Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 5, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-30745 Inpatient morbidity and mortality of measles in the United States PLOS ONE Dear Dr Silverberg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 07 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: REVIEWERS COMMENTS PLOSONE JANUARY 2020 (PONE-D-19-307-45) Reviewer’s Report Title: Inpatient Morbidity and Mortality of Measles in the United States Date: 11.01.2020 Version 1 General comments: Topic is of relevance and global interest. Reads well but introduction and methodology do not contain sufficient detail to appreciate study and anticipate results. Title: Title seems appropriate. Suggest adding source of data (discretionary) Abstract: Page 3 line 48-49, 52-53: A concise summary but more information on background and analysis would be useful. Page 3: Line 62; suggest writing defining vs by also writing it in full and defining other abbreviations when first mentioned. Introduction: Page 4 line 84: suggest removing “that” Introduction Suggest adding additional information such as - Information on the epidemiology of the most recent outbreaks in the US, any changes in predictors of hospitalisation in the US over the years or experience from other developed countries - useful for understanding of the context surrounding this study and changes to expect. Methods: Study area: No detail. It would be useful to know the geographic distribution of hospitals included in the sample, rural -urban differences etc whether it cover high risk locations e.g. migrant populations? Page 6 line 97- Sampling: Suggest more detail is provided on the sampling procedure – what criteria informs the weighting? How many hospitals were represented in this sample? What types of hospitals were included, how many were children’s hospital’s? Did the sample include hospitals from communities that had an outbreak during the period and were these populations targeted? Study Population: What were the inclusion criteria- ICD 9/10 criteria alone? What proportion had laboratory confirmation? The age of patients was not specified? Were there any other exclusion criteria? Data collection Page 6: line 103- 10: What information was collected from the database? Though some is reported with the statistical analysis, but this aspect is not clear. It will be helpful to know the information collected on patient level characteristics, hospital level characteristics and outcome measures? Was there collection of data on immunisation status? Page 6 line 106-7: Provide more detail on the co-morbidities studied especially those known to be associated with hospitalisations from measles what proportion had chronic respiratory conditions? Was it a risk factor for hospitalisations and longer duration of stay? Was this analysis done? Results Page 9 line Table 1 what chronic conditions? Page 10 line 153 – suggest “Factors associated with hospitalization for measles” Page 10: line 164 – “complications” kindly rephrase and make it clearer . Page 10 line 169 - any sex differences? Page 13 line 192 and 217 also need to be rephrased. Page13 line 208; Define abbreviation ED Why were children <5 years not considered as a separate group in the analysis? Discussion Extensive and covers findings Page 17 line 287: contains mortality data not seen in results Limitation Page 19 lines 331 and 332 should have also been in the methods section. Conclusion Section for conclusion not highlighted and should relate to objectives and findings of study as done in the abstract. Graphs: some graphs do not have titles References: Page 29 line 366-369 in capitals – any reason? Suggest including more recent articles. Reviewer #2: This MS captures topical and relevant data from a nationwide sample in US. Although it does not cover the most recent period, it should be of use to policy makers and program managers to make informed decisions about impact of renewed measles transmission in US. The analysis is straightforward and logical. And the language easy to follow. I have made a coupe of minor comments to sharpen some points. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Anindya Sekhar Bose [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-19-30745R1 Inpatient morbidity and mortality of measles in the United States PLOS ONE Dear Dr Silverberg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 27 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Ka Chun Chong Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This revised manuscript have addressed most of the reviewers' comments. Please address the last comments from the reviewers before a formal acceptance. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer’s Report version 2 Title: Inpatient Morbidity and Mortality of Measles in the United States Date: 06.03.2020 Comments The responses provided by the authors have largely addressed my comments. I have noted that the graphs are still not labelled, I mean, they do not have titles. I wonder if this can be addressed if the paper is to be published? Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed most of the comments in the revised version. However, my earlier comments about inappropriate comparison between measles CFR has not been addressed. The way the authors state this is as, "Inpatient mortality was 3.3% (34 deaths) among measles inpatients, which was numerically higher than other inpatients (2.3%) and nearly 10-fold higher than previous mortality estimates of all cases of measles in the US (1 in 1,000)." Stating that this estimate of measles related mortality is ten fold higher than "earlier estimates" seems to indicate that the authors have identified a new estimate measles CFR and is misleading as the two rates apply to different at risk populations. Replacing 'previous' with 'overall' in quoted sentence should allow the reader to draw the correct conclusions about measles mortality. Barring this issue, I recommend that the MS should be accepted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Anindya Sekhar Bose [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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Inpatient morbidity and mortality of measles in the United States PONE-D-19-30745R2 Dear Dr. Silverberg, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Ka Chun Chong Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-30745R2 Inpatient morbidity and mortality of measles in the United States Dear Dr. Silverberg: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ka Chun Chong Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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