Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 18, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-26269 Under His Thumb The Effect of President Donald Trump’s Twitter Messages on the US Stock Market PLOS ONE Dear Mr Scholtens, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In particular, we would like you to address the issues raised by the two referees about the data processing, the size of the dataset and the limitations of this study. The two referees also raised concerns about the terminology used to refer the temperament of President Trump and also asked for a more detailed explanation and justification of the methodology. We ask you to make sure that the methods are described in sufficient detail to enable reproducibility and replicability. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 14 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors investigate the effects of President Donald Trump's Twitter use on financial returns of companies he mentions at the daily timescale using an event study methodology. The analysis is conducted appropriately, however some clarifications are needed in order for the manuscript to be publishable in my opinion. 1) The authors declare they eliminate from their analysis any tweet that was online for less than 24 hours. This seems to me an unnecessary restriction, since financial markets react on a much faster time scale nowadays and tweet deletion doesn't necessarily imply that it would have no effect. I invite the authors to expand on the justification for this choice of threshold; 2) The authors refer numerous times to the President's "temperamental nature". While it can be understood why they call it like that, it seems inappropriate to me on a scientific journal and would suggest they find an agreement with the editor on the choice of wording; 3) I would suggest the authors introduce the event study methodology and statistical testing with more detail, giving particular attention to the distinction between quantities calculated in the estimation period or in the observation period. 4) In the definition of the CDA test statistic, \\overline{u} and \\overline{u_it} appear in the formulas but are never defined. This makes the explanation particularly confusing. I strongly suggest that the authors revise the whole section and spend more words explaining the methods, since they cannot be easily understood from the text as they are written; 5) Reference to the original paper by Cowan (Cowan, A. R. (1992). Nonparametric event study tests. Review of Quantitative Finance and Accounting, 2(4), 343-358) should be there; 6) In the definition of the non-parametric test, no clear definition is given for quantities M_i and S_it. Also, there is some confusing phrasing regarding positive abnormal returns (line 224) and negative abnormal returns (line 227), which should be made more clear. 7) In Table 1, a p-value for the Jarque-Bera test would be easier to understand for readers who don't know the quantiles of the Chi Squared distribution by heart; 8) Figure 1 panels should be made of the same size and with same x axis limits in order to be easier to read and compare. Also, axis labels instead of plot titles would make the plot easier to understand at a glance. Reviewer #2: The paper presents an analysis of the effects of president Trump twitter messages on the stock market. The paper is rigorous in the data analysis and comply with the strict requirements of PLOS ONE with regards to data availability and statistical analysis. However, I have a number of complaints about the data used in the paper, the presentation and justification of the data analysis techniques employed and the strength and interpretation of the conclusions. I think these complaints should be acted upon to make the paper better. I detailed my comments in the following: 1) Data The dataset used in the analysis, in my view, is too restrictive. There is no really justification on the reasons it should be based just on the first two years of presidency of Trump. I can understand the reasons of the starting date, but there is no real reason to restrict it to just two years. In fact, it would have been much more useful to extend it to the present day (so one additional year) and then study if the activity of the president actually made the found effects on the market and perhaps showed some decay over time. The major problem is that the data set is too small, once irrelevant or questionable tweets are removed. The analysis is based on only 100 tweets! Not to mention that these 100 tweets then become only 81 once sentiment analysis is applied to them, (assuming the 19 neutral tweets did not find any use)! The set is too small, in my view, to support the analysis that followed as other factors happening at the same time could have produced the observed result. The use of more data would certainly make this possibility smaller. For the same reasons I would also extend the event window from 2 to maybe 3 or 4 days. This would enable to account for holidays or other delaying factors on the effect the tweet could have on the market. Also, an analysis of the effects of the window size on the conclusions would also be quite interesting. Minor comment: - the distinction between "estimation window" and "event window" is not clear. - why did you not had access to more high-frequency information? One of the authors is from a school of management and so this should not have been so difficult. 2) Data analysis techniques While the formulation of the hypnotises and style of the analysis is very clear and presented with rigour, the motivations for the choice of some of the techniques has not been clearly justified. Some more explanation on the reasons you chose the "market and risk adjusted returns model" would have been useful. More importantly, why did you choose the "crude dependence adjustment model"? And could you provide some reference for it? Why did you use the Jarque-Bera statistics? Why not one of the many other statistics? The choice of some of these methods should be clearly justified so as not to suggest the choice could have been biased by the results. Minor comment: - what does the index t stands for in the formula at page 8 line 208? - why loosing the strength of the sentiment provided by SentiStrength and just accounting for its positive and negative nature (as reported in line 244, page 10)? It would have been quite interesting to relate the strength of the opinion to its effects. It could have provided also more interesting arguments for the analysis reported at the end of page 14. - in the discussion you mention an "analysis of the tone of the tweets by using textual analysis". If this is a reference to the use you did of the results provided by SentiStrength, I am afraid it is not that strong! 3) Interpretation of the results I fund quite strange that in a scientific paper the authors could make such "personal" and "opinionated" comments such as: "We assume that the temperamental nature of the president results in lack of predictability" (page 3, line 64) or again "temperamental nature" (page 7, line 163) or, finally, your mention of the possibility that someone with prior knowledge of the president's tweets my able able to profit from them (page 15, line 351). I think such comments are better left out from a scientific paper as to avoid possible attacks that would lower the scientific value of the conclusions. -- Minor point: page 4, line 106: "the may" -> "may" ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-19-26269R1 Under His Thumb The Effect of President Donald Trump’s Twitter Messages on the US Stock Market PLOS ONE Dear Mr Scholtens, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers are mostly satisfied with your first revision but raised a few more points that need to be addressed before we can consider the manuscript for publication. In addition to the points raised by the reviewers, we also ask you to better describe how the sentiment analysis (SentiStrength) works and how could one use it the reproduce the results. We also ask you to clearly acknowledge the limitations of observational studies and causality analysis in the abstract and in the main text. A data availability statement also needs to be added in the manuscript (see https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability). We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 10 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I appreciate the replies and modifications the authors provided in response to the comments both by me and by the other reviewer, which I believe have made the manuscript more readable and easy to understand. I still have two comments which I think need to be addressed before the paper is sound for publication. 1) While I agree with the authors on the choice of only two days in their event window to avoid confounding events and I think 100 events are sufficient to draw some conclusions, I also think that showing some robustness to sample selection would reinforce the results, given the significance of the tests is not particularly strong. I think the authors didn't respond appropriately to the main issue presented by reviewer #2 in their comment #11 (whom I thank for raising the issue which I didn't notice at first), where it was asked a reason for the choice of limiting their sample to the first two years of presidency instead of considering tweets up to present day. Unless the authors have a sound justification for this choice, I would suggest they perform their analysis on the updated dataset. 2) At line 250 (page 10) in the revised manuscript I believe w should be the number of stocks with positive CAR, not negative, in order to be consistent with the statements above. Reviewer #2: This is the second version of the paper and I see that all my comments have been considered and taken action upon, as far as it waspossible, given the available data. I also appreciate very much the extension of the work taking into consideration the actual numerical strength of the sentiments provided by SentiStrength. I think this add value to the paper. I still have a few minor comments that I would like you to address before the paper could be published: 1) You introduce the use of the S&P 500 at page 4. I believe most readers will know what it is. Yet, given its importance in your analysis, a few lines of introduction could be useful to those that have poor knowledge about this index. 2) Please re-write your first hypothesis reported at the end of page 5. It is not clear. 3) I really appreciate your clear explanation of what an "event study" is, at page 6. It is really clear now and also justify the small window of time you considered. 4) You should motive more clearly some of the paper's decision, like for example the one related to removing companies involved in mergers and acquisitions (page 7). Why? The president could have also commented on them too! Also, at page 11, you (still) did not justify the use of the Jarque-Bera statistics for a normal distribution. Why this specific statistics and not, for example the Kolmogorov–Smirnov or the Lilliefors tests, which are better known? 5) At page 11, Mike Thelwall surname is misspelled at line 276. In general, please double check the text as you might have added some weird english with your editing (e.g. page 18, like 397-398) 6) Page 13, you added a line to table 1 with the p-value of the Jarque-Bera statistics. Is 0 correct? Explain it. 7) page 19, you removed a sentence on future research on the effects in time of the president tweets. I thought that was very interesting. Why removing it? Also, the very last sentence of the paper reads odd. Written in that way, in my view, it seems to say that you could not establish any lasting effects, while what you wanted to say is that you could not find any experimental support to say that there were lasting effects, although there could have been. The two things are very different and you might want to measure clearly your words when you discuss such "political" topics. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Under His Thumb The Effect of President Donald Trump’s Twitter Messages on the US Stock Market PONE-D-19-26269R2 Dear Dr. Scholtens, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I believe the authors properly addressed all the comments raised by both reviewers, thus I recommend to accept the manuscript for publication. Reviewer #2: The paper has been much improved compared to the first version I received. I think the comments of the reviewers were instrumental to that. The authors has addressed all my comments and I believe the paper is now ready to be accepted and published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-19-26269R2 Under His Thumb The Effect of President Donald Trump’s Twitter Messages on the US Stock Market Dear Dr. Scholtens: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Alexandre Bovet Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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