Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 25, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-35687 Alzheimer’s disease diagnosis from diffusion tensor images using convolutional neural networks PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marzban, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration by two Reviewers and an Academic Editor, please make the suggested corrections posed by both Reviewers so I can render a decision on this manuscript. Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The aim of this work is to provide an automatic classification of the MCI and AD versus HC. For some subjects having multiple scans at different timepoints, the effect of selecting only scans that were taken a year or more from the previous one with respect to the same subject has been investigated. In addition, the impact of having different timepoint scans for the same subject in the training set and how the separation based on the subject has been assessed in terms of the effect on the overall performance. The topic handled in this study is important and an active research area. The paper has been well-organized. However, the following revisions are required to improve its quality. 1) Optimization is an important stage and the standard (Euclidean) gradient descent optimization has been used in this work. The authors should add the following statement to make clear that this approach presents efficient results, so it has been applied: "Recently, Sobolev gradient based optimization has been used in deep network based methods to diagnose AD [R1,R2]. However, the standard gradient descent optimization is efficient in the proposed approach in terms of computation." R1:"Diagnosis of Alzheimer's Disease with Sobolev Gradient Based Optimization and 3D Convolutional Neural Network", Numerical Methods in Biomedical Engineering, 35(7),2019 R2:"Fully Automated Classification of Brain Tumors Using Capsules for Alzheimer’s Disease Diagnosis", IET Image Processing, 10.1049/iet-ipr.2019.0312, 2019 2) The following sentence should be updated to make its meaning clearer: "In comparison with the diffusion maps in comparison, MD outperformed the other two maps; namely: FA and MO." 3) There are many different approaches in this area. The reason to use a deep learning based technique in this study should be explained clearly by supporting appropriate recent studies. Therefore, the following statements can be added: "Image based diagnosis of AD is important and required mainly to avoid subjective assessments [R1]. Deep learning based methods gives successful results particularly in medical image analysis [R2] due to flexible and efficient formulations [R3]." R1: "Biomedical Information Technology: Image Based Computer Aided Diagnosis Systems", The 7th Int.Conf. on Advanced Technologies, 2018 R2: "Deep Learning in Medical Image Analysis: Recent Advances and Future Trends", Int. Conf. Computer Graphics, Visualization, Computer Vision and Image Processing 2017 (CGVCVIP 2017), Lisbon, Portugal R3:"Formulas Behind Deep Learning Success",Int.Conf. on Applied Analysis and Mathematical Modeling (ICAAMM2018), 2018 4) There is typo in; "Moreover, Increasing the number ....", which should be "Moreover, increasing the number...." 5) The meaning of the sentence; "....the limitation of the dataset; especially when dealing with medical data; this is the main cause of overfitting." should be supported with the following recent work indicating main issues in deep learning based methods: "Challenges and Recent Solutions for Image Segmentation in the Era of Deep Learning", 9th Int. Conf. on Image Processing Theory, Tools and Applications (IPTA),2019 The following sentence; "The batch normalization layer is used to reduce the problem of overfitting [68,69]" should be updated as "The batch normalization layer is used to reduce the problem of overfitting [68,69] due to the importance of it in deep learning [R]" R:"On The Importance of Batch Size for Deep Learning", Int. Conf. on Mathematics (ICOMATH2018), An Istanbul Meeting for World Mathematicians, Istanbul, Turkey,2018 Reviewer #2: The authors compared different input data settings and experiments settings to predict AD/MCI/HC from DTI using CNNs. The experiments and analyses are comprehensive with in-depth discussions. The paper is well presented and has enough novelty. The only improvement I can think of is that the author weren't super clear about the CNNs' structures. It is unclear it is a 2D or a 3D CNN. In addition, the author didn't mention how multiple input were handled when there were more than one input to the CNN, e.g. MD+GM. And the cascading method is also not clearly defined. Lacking these details might lead to difficulty in reproducing the work. I suggest the author add those technical details to the method section. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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The ADNI was launched in 2003 by the National Institute on Aging (NIA), the National Institute of Biomedical Imaging and Bioengineering (NIBIB), the Food and Drug Administration (FDA), private pharmaceutical companies and non-profit organizations, as a $60 million, 5-year public-private partnership. ADNI is funded by the National Institute on Aging, the National Institute of Biomedical Imaging and Bioengineering, and through generous contributions from the following: Alzheimer’s Association; Alzheimer’s Drug Discovery Foundation; Araclon Biotech; BioClinica, Inc.; Biogen Idec Inc.; Bristol-Myers Squibb Company; CereSpir, Inc.; Eisai Inc.; Elan Pharmaceuticals, Inc.; Eli Lilly and Company; EuroImmun; F. Hoffmann-La Roche Ltd and its affiliated company Genentech, Inc.; Fujirebio; GE Healthcare; IXICO Ltd.; Janssen Alzheimer Immunotherapy Research & Development, LLC.; Johnson & Johnson Pharmaceutical Research & Development LLC.; Lumosity; Lundbeck; Merck & Co., Inc.; Meso Scale Diagnostics, LLC.; NeuroRx Research; Neurotrack Technologies; Novartis Pharmaceuticals Corporation; Pfizer Inc.; Piramal Imaging; Servier; Takeda Pharmaceutical Company; and Transition Therapeutics. The Canadian Institute of Health Research is providing funds to support ADNI clinical sites in Canada. Private sector contributions are facilitated by the Foundation for the National Institutes of Health (www.fnih.org). The grantee organization is the Northern California Institute for Research and Education, and the study is coordinated by the Alzheimer’s Disease Cooperative Study at the University of California, San Diego. 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Alzheimer’s disease diagnosis from diffusion tensor images using convolutional neural networks PONE-D-19-35687R1 Dear Dr. Marzban, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Stephen D. Ginsberg, Ph.D. Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-19-35687R1 Alzheimer’s disease diagnosis from diffusion tensor images using convolutional neural networks Dear Dr. Marzban: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Stephen D. Ginsberg Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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