Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 4, 2019 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-19-24923 AVATREE: An open-source computational modelling framework modelling Anatomically Valid Airway TREE conformations PLOS ONE Dear Mr Nousias, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 21 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Fang-Bao Tian Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 2. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: 'This research has been funded by the European Regional Development Fund of the European Union and Greek national funds through the Operational Program Compet-itiveness, Entrepreneurship and Innovation, under the call RESEARCH - CREATE - INNOVATE (project code:T1EDK-03832).' We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: 'The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.' 3. Please ensure that you refer to Figure 7 in your text as, if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the figure. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Thank you for submitting your work to Plos One. It has been commented by two independent specialists. As you can see, their views regarding the paper quality are quite different. I would give you an opportunity, to clarify the major issues raised by Reviewer 2, given that the tool introduced may have important application in the community. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have read PONE-D-19-24923 which develops a computational modelling framework called “AVATREE” to define the personalized boundary conditions required for the simulation of pulmonary functions. Specifically, the AVATREE works as follows: (i) using image data to provide patient-specific representations of the structural models of the bronchial tree, (ii) establishing and extending 1D graph representations of the bronchial tree, (iii) generating 3D surface models of the extended bronchial tree models, (iv) producing probabilities visualization of airway generations on the personalized CT imaging data, and (v) offering an open-source toolbox in C++ and a graphical user interface integrating modelling functionalities. The AVATREE can successfully create anatomically valid airway tree conformations, which would be helpful to eventually predict gas flow and particle deposition characteristics in the healthy and diseased bronchial trees. In my view, this computational modelling framework is worth popularizing, and therefore I advise the paper to be accepted by the PLOS ONE. Reviewer #2: This article presents AVAtree, a software designed to take CT images and create computational descriptions of the pulmonary airways. The aim of the paper is to provide an end to end tool that creates airway trees from imaging, which would be highly useful for the community. However, there are several issues with the presentation of the models employed in the context of existing studies and softwares in the area, and there is not enough information on whether the end-point models of the airway anatomy reflect real lung structures to thoroughly assess the validity of the methods. 1. It was not clear from the manuscript how to access or use AVAtree, as this is a proposed opensource software. The link to a gitlab repository is given as a foot note, but clearer instructions would be beneficial. An attempt to access this repository at https://gitlab.com/vvr/LungModelling led to a ‘page not found’ error. Therefore it was impossible to assess whether the software behaves as described. 2. There appears to be some confusion regarding the existing literature in the background section. This section is somewhat unfocused, and needs work to clearly motivate the research being conducted. For example, Fernandez et al. looked at generating lung surface representations but this is the only study looking at the lung surface in this section. It appears to be presented in respect to defining boundary conditions for fluid dynamics models, but as far as I am aware the Fernandez model has not been used in that way. The section then jumps to a Hegedus who look at idealised representations of the upper airways, which is not related to the Fernadez study. 3. Reference [4] is incorrectly given as a reference for AVAtree on page 2. 4. Section 1.1.3 – I think the citation for coupled 3D-1D models is incorrect. Tawhai & Lin [37] is a review article, and to state that this study did the modelling is not correct – the original papers are cited in that reference. 5. The Florens model is not defined very well in section 1.1.3 and its relation to the two Tawhai studies that surround it is not clear. 6. Again, Tawhai [10] is a review, it is not the paper that defined the volume filling branching model, and it did not focus on constrictive lung conditions. The Bordas study is one of many studies that use, or build upon these methods to predict function (see below), and the other studies are neglected from discussion. The Varner paper in this paragraph seems to me to refer specifically to branching mophogenesis in lung development, which is different to representing developed morphology in a model. 7. A similar open-source pipeline is available in the Chaste framework – presented in a Bordas paper cited in this manuscript. This is not really discussed and should be as the two frameworks are similar in many ways. 8. Section 2.1 (Segmentation and airways centerline extraction). This appears to be a new implementation for airway segmentation. But how do the authors know this is accurate? Several software, including opensource software have been generated to segment airways. The employed algorithm needs to be compared in some way to the field. This should be a comparison with existing algorithms and/or a comparison to a gold standard (perhaps a manual segmentation). 9. The branching method described first by Tawhai [4], was first modified by the same group, (Tawhai et al. Journal of Applied Physiology 97: 2310-2321, 2004). Variations of this algorithm have been implemented by Bordas et al [cited] who provided an open source implementation. But variations have also been presented by Abadi et al (IEEE transactions on medical imaging 37: 693-702, 2018) and Mullally et al. (Ann Biomed Eng 37: 286-300, 2009), and Montesantos et al. PloS one 11: e0168026, 2016). In general, modifications have been made to suit a groups own modelling applications – to claim these changes as an improvement, would require some improved comparison to morphological studies. For the most part these models perform fairly similarly, and are good representations of the airway structure of the lung. 10. The difference between this and previous methods is a PCA based splitting of seed points, very limited information is given about why one would do this (it seems more complicated than other methods), or what improvements it brings. The algorithm should at the very least be compared to real lung morphometric data, as has been typical in previous studies using similar algorithms. 11. It is not clear how the volume of the lung is defined from imaging, or how generated branches are restricted to lie in the lung volume (if at all). 12. Given there is presumably a complete 3D representation of the upper airway tree from CT, some information needs to be given regaring why would want to represent these branches as idealised tubular structures for CFD? 13. Figures associated with dataset collection (and some beyond) have no numbers 14. It is not at all clear what is meant by personalised boundary conditions, or how they are calculated – what is being simulated for which personalised boundary conditions are needed? Or do these boundary conditions relate to tree generation? 15. To what level is the extended tree generated? The figures suggest that this is not to the level of the acinus as in most previous studies using similar algorithms, but that this is tunable. More information on this would be beneficial, especially in relation to how well the lung is represented it different choices are made. 16. Fig 2 shows one very ling thin branch distending from the main upper airway tree – this does not look anatomical, I would suggest that the algorithm has missed some branches from this main airway, as a very long and thin branch like that is unusual. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
|
| Revision 1 |
|
PONE-D-19-24923R1 AVATREE: An open-source computational modelling framework modelling Anatomically Valid Airway TREE conformations PLOS ONE Dear Mr Nousias, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 13 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Fang-Bao Tian Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: For the most part the authors have satisfied my concerns. However, the need for a comparison between generated tree structures and measured lung morphology remains. The authors have noted that their tree structures are consistent with those generated by Montesantos et al., but don’t provide direct evidence of this in the figures provided. It is left to the reader to go back to that paper and determine how similar the generated trees are. In addition, the Montesantos study is a simulated tree, and it would be most appropriate to compare directly to measurements of airway anatomy. Figures 4-9 of the cited Montesantos et al. paper, shows a comparison between their generated tree, the trees generated by other simulation studies, and, critically, anatomical studies (Horsfield and Cumming, for example). One or two figures like this should be included to verify the model. It would be reasonable for these to be Supplementary Material rather than in the main manuscript, but these data are needed to show how well the model for tree generation performs. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 2 |
|
AVATREE: An open-source computational modelling framework modelling Anatomically Valid Airway TREE conformations PONE-D-19-24923R2 Dear Dr. Nousias, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Fang-Bao Tian Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfied my concerns raised in the last round of review. Thank you for adding the statistical information on the trees, which will help readers interpret the paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-19-24923R2 AVATREE: An open-source computational modelling framework modelling Anatomically Valid Airway TREE conformations Dear Dr. Nousias: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Fang-Bao Tian Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .