Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 9, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-19333 Clinical impact of pathology-proven etiology of severely stenotic aortic valves on mid-term outcomes in patients undergoing surgical aortic valve replacement PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Aside from reviewer comments, please address the small sample size of the post-inflammatory and congenital groups and how this might limit power and generalizability of the results. The three groups are very different and it is uncertain if residual confounding exists. The combined adverse outcomes are not well matched to the disease pathology and needs to be well justified. ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 26 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a retrospective analysis of 201 patients undergoing aortic valve replacement (AVR) for severe stenosis, with surgical pathology dividing patients into 1) post-inflammatory, 2) congenital, or 3) calcific/degenerative Not surpisingly, those with calcific aortic valve pathology were older, with higher number of comorbidities, notably coronary artery disease, hypertension, that portended worse outcomes on median 4.1 year follow up. Also not surprising was the finding that the congenital group was younger and a larger proportion remained asymptomatic after AVR. Not so intuitive was the finding that the congenital group had a higher incidence of combined adverse events compared with the post-inflammatory group. This study points to the important ideologic concept that aortic valve disease is systemic disease, and accurate diagnosis implies attention to other systems that are predicted to be affected according to type. The manuscript would be more informative if a few points were clarified: 1. Line 38 states that “There has been a considerable increase in the number of aortic valve replacements (AVR) for severe aortic stenosis (AS) in recent years. What is the evidentiary basis for this statement? 2. One of the important values of this work is the validation or not of preoperative imaging in determining which risk category to place expectations for that patient. How much should we doubt our imaging and how aggressive should we be about surgical pathology? Lines 290-3 state that discordant cases were found when disease type (based on mitral involvement) was misdiagnosed as post inflammatory aortic disease when in fact it was calcific. It would be helpful to quantify the number and character of discordant diagnoses to know the scope of accuracy in this study. The study references prior work (references 5, 23) and points out the importance of diagnostic accuracy but does not quantify the diagnostic accuracy of imaging of this study. 3. The methods section describes that these were all patients undergoing AVR, and table 2 suggests that only bioprostheses and mechanical AVRs were included. The congenital population undergoes the Ross procedure more frequently than any other type of AVR, frequently with aortic root replacement, not infrequently with Konno ventriculoplasty. The aortopathy associated with bicuspid valve predisposes to aneurysm formation and, while in this study population more congenital subjects underwent concomitant root replacement, 23% seems low. Did the study include Rosses? It would be informative to clarify 4. The clinical follow up was until June 2015. Is there a reason why the data are 5 years old? Reviewer #2: The investigators present a single institutional, retrospective study of 201 patients who underwent surgical aortic valve replacement (AVR), from 2009-2012, comparing outcomes based on histologic pathology: post inflammatory (n=28), congenital (n=35), calcific/degenerative (n=138). A consort diagram is included that defines their study population. Significant baseline differences were seen between comparative groups. More preoperative risk factors were seen with the calcific/degenerative groups. On long-term follow-up, adjusted survival was comparable for the three groups; however, an association was seen between calcific/degenerative pathology and an increased rate of nonfatal adverse events. The authors conclude that underlying correct identification of aortic pathology is important. Comments (including minor): The theory (that AS should be considered a systematic disease, line 326) and the results of the study are interesting although the study itself may benefit from a more clearly defined study purpose and hypothesis. This would allow for the removal of any unnecessary data or analyses and allow a more detailed focus on the elements directly related to the study question. While the importance of conscientious pathologic examination of excised specimens - including aortic valves is intuitively understood, it's not clear how this study adds to that argument. It appears that the study may have originally conducted to determine if certain valve pathologies were associated with worse prognosis (analogous to the prognostic value of certain cancer histologies). As the authors discuss, the initial association seen seems likely to be a surrogate given the risk-adjusted survival outcomes for the three groups was comparable. Although they did find an association between certain pathologies (degenerative namely) with adverse events, there is no clear pretext for undertaking this analysis. The authors should consider including a mechanism to explain their rationale for including as many adverse events as they did in their analysis to avoid the appearance of retrofitting their study outcomes coincide with the results found. For example, it seems likely that the investigators would have found an association between the calcific/degenerative group and adverse cardiac events despite risk adjustment undertaken given the higher rates of CAD in this subgroup. What was the rationale for including need for PCI/CABG or hospital admission for GI bleeding as an adverse event? Did they decide on these adverse events decided prior to conducting the review? The rationale for examining NYHA class symptoms at the time of diagnosis and just prior to surgery is not entirely clear. If the authors were interested in examining the association between functional status and valve pathology, this would be a different study question which would then benefit from a different study design in which they could more formally track the progression of symptoms and improvement in each of the groups after surgery. I was unable to find the Cox proportional hazards regression model (Table 4) in the manuscript. Although the manuscript is easy to follow as written, a more traditional approach is to present the written text altogether, followed by tables and a figure legend/figures at the end. The investigators should include a statement that their study followed protocol for their institutional review board - especially if they had direct contact with patients and/or family (lines 142-144). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: David Bichell Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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PONE-D-19-19333R1 Clinical impact of pathology-proven etiology of severely stenotic aortic valves on mid-term outcomes in patients undergoing surgical aortic valve replacement PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please provide point to point responses to additional comments by reviewer 2 (below). Please ask for a professional English editor to review the manuscript for grammar and readability prior to the next submission as minor grammar errors are present. ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 20 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Wen-Chih Wu, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors present a revision of their retrospective cohort study examining the association of valve pathology with intermediate outcome of patients undergoing surgical aortic valve replacement in which they found an association between valve pathology (mainly calcific disease) and outcome that persisted after risk adjustment. Comments Their revision and written communication addresses some of the comments/questions raised by reviewers. They are careful to note their association between valve type is not causal. The clinical impact of this investigation is difficult to ascertain. The authors might include additional discussion on their interpretation of results – i.e. their interpretation of findings. They may have an idea on why, after risk adjustment, patients with calcific/degenerative pathology have worse outcomes (fatal and nonfatal complications) relative to patients with inflammatory pathology - especially given the strong association seen with adverse outcomes Consider including the results of univariate analysis for the candidate variables use for multivariate analysis used in Talble 4 (i.e.,, age, sex,....euroscore, etc) Also, In the discussion, the authors might briefly discuss recommendations on how their study findings should impact clinical practice. Figures 3 and 4 are difficult to read. Consider reformatting the figures so the graphs could be enlarged. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-19333R2 Clinical impact of pathology-proven etiology of severely stenotic aortic valves on mid-term outcomes in patients undergoing surgical aortic valve replacement PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The manuscript is improved and the reviewer's comments were addressed. However, the current discussion is too lengthy, with run-on sentences, redundant ideas and unnecessary repetition of the results. Suggest to summarize the key results along with the main discussion points in a concise manner. Limit the reviews of the topic to only what is pertinent to the discussion points. Please also review the final product with a professional English editor. ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 12 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Wen-Chih Wu, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Clinical impact of pathology-proven etiology of severely stenotic aortic valves on mid-term outcomes in patients undergoing surgical aortic valve replacement PONE-D-19-19333R3 Dear Dr. Miura, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Wen-Chih Wu, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-19333R3 Clinical impact of pathology-proven etiology of severely stenotic aortic valves on mid-term outcomes in patients undergoing surgical aortic valve replacement Dear Dr. Miura: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Wen-Chih Wu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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