Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 22, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-23732 Omeprazole use and risk of chronic kidney disease evolution PLOS ONE Dear Mr. Guedes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript focuses on a topic of potential interest. However, the manuscript shows major shortcomings that should be addressed. To mention few of them, i) concern about the fact that it appears that there was a single evaluation as to whether or not the patients were on a PPI or not at the baseline visit; ii) need to perform analysis using PPI use as the time-varying variable; iii) need to specify the definition of PPI use in term of dose and duration; iv) concern about the use and definition of CKD stage evolution as outcome variable which is inadequate/incomplete; v) perform additional analysis on rapid progression; vi) clearly define the baseline creatinine; vii) need to further discuss and in more depth the association between PPI use and CKD; viii) unclear whether the investigators excluded kidney transplant patients; ix) need to follow the STROBE checklist; x) discuss the limitations of the findings of the study; xi) unclear whether the her blood pressure in the group with PPI than the group without PPI has been taken into account in the multivariate analysis. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 28 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It is an interesting and relevant article. I consider it a useful contribution in its field of nephrology; in which I agree with the authors that no prior study has been capable of identifying an association between the use of PPI by CKD patients with and the progression of this disease. However, there are major modifications and clarifications that are strongly needed for this study. Avoidance of modifications to improve manuscript/study is discouraged. 1. It appears that there was a single evaluation as to whether or not the patients were on a PPI or not at the baseline visit. Is it assumed that all patients who were documented as being on a PPI at baseline were on PPIs permanently and that none of those in the non-PPI group were ever started on a PPI? PPI use can change over time. Can you perform analysis using PPI use as the time-varying variable? Lack of longitudinal data on PPI use - this appears to be based on documented PPI intake at a single time point. Thus, consider performing analysis using PPI use as the time-varying variable 2. Please specify the definition of PPI use in term of dose and duration 3. The use and definition of CKD stage evolution as Outcome variable is inadequate/incomplete. In addition to Decline in GFR category, the authors/investigators need to look into “A certain drop in eGFR is defined as a drop in GFR category accompanied by a 25% or greater drop in eGFR from baseline”. Thus, 25% or greater drop in eGFR from baseline should be taken into consideration 4. Additional analysis is needed on Rapid progression in which is defined as a sustained decline in eGFR of more than 5 mL/1.73m2/year, as KDIGO recommended. 5. In order to perform 1) and 2) for validity, baseline creatinine definition will need to be clear defined. Most recent vs. minimum baseline creatinine? When baseline creatinine is not available, SCrGFR-75 is suggested, when baseline outpatient SCr was not available or may need to exclude those patients from the study. Need clearer describe in the method. 6. Association between PPI use and CKD needs better discussed. In fact, recent meta-analysis showed 1.3-fold increased risks of CKD and ESRD in patients using PPIs, but not in patients using H2RAs. PMID: 28836158 7. RE “some studies have reported that magnesium plays a key role in blood pressure control and hypomagnesaemia, which may occur in the use of PPI, a possible cause of arterial hypertension resulting from increased calcium influx in smooth muscle cells of the vascular endothelium”; need better discussion; this statement is unclear. The use of PPIs has been shown to be associated with 1.43-fold increased risk of hypomagnesemia compared to those who did not use PPIs. PMID: 26108134. The underlying mechanism of the association of hypomagnesemia in patients with PPI use is likely explained by the disturbance of gastrointestinal (GI) handling of Mg since studies have shown that an increased renal Mg loss is not the only culprit in those patients with significant hypomagnesemia after PPI use. 8. Did the investigator exclude kidney transplant patients? 9. The STROBE checklist is needed to be followed. There are a number of consistent inaccuracies in the manuscript that I strongly believe need to be addressed before the paper can be reviewed again. 10. Please discuss in the limitations the types of biases the findings of this study may be influenced by. 11. Some revision of the English language is needed. There are some parts of the paper where it is quite difficult to make sense of some sentences. English edit will help to improve the quality of the manuscript. “they identified that PPI are associated” is not correct in grammar. RE “medicine use were collected from all patients diagnosed with CKD”; “medicine use” should be “medication use” RE “the progressive decrease of renal function” “of” should be “in” “In addition, considering the high consumption of PPI in the world and 78 in the Brazilian population [14] and their adverse effects on renal functions, perform research to 79 contribute to the reduction of the knowledge gap with respect to this association, and of the very use of 80 these drugs, is paramount.” Is not well written and difficult to follow. Reviewer #2: Dear author, Thanks for interesting article that brings new evidence of the renal toxicity of the proton pump inhibitor. I would like to clarify a few points: > major revision The group with proton pump inhibitor has a higher blood pressure than the group without proton pump inhibitor. This difference alone can explain the progression of renal failure. it is not clear that this has been taken into account in the multivariate analysis. > minor revision in the table on page 10, for which data with ACEs do not appear? > This is not the first time a study has focused on the progression of kidney failure. For example, XIE Y JASN 2016 has demonstrated a link between proton pump inhibitor and 30% decrease in GFR or doubling of creatinine level. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Omeprazole use and risk of chronic kidney disease evolution PONE-D-19-23732R1 Dear Dr. Guedes, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. The revised manuscript is definitely improved. The authors have adequately addressed the reviewers’ comments. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. 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With kind regards, Giuseppe Remuzzi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have no competing interests. It appears that all comments have been appropriately responded to. I have no further comments and recommend publication. Reviewer #3: Interesting, and confirms prior findings. I read the paper and the responses from the first round of reviews. The authors addressed the comments. I have no further ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-19-23732R1 Omeprazole use and risk of chronic kidney disease evolution Dear Dr. Guedes: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Giuseppe Remuzzi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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