Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-27520 Microvasculopathy And Soft Tissue Calcification In Mice Are Governed by Fetuin-A, Pyrophosphate And Magnesium PLOS ONE Dear Prof Jahnen-Dechent, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 18 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study demonstrates differences in ectopic calcification between DBA/2 and C57BL/6 strains deficient in the mineralization inhibitor, fetuin-A. The different responses in the strains is attributed to decreased levels of other calcification inhibitors in the serum. The authors also note a SNP that affects expression of Abcc6, a regulator of pyrophosphate, may also explain the difference between the mouse strains. Overall, the study is interesting, well-written, and timely. The premise of the study is also strong in that the phenotypic differences between the mouse strains is striking and does not seem to involve differences in cellular osteogenesis. The comments below may help strengthen the conclusions drawn in the study. 1. p. 4: Has it been previously shown that Mg compensates for fetuin-A loss, or is this a new finding? 2. p. 4 (and other points in the text): The authors should provide more data in the text. For example, the results text focused on Fig. 2 describe differences between groups, but the data shown in the graphs often do not seem to indicate statistical significance. It would be helpful if the authors could provide means, standard deviations, and absolute p values (i.e., not < or >) to help increase the rigor of the conclusions made. 3. pp. 4-5: How does the serum Mg levels differ in the mice fed the Mg supplement? Does the serum Mg reach levels high enough to explain the differences in C57BL/6 and DBA/2 phenotypes? 4. p. 5: How did the dietary phosphate affect circulating phosphate levels in the mice? The observations that calcification changes based upon differences in dietary phosphate are striking, but does altered phosphate handling tested through these experiments necessarily explain the difference between the mouse strains? Would similar changes be observed by placing the C57BL/6 mice on diets with different dietary phosphate? If the C57BL/6 mice show the same rate of change (i.e., the slope of the line that compares dietary phosphate to calcification size is the same between mouse strains), this would indicate that the baseline calcification of the DBA/2 mouse is higher than the C57BL/6 mouse, but that it is not due to altered phosphate handling. If this is the case, it could mean that the alterations in mineral inhibitors are more important in explaining the phenotypes. 5. p. 5: The data on PPi supplementation do not necessarily lead to the conclusion that PPi deficiency is the major determinant of dystrophic calcification in DBA/2 mice. In fact, the data indicate that circulating PPi isn't different between the mouse strains. Adding more PPi, a known mineral inhibitor, does inhibit the mineral formation, but this could just mean that elevated PPi compensates for inhibitors that are different (e.g., Mg). 6. pp. 5-6: Given the noted changes in Abcc6, can the authors comment why serum PPi does not seem to be decreased in the DBA/2 mice? 7. p. 6: Did the authors try to relate the level of Abcc6 (e.g., by western blotting) to the measured calcification in each mouse (or at least a subset of mice from each category)? This could help strengthen the conclusion that altered Abcc6 is responsible for the phenotypic differences observed. Reviewer #2: General comments: Mice lacking fetuin-A suffer from severe ectopic calcification in the DBA/2 background, whereas those in the C57BL/6 background barely develop calcification. By analyzing these fetuin-A deficient mice with different genetic backgrounds, the authors identified pyrophosphate and magnesium as the major determinants of the difference in calcification propensity. The data were convincing and well presented. This reviewer has only a few minor concerns. Minor points: If the authors still have serum samples remaining, they might want to measure serum magnesium levels (Figure 3) to see if high magnesium diet increased serum magnesium in D2 Ahsg-/- mice to the level equivalent to that in B6 Ahsg-/- mice. The authors might want to add some explanation to Discussion on general information on TRPM6 function in magnesium handling, e.g., TRPM6 in the intestine and kidney mediates absorption and reabsorption of magnesium, respectively. Where in the kidney and lung was calcification observed, e.g. renal tubules, glomerulus, interstitial space, blood vessels etc.? Page 5, line 29: Fig 4d-l -> Fig 5d-l Page 9, line 13: enclosed -> enrolled ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Microvasculopathy and soft tissue calcification in mice are governed by fetuin-A, magnesium and pyrophosphate PONE-D-19-27520R1 Dear Dr. Jahnen-Dechent, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Elena Aikawa, MD PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Makoto Kuro-o |
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PONE-D-19-27520R1 Microvasculopathy and soft tissue calcification in mice are governed by fetuin-A, magnesium and pyrophosphate Dear Dr. Jahnen-Dechent: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Elena Aikawa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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