Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 25, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-17934 Neuromuscular asymmetries are associated with decrements in physical performance in youth elite team sports athletes PLOS ONE Dear Mrs Fort, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 12 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments This is a cross sectional study aimed at examining the associations between neuromuscular asymmetries and physical performance in youth male and female athletes. While the topic sounds interesting, and it is I think, the practical applications do not fit well with the main outcome of the study. The discussion needs deep revision as it looks quite superficial. Also, there are several spelling mistakes that require the attention of authors. Additional comments and suggestions are listed below. Abstract Line 24-26 In the introduction you mentioned that the second purpose of this study was to examine the between-sexes differences. This has to be outlined here. Also the respective outcomes need to be displayed in the results. No age specific correlation? 29 V-cut: Either big or small “V”. 33-34: I would suggest to specify the magnitude of the correlation across the abstract 39-41 It would be better to stick to the exact measures of physical fitness undertaken in this study. These are sprint speed and jumping. Physical fitness is too vague and concluding that jumping asymmetries were correlated with decrements in physical fitness from a general perspective is not supported by the findings making the statement inaccurate. Introduction The introduction is comprehensively written. The rational of the study is clearly emphasized. 53 something wrong here in terms of writing 54-57 To be able to easier grasp the meaning of this sentence, I suggest to split it into two. 107-109 The second objective is unclear to me. I would mainly focus on the between-sexes differences given that looking for neuromuscular asymmetries seems not to be an objective per se. The existence of neuromuscular asymmetries has been well evidenced. 110-112 please add the corresponding literature based on which you built the hypothesis. Methods 117 In a group of youth instead The term elite needs to be further clarified. 119 change of direction speed instead and throughout the manuscript 124 Please clarify how maturity level was estimated? 127 Please refer to my comment above. What elite refers to? 130 8-10 sessions per week with 90-120 min per session instead 150-151 "Testing protocols were performed in two separate days with 24 to 48 h in-between. In the first day ***** were conducted while in the second day **** were carried out" INSTEAD 188 Do you mean "were"? and even with "were" the meaning still unclear. Please, clarify. 207 Trial? 210 Single or double beam system? More details on how reliability was assessed are needed in the methods section. For instance, the number of days that separated the test and retest sessions etc 214 Analyses instead 215 were instead 220 coefficient of variation instead 222 How can this be poor an acceptable at the same time? It does not make sense. the cut off value for good absolute reliability is usually <5%. 230 Effect size tell us about the magnitude of the difference (if any). However, to get to know whether a difference exists or not you may need to calculate p value. 235 what was the scale used to judge the magnitude of the correlation coefficient values? 238-239 Unclear, are you talking about correlation analysis here. Please, clarify. 239-243 Ok now I see. this has to be moved above. Results 249 Please add the corresponding effect size value consistently. 250 No significant differences between the dominant and non-dominant limb were shown instead Table 2 Something wrong here. I don't expect an anterior reach distance in the SEBT of 68 m. Surely, this is expressed in cm. Would be better to round the values to one single decimal after the dot. Please, do this consistently throughout the manuscript. Bottom table 2: meter instead, second instead 259-262 I would rather report on the significance (or not) of the difference and then the respective effect size. 265-268 you may want to simply note for example "figure one near here" and associate the full title to the respective figure below. 271 How about the magnitude of the correlation: small, large, very large? Please specify in a consistent manner throughout the manuscript. 272-275 I think this a kind of expected outcome as the asymmetry level is dependent on the weaker side performance. However, the small magnitude of the association surprises me. 275-278 Again this is quite expected. Discussion 285 and to determine instead 294-297 reads awkward. Please, revise. 303 “no significant findings” association instead 306 could you specify the exact CoD test? 307 Could you speculate on the reasons underlying the significant association between jump asymmetries and sprint speed? Also could you argue about the absence of correlation with CoD test? 315-317 Why is that? could you develop further on this? 317-319 Unclear / incomplete sentence 333-335 I'm not sure about the need of such statement having in mind the small sample size included in this study. I don't think that from a sample of 30 male subjects we can have robust normative values. Idem for females. 338- 340 I think that the essence of a discussion is not to simply state that the current findings are larger or smaller compared to previous results but rather to explain the potential reasons behind. In terms of this particular statement, this may have something to do with the testing population, testing protocols themselves, training expertise etc. Please, try to expand more your statements and discuss about the potential reasons for discrepancies/agreement. 362-365 This may have something to do with the small sample size of males engaged in the comparison. Other than this, why authors expected to have larger asymmetries with females than males? any physiological explanations for this? 367-375 Authors explanations are somehow superficial and do not go deep into the point. The discussion needs to benefit from a substantial revision to make it more informative about the current findings in lights of the previous outcomes. More importantly, readers would expect deeper explanations (speculations) related to the different controversies with the previous literature. Conclusions The concept of window of opportunity was previously questioned and there are a lot of concerns around it. This is basically because all measures of physical fitness are trainable throughout childhood and there is no restriction to a specific period. In the context of this study, it may be better to simply recommend to further develop neuromuscular performance of the weaker limb to mitigate the difference with the stronger side and accordingly the asymmetry level. Reviewer #2: Abstract - Please add some background information about the topic. - Why did you not mention sex differences? Introduction - l.53: "with" or "to", but not both ... - ll.62/108: What are neuromuscular asymmetries? Are you really measuring neuromuscular parameters? - l.79: COD is clear, but what is "CODS"? - ll.81/82: "505 on both limbs"? - ll.94/95: At this stage it is surprising that you introduce sex differences because neither title nor abstract deal with this issue. Methods - l.117: "group youth elite team-sports players"? please rewrite - l.125: Please specify the distribution of team sports within sexes. - Table 1: Please add information about how you assessed "years post-PHV". - l.157: What does the SEBT ANT measures? Which abilities and muscular capacities are needed to perform well? - l.176: What did you do if partcipants bend their knees during landing? This might have had an impact on flight time and thus on jumping height. - l.180: Why did you execute the SLCMJ only with the preferred leg? - l.186: I do not understand why the OLHT should estimate "dynamic stability". Please expand. Results - Please consider to indicate just one decimal place for all values presented except for sprint times. - l.254: typos - Table 3: Please do not use ** for significance at p<0.01. Discussion - ll.286/287: Be more reserved as those associations are just small (R²=~7%). - ll.289: What is the practical importance of the 19% relationship between OLHT asymmetries and OLHT performance? - l.293: A primary result which comprises a 7% relation between two parameters is poor ... - ll. 297-301: Link theses findings to your results! - ll.328-329: Why? What is the reason/mechanism for this phenomenon? - ll.380ff: Please add that you used a contact mat to determine jumping height. Why did you not use an isokinetic dynamometer to assess interlimb asymmetries? - l.382: How do you measure task specifity? Conclusions - Please rewrite the whole paragraph. Concentrate on your findings and major implications. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-19-17934R1 Neuromuscular asymmetries are associated with decrements in physical performance in youth elite team sports athletes PLOS ONE Dear Mrs Fort, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 02 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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These are detailed below. Title Given that you did not directly measure any neuromuscular variables, the word "neuromuscular" seems to not reflect what was really done. Is there any other alternative that could be used here? Abstract Line 35 Please add the magnitude of the correlation consistently in the abstract. Line 36-39 Are these correlation analyses needed as one may assume that asymmetry is associated with the performance of the weaker leg. In other terms, why correlating asymmetry with a factor that was used to calculate asymmetry? It would make sense to examine the association between asymmetry and another measure of physical fitness but with the weaker leg, this is unclear to me. Line 44 In the discussion you noted " a tendency". Please be consistent with the statements Introduction Line 104 Please refer to the exact components of physical fitness used consistently. Line 110 See my previous comment Methods Line 180 Please note that the jump height as a measure of power has been recently questioned in a comprehensive paper published in sports Med doi: 10.1007/s40279-019-01073-1 You may mention this in the limitation Line 244 It is rather the magnitude of the difference Results Line 285-294 Please refer to my comment in the abstract Discussion Line 302-305 This particular statement is hard to grasp. Please rephrase for clarity Line 305-307 Unclear 310 However instead of despite 313 consider starting a new sentence "This is in accordance....." 319-321 awkward sentence. Please rephrase 321-325 What could be the reason behind this observation? why jump height asymmetry is associated with sprint speed performance but not with CoD performance. This is a comment that I included in my previous report but was not really considered. 329-332 This looks different from what you stated in the previous sentence. you focused on the association between asymmetry and performance of the weaker leg (which I'm not that convinced why you did it or at least this has to be argued in the rationale) while Bishop et al reported on the correlation between asymmetry and jump performance without mentioning if it was relative to the weaker side or not. 364 "In" instead of at 383-384 Do you mean simply here that the level of asymmetry is more pronounced in females than that in males? if so would be better to express it that way. 404 should be considered with caution instead Conclusions 424-425 Please reword Reviewer #2: Dear authors, thank you for your modifications which improved the quality of your manuscript. Please add the following information to your text body. - l.186: I do not understand why the OLHT should estimate "dynamic stability". Please expand. Dynamic stability is defined as the ability to maintain equilibrium during dynamic actions (the body is under some kind of displacement), bringing the requirement of balance to the kind of joint stability involved in sport-specific skills. Here some references (Noyes et al, 1996; Myer et al, 2011; Munro et al., 2012). We can add to the text if the reviewer considers it necessary. - Table 3 and throughout the whole manuscript: I am not sure if the other reviewer really wanted that you use just one decimal for correlations. In my opinion, you should follow this rule of thumb: if you have 2 digits in front of the dot, use 1 decimal; if you have 1 digits in front of the dot, use 2 decimals. Please modify! Apart from this, everything is fine. Kind regards [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-19-17934R2 Inter-limb asymmetries are associated with decrements in physical performance in youth elite team sports athletes PLOS ONE Dear Mrs Fort, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 21 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Andreas Mierau, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Additional Editor Comments (if provided): As for the decimals, please follow the recommendation of reviewer 2 (i.e. if you have 2 digits in front of the dot, use 1 decimal; if you have 1 digit in front of the dot, use 2 decimals) [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for responding to my comments. After reading the revision, I noted some further comments and suggestions. Major concern I have raised the concern about correlating the asymmetry with the performance of the weaker leg in my previous review report. I find authors’ answer not convincing in this context. I still think that the correlation analyses authors’ have made between asymmetry and the outcome of weaker side do not have a real significance. Above all, the weaker leg was used to determine asymmetry. Then, a significant correlation is not surprising. Methods Considering the criticisms related to the ability of jump height to predict muscle power, I would recommend to mention this point in the limitations of the study. Discussion Line 309: instead of tendency which was already removed, I suggest to note the range of magnitude (e.g., small-to-moderate) Line 310: rather “lower 30 m sprint performance”. It may not be that clear to talk about “slower time”. Line 333 spelling error In a previous reply authors noted : “ this is because Bishop et al presented the data as left vs right (not stronger vs weaker)”. Sorry, may be I missed something, but I still do not get what you want to express. So, Bishop et al introduced the data as left vs right, then how can the reader knows the weaker from the stronger side? Reviewer #2: - l.186: I do not understand why the OLHT should estimate "dynamic stability". Please expand. Dynamic stability is defined as the ability to maintain equilibrium during dynamic actions (the body is under some kind of displacement), bringing the requirement of balance to the kind of joint stability involved in sport-specific skills. Here some references (Noyes et al, 1996; Myer et al, 2011; Munro et al., 2012). We can add to the text if the reviewer considers it necessary. The stability component of the OLHT test is not in the jump capacity but in the stability that the lower limb should provide just after a maximum unilateral jump (subjects must hold the balance for two seconds after landing). --> As indicated in line 202 and Table 2, you analysed the greatest distance for OLHT. This is in my opinion no measure for dynamic stability. Please expand why you analysed the jump capacity, although you emphasize the stability component of OLHT. Please rephrase l.195! What happened if participants performed 2 invalid jumps with one leg? - l. 206: Please state where the front foot was placed in relation to the first timing gate. - Table 3 and throughout the whole manuscript: I am not sure if the other reviewer really wanted that you use just one decimal for correlations. In my opinion, you should follow this rule of thumb: if you have 2 digits in front of the dot, use 1 decimal; if you have 1 digits in front of the dot, use 2 decimals. Please modify! We are totally agreed. But this is the comment of reviewer 1. “Would be better to round the values to one single decimal after the dot. Please, do this consistently throughout the manuscript.”. If the reviewer consider we have to change it is not a problem for us. --> Please contact the editor to ask for journal guidelines concerning this issue. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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