Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-20612 Glycemic effect of post-meal walking compared to one prandial insulin injection in type 2 diabetic patients treated with basal insulin: a randomized controlled cross-over study” PLOS ONE Dear Professor Rattarasarn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 04 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study comparing the effects of prandial insulin with post-prandial walking. Anything that encourages exercise ahead of insulin should be encouraged. I think that we should regard this as a pilot study which requires further work and hopefully publication will stimulate this. However: • The study was only over a very short period. HbA1c will not have had time to change as significantly as it could have over say 12 weeks. • This was a group of patients were on a variety of OHDs – I realise that they were controls against themselves but I am surprised that some patients remained on sulphonylureas. I assume that the basal insulin (type and dosage) remained the same for both legs. • Only 14 out of 19 completed the study. Within these groups some in the walking post-meal group did not walk and is there any guarantee that in the group that had the prandial insulin that they did not walk post meal? • 700 steps is not very far and I suspect rather than aiming for “Walk as fast as possible” setting a target of possibly 1000 or 1500 steps would have been better. • I am not sure why the time that patients were asked to walk was not after the same meal that they were going to take their prandial insulin – surely that would have been a better comparison? • I may have missed this - did any of the patients develop DKA or HHS? • Only fructosamine and HbA1c were measured. Lipids, BP, weight etc would have been useful. Particularly a Q of L questionnaire would have been interesting to see if patients preferred the walking or the prandial insulin. • It would have better if the groups could have been controlled for calorific intake. Eating more at lunch in the walking group will have diluted the results. Reviewer #2: The authors adress whether post-meal walking may be as effective to lower HbA1c as once daily prandial insulin administerd before the main/largest meal in patients with type 2 DM and inadequate glycemic control (A1c > 7.0%) despite treatment with oral hypoglycemic drugs and basal insulin. A cross-over design with two six weeks treatment periods and a 2 weeks washout period is empoyed. A mixed model is employed to test for significance between the two treatment types/periods. Major concerns: Although the authors adress an important and relevant question, the study design is flawed by the duration of the study periods and the primary endpoint (A1c) chosen. The authors acknowledge that their design with 6 weeks treatment periods and a 2 weeks washout-period carries a significant risk of carry-over effects. The discussed fact, that the A1c did not change during the washout period it is not helpful at all since even significant changes in glycemic excursions are unlikely to change A1c concentrations within this short time period. Since the authors seem to be aware of this, either a different primary endpoint or a different study design should have been chosen. Minor concerns: Statistical analysis: the details of the the mixed model (i.e. parameters chosen for fixed, random effects, period, etc.) should be indicated in order to make the analysis plan reproducible. The patients were instructed to use prandial insulin before the main meal (basal plus period) or to briskly walk after at least one meal (post-meal walking period). To judge the comparative effects of the 2 interventions compareable time periods should be analyzed. I.e., if prandial insulin was given before dinner, this period should also be looked at in the post meal walking group and data should be presented accordingly. Detailed data regarding the insulin therapy should be indicated (i.e. dose, time-course of dose escalation) should be indicated in order to judge whether appropriate dose adjustments were made. The caloric intake in the basal plus group was significantly lower. Can the authors offer an explanation for this finding ? Some english language editing is adviseable. The individual participant data used for the final analysis should be made available. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Prof Andrew Collier Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-20612R1 Glycemic effect of post-meal walking compared to one prandial insulin injection in type 2 diabetic patients treated with basal insulin: a randomized controlled cross-over study” PLOS ONE Dear Professor Rattarasarn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please, address the remaining minor issues raised by the reviewers. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 13 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Noël C. Barengo, MD, PhD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The concept of exercise in place of insulin is an interesting and useful one. This should be regarded as a pilot and encourage others to undertake further work. There are faults with the design in this study but cannot be changed now. The authors answer all the points made by the reviewers. Reviewer #2: Although the authors acknowledge the major concerns of the reviewers in their response letter no appropriate changes have been made to the manuscript. The authors should clearly state in their conclusion that the study results may be influenced by carry over effects due to the short inntervention and wash-out periods Chosen. Reviewer #3: A randomized controlled cross-over study was conducted in patients (n=14) with type 2 diabetes with the goal of determining the effect of post-meal walking on glycemic levels compared to prandial insulin. The change in HbA1c was the primary outcome. There were no significant differences in HbA1c from baseline to follow-up in with or between the groups. Minor revisions: 1- Abstract: Please clarify the following statement since both confidence intervals contain zero.It seems reasonable that neither group showed a statistically significantly decrease over baseline. “By per-protocol analysis, post-meal walking and basal-plus groups significantly decreased HbA1c by 0.13(range:-0.74 to 1.08) and 0.26(range:-0.8 to 0.08) %, respectively.” 2- Line 145: Indicate if the alpha level was one- or two-sided. The beta for a power of 0.80 is 0.20. Please clarify. 3- Line 146: This statement is technically incorrect. “At least 14 participants were needed to demonstrate the statistical significance.” Possibly something to this effect would be more appropriate, “A paired-tests with an alternative hypothesis mean of 0.5 and a standard deviation of 0.65 requires a sample size of 14 to attain 80% power, assuming a two-sided alpha of 0.05.” Possibly this test should be one-sided since a decrease in HbA1c is expected. 4- Line 149: Indicate the underlying covariance structure used in the linear mixed models and the criteria for choosing it. 5- Line 189-191: Provide the overall p-value for comparing times 0, 3 and 6. If the overall p-value is significant use a multiple comparison tests to summarize pairwise differences. 6- Both Figures 1 and 2 display nearly identical data. Include only one of these. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Stefan Bilz Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Glycemic effect of post-meal walking compared to one prandial insulin injection in type 2 diabetic patients treated with basal insulin: a randomized controlled cross-over study” PONE-D-19-20612R2 Dear Dr. Rattarasarn, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Noël C. Barengo, MD, PhD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Stefan Bilz Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-19-20612R2 Glycemic effect of post-meal walking compared to one prandial insulin injection in type 2 diabetic patients treated with basal insulin: a randomized controlled cross-over study” Dear Dr. Rattarasarn: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Noël C. Barengo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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