Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 10, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-34142 Differences in the performance of resuscitation according to the resuscitation guideline terminology during infant cardiopulmonary resuscitation: “approximately 4 cm” versus “at least one-third the anterior-posterior diameter of the chest” PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Oh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please review and address all the feedback below, focusing especially on the comments related to clarity around the outcomes. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 09 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. In line 49, what is being referred to as the “same problem”? Is it the confusion that is detailed in Lines 44-45, or the decrease performance of CCD referred to in lines 45-48, or both? 2. In Line 51, “the quality of CPR” is not explicitly defined as what the study designates to determine what “quality” is/means. 3. The hypothesis, lines 51-55, states the belief that one CCD target will result in “lower” quality of CPR than the other CCD target. As the hypothesis lays out the objective of proving one being lesser than the other, the data, analysis, and discussion is based upon the context of one being better than the other. Although this is one in the same, it would be more consistent to present the information uniformly (i.e. discussing how one CCD target is of lower quality rather than of higher quality vs. stating a hypothesis that one CCD target is of better quality than the other). 4. Under Study Participants, line 74-75 states that “Age, sex, and race were not considered as limitations for study participations.” However, under Randomization Method, lines 104-105, groups were randomized by stratifying according “to their sex for the purpose of allocating the participants in each group with the same ratio of sex.” Is not sex, therefore, an inclusion criterion for study participation if the aim of randomization of the groups were to make sure the sex ratio was equivalent? If no participants were dropped, then was those recruiting participants aware and/or considering the number of males and females that were approached and volunteered for the study? 5. “Quality,” again, has not been defined for this study. Therefore, when discussing quality, as is in Lines 191-192, in comparison to the quality of chest compression in other studies, it becomes difficult for the reader to understand the comparison/contrast being made. Please define what the study indicates as “quality CPR” and “quality chest compressions” 6. Caution when using the term “significantly.” In lines 198-200, when using the phrase “significantly lower” it eludes to the reader that there was a statistically significant (P < 0.05) outcome where in fact the authors are stating the opposite. For example one can say based on the findings of this study that there was no statistical difference between groups A and B for complete recoil and the proportion of trials where complete recoil was noted was fewer than that required for overall high quality CPR, which is consistent to a previous study. Not that, line 198, “was significantly lower than that required for high quality CPR...” 7. Lines 201-202, “…the risk of injury might be increased when using the term “at least” contradicts the study’s conclusions and hypothesis. If stating/concluding Group B, with CCD target of “at least”, was better than Group A, CCD target of “approximately”, then by having Lines 201-202 causes doubt and conflicting view point. Be careful on wording in addressing this point. 8. Based on the third limitation outlined in Lines 208-214, the issue in the discussion and conclusion is that one cannot state that the use of “approximate” vs “at least” being better than the other, as the author has done, without accounting for confounding variables which is the entire phrase of the CCD target. One cannot conclude, based on the study design and data presented, that the differences between the groups were to “approximate” vs “at least” or “one third the anterior-posterior diameter of the chest” vs “4 cm.” It can only be discussed/concluded on the entire phrase itself and not to the segments within the phrase. Would therefore remove the context around Lines 190-191 and Lines 195-197. Reviewer #2: PONE-D-19-34142: statistical review SUMMARY. This study estimates the effect of two resuscitation guidelines on the performance of infant cardiopulmonary resuscitation, measured in terms of average compression depth (ACD; primary outcome) and a battery of secondary outcomes. I have some concerns about the definition of the variables under study (major issue 1), the presentation of the results (major issue 2) and, finally, a possible limitation of the study (major issue 3) MAJOR ISSUES 1. Lines 110-115. The description of the secondary outcomes is a bit cryptic. For example, how is "correct hand position" defined? What does the number of total compressions measure? When is depth "adequate"? When is recoil "complete"? A detailed description of the outcomes under study is not only a courtesy to the readers (such as me) who are not necessarily experts of resuscitation methods, but it also allows results reproducibility. In addition, in which sense do these variables measure resuscitation performance? 2. In the statistical analysis section, the authors correctly say that they use the Chi-square tests or Fisher exact tests to compare proportions. However, in Table 2 differences between proportions are incorrectly tested using the Mann-Whitney U test (at least this is what the note of the table says). Please clarify. 3. Lines 89-90: the same manikin was used in all the experiments. Isn't this a limitation of the study? Shouldn't one exploit manikins of different sizes to robustify the results? Please clarify this point. Reviewer #3: The methodology appears to be sound, and the results do appear to be consistent with the data (supplemental data). Their statistical analysis plan appears to be appropriate as well. Though I wish they would have described or mentioned what data was normally distributed or not. It appears that it was only interns or residents that participated in the study. I would have mentioned this in the study, instead of saying medical doctors. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-19-34142R1 Differences in the performance of resuscitation according to the resuscitation guideline terminology during infant cardiopulmonary resuscitation: “approximately 4 cm” versus “at least one-third the anterior-posterior diameter of the chest” PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Oh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Thank you for your edits. The revised manuscript has addressed our concerns. One minor additional question: What specialty of interns and residents were enrolled? We only know that they were certified in BLS. It is possible that the specialty of residents might impact on their CCD. For instance, a pediatric resident (who has more confidence with children) might be more aggressive than an internal medicine resident, leading to deeper compressions by the pediatric residents. If the distribution of different specialities between Group A and B are unequal, this could bias the results.============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 17 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Kevin Ching, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Differences in the performance of resuscitation according to the resuscitation guideline terminology during infant cardiopulmonary resuscitation: “approximately 4 cm” versus “at least one-third the anterior-posterior diameter of the chest” PONE-D-19-34142R2 Dear Dr. Oh, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Kevin Ching, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-34142R2 Differences in the performance of resuscitation according to the resuscitation guideline terminology during infant cardiopulmonary resuscitation: “approximately 4 cm” versus “at least one-third the anterior-posterior diameter of the chest” Dear Dr. Oh: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kevin Ching Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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