Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-25808 Friends or foes: How activists and non-activists perceive and evaluate each other PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kutlaca, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to having independently read the manuscript, I have now received comments from two reviewers with expertise in the field of activism. As you can see below, both reviewers had positive things to say about your paper and differed primarily in the number of revisions needed for the paper to be publishable. In terms of my own reading of the paper, my opinion is a bit more in line with the comments from Reviewer 2. Specifically, I agreed that the theoretical basis for the hypotheses could be made clearer. I think clarifying the theoretical rationale would also make the hypotheses themselves easier to understand. Both reviewers also raised concerns about the samples of activists and non-activists that were collected. Reviewer 1 questions the extent to which we can be sure that the activist samples are in fact "activist" given that their inclusion is only based on one instance of activist activity. Reviewer 2 raised concerns about whether some of the comparisons between the activists and non-activists are valid (particularly in study 4). In terms of my own view, I shared these concerns about the samples used and also thought that some discussion is needed about the small size of some of the activist samples such as in study 4. To be clear, I don't think any of the issues raised either by myself or the reviewers are in any way insurmountable. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 19 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper presents 4 studies examining how activists and non-activists view one another. The contribution is timely and novel. Very little work has examined these kinds of intergroup judgments, which are interesting both theoretically and practically. On the whole, the researchers seem to find that activists distance from non-activists more than non-activists distance from activists. This is particularly the case when non-activists deny moral responsibility for taking action. This asymmetry does have implications for how activists might engage (or not engage) non-activists in supporting the cause, potentially limiting the growth of social movements. It’s a nice set of studies, nice samples (of people engaging in collective action), and it fills a gap. I recommend the paper be published, after addressing the following concerns. The patterns observed here are almost inevitably contingent on a whole range of factors—what is the ideology of the activists? Who is the target of activism? What is it’s goal? How do non-activists stand to benefit (or suffer) if the goal is achieved? How large is the movement? Is it radical or supported by large majorities of non-activists? For that reason, I am a concerned that about the way the paper presents activists and non-activists as “one-size-fits-all” labels, and suggests that the patterns observed here are generalizeable across activist contexts. To me, it seems more appropriate to consider how these evaluations emerge out of particular kinds of activist contexts. I think this general issue need to be raised and addressed in the intro, and in the general discussion, with particular reference to the claims about how activists perceive non-activists. I think the authors also need to be a bit more careful with claims about how activists’ perceptions of non-activist might undermine the growth of the movement. That might happen, but we can’t actually be sure that the perceptions observed here actually DO result in behaviours by activists, or responses from non-activists that actually deter recruitment or more passive support. It might be worth qualifying those claims a bit more. There is the implication that activists might have biased perceptions of non-activists, at list compared to the reverse. Of course, it might be that activists have perceptions that reflect a meaningful social reality, while non-activists bias there perceptions in a way that protects a superordinate or personal identity. Another way to approach the practical implications of the data is to suggest that activists might not fully tap into the support they might get from non-activists, given the rather positive impressions non-activists (sometimes) have of activists. The activists samples are all based on people who participated in an action. Is it fair to characterize that sample as an activist sample? To what degree do we know that participants identified themselves as activists? If this is the only action they ever take, are they activists? I think the authors need to address the limitations of their samples in this regard, and the degree to which the activist label fits, and how this might limit generalizeability to other operationalizations of “activist”. In the concluding paragraph, the authors suggest that activists might distance from non-activists to such a degree as to “redefine group boundaries”. What group are we talking about here, and where is the evidence for that? Reviewer #2: How activists and non-activists perceive each other is a potentially interesting line of enquiry. However, the design and theorising around these studies needs to be clearer to shed any light. Following are areas that need most focus: 1. The hypotheses are not always clear (eg., H2b) and appear to be based more on assumptions than engagement with theory and evidence. For instance in relation to H1b it could equally be argued that in some interactional contexts activists might place a premium on individual responsibility to act (if you don't act who will). It would be good to see more consideration of counter-arguments and evidence as well as engagement with literature that does pertain to the relationship between activists and non-activists (e.g., around politicisation and movement building). Activists and non-activists are treated here as static de-contextualised categories which limits theorisation of the intergroup relationship. 2. Studies 1 and 2 show few significant effects and certainly don't warrant the strong claims made in this paper. The authors might want to consider the similarity of the two samples (contrary to the authors' assertions, participants in Study 1 were not Left -- they were at the centre of the scale and would more accurately be described as moderate - the description given to participants in Study 2 who were also towards the centre of the scale). Moreover, rather than very different populations, the activists were predominantly novices. What was most different was the context -- Study 1 was conducted at a protest where a shared identity would be salient. 3. The comparison of samples in Study 4 was equally problematic but for different reasons: 22 WILF activists compared with MTurk participants who were arguably unlikely to be part of WILF's movement potential (mostly men and no indication of their views on the activist issue) and who did not belong to a group that could provide the basis for self-categorisation. 4. Related to the above two points, the asymmetrical effects that have been found in the research could be explained in terms of group processes of differentiation on salient dimensions arising from self-categorisation for those at a protest (Study 1) and those belonging to a well defined activist group (Study 4). 5. The suggestion that this research shows that social change may depend on the relations between activists and non-activists is not warranted as it was not tested (top p.29); the suggestion that inclusion in the activist category requires that one participate in collective action (be an activist) seems tautological (p.29); and the claim that activists differentiated more clearly between non-activists in Study 3 compared to Study 1 is problematic given that they were only given the opportunity to evaluate different types of non-activist in Study 3. 6. Given that activist groups spend so much time and effort trying to understand non-activists for the purposes of recruitment and mobilization (certainly more than the latter spends trying to understand them) it seems naïve to conclude that what is needed is for activists to simply see non-activists as more like them. Surely the fact of recruitment and mobilization shows that matters might be more dynamic and complex. Whilst this research was not designed to consider real world complexity it would be good to see some reflection on this and the limits to validity of the findings. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-19-25808R1 Friends or foes? How activists and non-activists perceive and evaluate each other PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kutlaca, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have now carefully read both your responses to the reviewers' comments and your revised manuscript. First, I would like to thank you for the care you clearly took in addressing the changes both I and the reviewers thought were warranted. I think the current manuscript is stronger and clearly exceeds the bar for publication in PLOS ONE. That said, I do think that the paper would benefit from one more minor change. Specifically, I still think that the description of the hypotheses in the introduction could be clarified. As it is currently written, the the distinction between the moral vs. instrumental justifications is clear, but I think readers will still have trouble following the distinction between the individual vs. collective reasons for action/inaction. The opening sentence for the second paragraph on page 6, for example, does little to set up how hypotheses 1a and 1b differ. Given the importance of this section of the introduction for the rest of the paper, I think a little more could be done to make it clearer exactly how the different parts of the hypotheses (i.e., 1a vs 1b and 2a vs 2b) differ. Again, I know this is a very minor revision, but I think it would be beneficial. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 03 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Daniel Wisneski Academic Editor PLOS ONE [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-25808R2 Friends or foes? How activists and non-activists perceive and evaluate each other Dear Dr. Kutlaca: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Daniel Wisneski Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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