Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-23634 Impact of etonogestrel implant use on T-cell and cytokine profiles in the female genital tract and blood PLOS ONE Dear Dr Haddad, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 13 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript reports the results from a prospective study investing the potential risk of etonogestrel implant use on change of T-cell and cytokine profiles in the female genital tract and blood. I have below comments or questions. In Statistical Methods, for analysis of lymphocyte memory cells with four group types, please make it clear if each subject would have certain % of each of the 4 types of memory cells at each time point or each subject would only have one type of the 4 types of memory cells at each time point. Per the recent publication (Nature Communications 10, Article number: 3753 (2019)), semen may have effect to alter the risk of HIV acquisition. It would be informative in this study to add some analysis to investigating the potential interaction effect between semen presence/absence and etonogestrel implant use. In Tables 2 and 3, are the p-values the FDR adjusted p-values or the original p-values? Please provide more information in a table to show the % and N at each time points for semen presence, STI, blood and BV. Reviewer #2: Please justify the use of vaginal lavage samples for cell phenotyping, and provide cell numbers and cytokine concentrations in addition to percent change. Explain how your data relates to data from DMPA studies; vaginal immune parameters are highly variable and could account for differences between studies. Reword conclusions to remove the implication that data from your study suggests that HIV susceptibility is enhanced by Eng treatment. Reviewer #3: This article describes the results of a prospective, observational study of changes in HIV target cells and cytokine concentrations associated with use of the ENG contraceptive implant. Few data have been published on the association of ENG implant use and HIV risk to date. With implant use increasing rapidly in areas of high HIV prevalence (most notably in sub-Saharan Africa), the study addresses an important gap in the scientific literature on ENG implant use and HIV susceptibility. In their analysis, the authors evaluated changes in immunological markers in cervicovaginal fluid and blood PBMCs and identified associations between ENG implant use and increases in the proportion of CD4+ cells expressing CCR5 but decreases in the CD4:CD8 T cell ratio in the genital tract only. Results of analyses assessing markers of T cell activation were inconsistent in both tissue types and few changes in cytokine concentrations were identified after ENG implant initiation. This study’s strengths lie in its prospective design which accounts for potential variation in immunological markers at different stages of the menstrual cycle and adequate ascertainment and control of important covariates (STIs, BV). The study is limited by its small sample size as only 15 participants had data from all four pre/post implant study visits. Given this limitation and the fact that these data are drawn from an observational design, which could further be confounded by unmeasured factors, results should be interpreted carefully. Major comments • Given the observational nature of this study, the authors should avoid causal language in the interpretation of their results, such as how implant use had an “effect on”, “results in” or “led to” changes in immunological markers. It’s highly recommended that this language be amended throughout the paper. • Additionally, caution should be taken when interpreting changes in immunological markers as changes in HIV risk. Based on the final two sentences in the first paragraph of the discussion, it sounds as if the authors are suggesting that counseling around implant use should be altered based on the results of this study. This may be a step too far without evidence linking implant use with HIV acquisition. If anything, these results suggest that implant use may alter immunologic factors that have been shown to be associated with HIV risk, and highlight the need for further evidence. Please consider revising. • The introduction could benefit from a clearer statement of the authors’ hypotheses and the biological or epidemiological evidence to support these hypotheses. Is there reason to believe from these studies that ENG exposure would increase HIV risk or alter immunity in the genital tract? Why is this research question worth pursuing aside from the current lack of evidence? • Clarification of the sampling is needed in the methods. Were all implant users from the parent study included? If not, how were ENG implant users sampled and is there reason to believe there is selection bias from the sampling? • Please provide rationale for the decision to impute the lowest measured value for BLQ results rather than using an approach that is independent of measured values (e.g half of the LLOQ). Would this not bias your results? Minor comments • In the introduction, it is worth noting that all of the studies that were conducted prior to ECHO were observational • In the Results, consider adding the median/range of number of days from LMP that samples were collected for each pre-implant time point, and median/range number of days from implant insertion for the two post-implant time points. It is unclear whether you were able to collect the samples within the defined target luteal/follicular periods. • What was the purpose of the models assessing the association between implant status with the CVL visit characteristics? Please clarify. • In the models assessing the distribution of lymphocyte memory cells, a linear model seems inappropriate with a categorical outcome. Can you clarify what your dependent variable was in these models or further explain your rationale for the linear model? • Could you please elaborate on the types of STIs diagnosed in the first paragraph of the Results? • Did occurrence of detecting <100 CD3+ T cells vary significantly by the four visit types? If so, explain how this might influence your results. • It is interesting that only a decrease in GCSF was noted in the genital tract after implant initiation. A similar reduction in GCSF was also observed in plasma (although not significant after adjusting for multiple comparisons). Consider discussing the role of this cytokine in the discussion and how it may relate to ENG exposure from a biological perspective. • In the third paragraph of the discussion, the sentence beginning “Progestins can regulate the expression of numerous genes involved in multiple cellular functions…” should have a citation. • Author group for citation 4 (ECHO paper) needs to be corrected • It would be helpful to spell out the memory cell classifications in Figures 1 and 2 either in the legend or the description ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-19-23634R1 Impact of etonogestrel implant use on T-cell and cytokine profiles in the female genital tract and blood PLOS ONE Dear Dr Haddad, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 06 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Manish Sagar, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Editor’s comments 1) Please update this link: www.mtnstopshiv.org/node/773. 2) Please provide a citation for the following statement: “These CVL enriched lymphocytes are phenotypically and functionally shown to be comparable to cells resident at the underlying tissue.” 3) Please clarify are these only live cells, as assessed by Zombie staining: “CVLs collected from 53 (79% of all visits) visits contained greater than 100 CD3+ T-cells and were subsequently included in this analysis.” 4) In Table 3 please correct: % of CD4+ CCR5% T-cells expressing: to % of CD4+ CCR5+ T-cells expressing 5) Given the reviewer’s comments, please include the total number of viable CD4+ T cells at the different visits in Table 2. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: For the Figures 1 and 2, what’s the dependent variable in the linear mixed model? Please provide the model structure of the equation. Reviewer #2: I appreciate that the authors, in response to reviewers’ comments, provided more details about the limitations of their study, provided more rigorous statistical analyses, and downplayed the potential implications of their results for HIV transmission. However, I don’t think they adequately addressed the reviewers concerns about the use of CVL samples as a source of genital tract lymphocytes. The two references that were added to bolster the claim that CVLs provide adequate samples (Iyer SS 2017, Swaims-Kolmeier 2016), and others (McKinnon LR 2014, Archary D 2015) clearly indicate that the cell yield in CVLs is very low compared with other sampling techniques (cytobrush, biopsy). In McKinnon, the median CD4 cell count in CVLs was 89 vs. 1,170 for cytobrush samples. Furthermore, I did not find references for the claims (page 17) that cells in CVLs are phenotypically and functionally comparable to resident cells in underlying tissue; there are few CD4 T cells in the normal vaginal epithelium (Pudney J 2005), and cell viability is often an issue with CVL samples because the acidic vaginal pH can kill lymphocytes in minutes (Olmsted SS 2005). These issues remains a major weakness of this paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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