interesting for readers to understand Europe's managers why, what and how to use performance data. The authors may add the sections of suggestion and further study in this paper.

We proceeded accordingly and added a section with suggestions for further studies on the topic at the end of the discussion section of the paper (line numbers 524 – 541):

“To further advance the field, building on key findings of this work but also on its limitations, we propose a number of potential future research topics and methodological approaches. Looking at a more homogenous sample of healthcare managers’ profiles, and including other geographical settings - beyond Europe, while accounting for the influences of characteristics of specific healthcare systems, would lead to more generalisable results. We also suggest unpacking the reasons that hinder a more wide-spread use of performance data in decision-making on the operational level and doing so by looking at the topics of the lack of confidence in (underlying) data, timeliness, appropriateness and actionability of metrics as well as the skills needed to effectively use (including communicate) the data. Additionally, exploring the drivers of reported differences between privately and publicly-owned healthcare organisations, in their use of performance data, could optimise cross-learning opportunities. When looking into skills, crucial for middle managers in order to enhance the use of data, we propose paying special attention to benchmarking, as an organisational learning tool, which currently seems underused. Based on our experience from this study, we also suggest study designs and research modalities that do not only focus on the ability to ask questions. In line with (participatory) action research methodologies, future research should also try to engage participants into a discussion, validating survey-based data and eliciting further contextual information and even disagreements, thus deepening our understanding of what drives effective and efficient use of performance data for decision-making.”

Once again, thank you for giving us the opportunity to submit a revised version of the manuscript.

Yours sincerely,

Damir Ivankovic and co-authors

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Decision Letter - Itamar Ashkenazi, Editor

Why, what and how do European healthcare managers use performance data? Results of a survey and workshop among members of the European Hospital and Healthcare Federation

PONE-D-20-01236R1

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Itamar Ashkenazi, Editor

PONE-D-20-01236R1

Why, what and how do European healthcare managers use performance data? Results of a survey and workshop among members of the European Hospital and Healthcare Federation

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