Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 4, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-24879 Cross-cultural adaptation of the 4-Habits Coding Scheme into French to assess physician communication skills PLOS ONE Dear Dr. BELLIER, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 06 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This brief manuscript reports upon a French-language validation of an instrument for assessing physicians’ communication to patients (4-Habits Coding Scheme, 4HCS). The findings and the previous literature are clearly laid out in easily digested formats (e.g. informative tables). I only have three substantive concerns. 1. Unlike previous work with this coding scheme, the authors rightly use ICC to assess interrater reliability. However, it is problematic that those ICC reliability scores are so low. The low reliability implies that you may not be accurately measuring physician communication. Can you estimate the amount of noise in your ratings? That is, how much of the variance in the four habits might be due to inconsistent measurement? Also, I would like to hear more about the differences between raters, including greater contextualization of the ratings in the literature. 2. Actual patient interactions differ from enacted consultations in many important ways. The examination of simulated interactions in the current study is not necessarily a problem, but it is distinct. Thus, the research report should more fully explore how such an application of 4HCS contrasts with a genuine doctor-patient meeting. 3. Kaiser developed the four habits to guide physicians’ interactions with patients. Then, researchers assessed their communication with the 4HCS, studying the extent to which they employed those target strategies. How similar is that original context in which the 4HCS was developed to the medical school where your data were collected? To what extent does the curriculum include the four habits? I ask this question in light of the factor analysis finding only two, rather than the four, dimensions of the 4HCS. One might not hypothesize finding all four habits in a population where physician training differs substantially from the original setting. 4. Some minor suggestions. Line 59 “supporting that” is awkward. Try “supporting the conclusion that” or “suggesting that.” Lines 214-5: double negative maybe unavoidable here, but you could add a line to increase clarity. Same suggestion for line 290. Lines 219-220: Are these thresholds common? Cite someone to support their appropriateness. Best of luck on your manuscript. Reviewer #2: Thank you for allowing me to review your article. I find the manuscript overall in decent shape. The objectives and aims of your study are clear. The study is itself useful. I did have several issues and questions I summarize below that led me to recommend that you revise and resubmit. 1. Provide evidence for the cultural (in)variance of the 4-HCS. The tool has been translated into several languages. Can you briefly summarize the psychometric findings of these instruments (e.g., what were CFA results in these studies)? In yet other words, would you expect, on the basis of these past studies, to reproduce the factor structure that was generated with the US American samples? 2. What *is* the potential of the 4-HCS? 3. There is arguably a problematic issue with the 4-HCS: it does not help physicians learn communication skills, which are behaviors. The tool merely assesses whether trained observers can identify four stages of the physician-patient conversation. HOW these stages are enacted is neither coded, nor assessed; nor does the tool assess how "well* the physician, say, demonstrates empathy; that is what does "good" nonverbal behavior mean? Indeed, the generality and broadness of the scale is what makes it useful. I would certainly not use it to train communication competency. 4. What was the length of the standardized patient conversations? 5. I don't quite understand why you conducted the CFA first? It seems to me that we usually run a structural model first before we run a measurement model? It seems to me that if you are predicting four factors, you want to use CFA procedures. You may not need the EFA. But perhaps I am not quite understanding your analyses. I admit, I had a bit of a hard time following your data write-up since it's all not quite in APA style. 6. I am missing a discussion of the practical implications. So what about cross-cultural differences in US and French samples for the measures? What does that mean for physicians and patients and communication skills. 7. In all, the manuscript could probably profit from a really strong edit. Thank you for letting me review this manuscript. I'd be delighted to review it once, should the editor extend a revise and resubmit. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-19-24879R1 Cross-cultural adaptation of the 4-Habits Coding Scheme into French to assess physician communication skills PLOS ONE Dear Dr. BELLIER, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 01 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Gian Mauro Manzoni, Ph.D., Psy.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Well done! For my comment 2 (Actual patient interactions differ from enacted consultations) on the previous submission, the revision doesn’t address my concern, and I’m afraid that my comment was unclear. Let me explain what I meant. As an expert in interpersonal communication, I can say that scholars who study health communication will likely be interested in your research. It would help you reach these readers if you gave a brief assessment of your choice of methods in this study of physicians’ communication skills. In particular, I’m suggesting that the authors clearly differentiate their work from a study with normal patients. There are clear advantages of using standardized patients, but there are also limitations, which remain unmentioned in the revision. So, I’m requesting a sentence or two to justify the choice to study enacted as opposed to genuine interactions. Perhaps something along the lines of “Although the study did not explore actual patient-doctor interaction, standardized patients allowed us to...” Reviewer #2: Admittedly, I had several critical questions in my initial review of the manuscript. In my view, the authors have done a *most* effective job in addressing not only my concerns but the other reviewer's concerns as well. I am wholly satisfied with these changes. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Cross-cultural adaptation of the 4-Habits Coding Scheme into French to assess physician communication skills PONE-D-19-24879R2 Dear Dr. BELLIER, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Gian Mauro Manzoni, Ph.D., Psy.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-19-24879R2 Cross-cultural adaptation of the 4-Habits Coding Scheme into French to assess physician communication skills Dear Dr. Bellier: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Gian Mauro Manzoni Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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