Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 9, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-22572 Barriers and enablers of implementing bubble Continuous Positive Airway Pressure (CPAP): Perspectives of health professionals in Malawi PLOS ONE Dear Dr Nyondo-Mipando, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please see comments from both reviewers below. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 01 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include a copy of the interview guide used in the study, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information, or include a citation if it has been published previously. 3. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Thanks for submission to PloS one, both reviewers have made comments that need to be addressed before your article can be considered for publication. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a very interesting paper, exploring the views of healthcare workers from a tertiary centre and district hospitals in Malawi, about using CPAP in neonates in the current Malawian context of health care delivery. There is an increasing interest in using CPAP in LMICs. However, many studies describe how CPAP is effectively used, but few studies explore in-depth the multifaceted aspects of using this technology in LMICS. This paper contributes importantly to understanding in-depth the issues of implementing and using CPAP in a LMIC setting. Most of my comments are minor. There is only one major comment which is to change the structure of presenting the different themes identified in this study (see my comments about the Discussion section below). This would improve the clarity of the major themes, make the paper easier to read, and allow identifying the main messages of the paper more rapidly. ABSTRACT Background: The way the background is written might be interpreted that only preterm babies would benefit from CPAP. Although it is true that they are the main group of neonates to benefit from it, term babies can also present respiratory distress (respiratory distress in general, not RDS) for other reasons than prematurity. Consider adding this consideration. Conclusion: Line 51: Patient factors are mentioned here, but actually in the main paper it is the perceptions of caregivers that are reported, which are not patient factors as such. To me, patients factors would be severity of disease, gestational age, etc.. Line 53: Operations of health system is pretty vague. Consider fleshing it out a bit. MAIN PAPER Introduction: As mentioned before, CPAP is also useful for non-preterm babies. Line 76. I suggest replacing “Wall air” with “centrally provided medical gases”? or something like that. The introduction needs to say a bit more about what is the knowledge gap and why this study is needed. Were there issues with the implementation of the Pumani CPAP that made you want to explore in depth the views of healthcare workers? Information in lines 111-116 p 4 could be used in the introduction to provide more information about why the study has been conducted. Methods: Line 99 through not though What was the methodological orientation (presumably grounded theory?) Lines 104-105 why these DH in particular and not any other the 28 other centres presented in introduction. Are these three centre similar or different compared to the other centres? Recruitment: Page 5 line 130 “a” scoping review not “the” scoping review Line 138-142 is too long need to be split in a couple of sentences. Page 6 line p160 grounded theory should come earlier in the methods section Line 161 Nvivo was use for data management purposes, not for the analysis as such (which was conducted by the authors) How many people who were invited refused to take part and why? Results: The findings (note that implementation and use of CPAP is not the same) are not presented in a consistent way in the Abstract and in the Results section: Abstract: Results section/ figure 1: Factors that influence implementation of CPAP Factors that influence utilization of CPAP/contributes to delays 1. lack of confidence due to inadequate training 1. Training in preparation for use 2. hierarchy of decision-making in combination with poor communication among healthcare providers; 2. Decision making to initiate CPAP and initiation 3. human resource constraints 3. Monitoring the neonate on bubble cpap 4. and gaps in infrastructure and supplies 4. Weaning the neonate off bubble cpap In addition, there are overlaps across the different factors presented in Results and figure 1. For example “human resource constraints” delay initiation onto bubble cpap, but also affects monitoring while on bubble cpap. “Inadequate training” delays preparation of staff, and also have a negative impact on weaning. The paper would be clearer if the identified themes are internally coherent, consistent, and distinctive. I Think the first column of table 2 actually provides a list of internally coherent, consistent, and distinctive themes: 1. Inadequate training is an issue (here you can describe both the problem of lack of training in preparation for use, on weaning process, and on any other aspect of CPAP use) 2. Lack of effective communication is an issue (here you can have two sub themes: a. Lack of communication between health care providers such as between the nurses and clinicians b. Lack of communication between healthcare workers and parents) 3. Parents fear bubble CPAP machine 4. There are human resources constraints (here you can present the lack of staff, and the rotation to other wards issue) 5. Rigid division of roles and responsibilities 6. Lack of equipment and infrastructure The second column “enablers” of table 2 mirrors colum1; it doesn’t really add anything. Consider structuring the Results section around the 6 themes listed above. Consider a short sentence to introduce the themes identified in the study at the beginning of the results section. Readers need to be prepared to what will follow. For example: “Six themes emerged from the analysis: 1) Inadequate training…, 2) Lack of effective communication…, 3) Parents fear bubble CPAP, 4)…, etc.” It would be much easier to read, and to understand the main messages of the paper. Then, you should use the same structure for the results section in the Abstract, and the first paragraph (principal findings) in the the Discussion section. Line 186: there are inconsistencies in the order of presenting broad categories (health system, providers, caregivers) throughout the manuscript. Abstract Results Line 51: There are personal, patient and health system level factors Line 186: at the health system, provider and caregiver level Lines 195 percentages are usually not used in a qualitative paper. Line 198 provide more details about what monitoring means Discussion The discussion should start with main findings. There should be a “strength and limitations” section in the discussion. P14, Lines 358-360 is a strength of the study You should present the themes in the same order than in the Abstract and the Results section The following points in the Discussion are not presented beforehand in the Results section: • Line 429-430 “However, health professionals in our study rarely discussed the need for nasal saline drops as a challenge”. • Line 442-44 “To avoid the increased burden of monitoring a baby on bubble CPAP, some nurses shared that they left the baby on nasal oxygen which reportedly required less issues to monitor.” Suggestions: either present them in the results section, or remove them. Reviewer #2: This was a very well-written manuscript from a study that was well-designed and conducted. The details of the study are clearly stated, and justification of methods are clearly outlined. The data analysis was rigorously done. The tables and figures are well-presented and described in the text. Discussion: Line 395 “Bubble” remove capital. Although alluded to in the last paragraph of this section, it would be useful for the authors to provide more details on their reflections of the limitations of this study and how they have attempted to mitigate them. Well done to the team. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Juan Emmanuel Dewez Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-22572R1 Barriers and enablers of implementing bubble Continuous Positive Airway Pressure (CPAP): Perspectives of health professionals in Malawi PLOS ONE Dear Dr Nyondo-Mipando, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. There are a few minor comments to be addressed. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 06 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you to the authors for making the amendments. I think the paper is well written and structured, and conclusions are supported by the data. I fully support the publication of this paper, which I think fulfill the Plos One criteria for publication. I have few minor final comments that should be addressed: Results section: I think the Participant characteristics and Factors that influence implementation of bubble CPAP subtitles are not useful. I suggest removing those, and keeping subtitles only for the 5 main themes that you have found: O Inadequate training of healthcare providers in preparation for use, O Rigid division of roles and responsibilities, O Lack of effective communication, O Human resource constraints and O Lack of equipment and infrastructure This will allow readers easily identifying your main results and understanding the structure of your findings. Line 191-192: I think the median age of participants has probably no impact on how participants responded to your research question. I suggest removing it in the text and table, and rather adding median years of CPAP use in the table; this is important because it allows knowing whether participants have a substantial experience of using CPAP, which probably had an impact on what they said in the interviews. Line 206: Perhaps add here that there are 5 types of barriers. This will help first time readers to grasp quickly the structure of the results section; something like: Five main types of barriers to the implementation/use(?) were identified and were: ….. Discussion section: Lines 496-501 are not really limitations of your study, they are findings/recommendations. The team should reflect about whether the findings should be interpreted in light of some limitations. For example: • Could the way of selecting participants have influenced what participants said? Who was the member of the research team (line 143) who initially contacted potential participants? Was he/she in a position of authority? were there potential hierarchical/power issues that could have influenced the responses? • The five interviewers had different backgrounds, could that have influenced what participants said? If yes, is this an issue? • Were nurses as fluent in English as doctors? Given that interviews were in English, would that have influenced what nurses were able to share? • Was it clear to participants that interviewers were (presumably?) hired by IMCHA? Would that have influenced what they said about an intervention that presumably IMCHA is keen to implement? • Although your objective was clearly to explore the perceptions of healthcare workers that are important in terms of implementation of CPAP, perhaps you should acknowledge that the influence of healthcare workers on the implementation decisions is relatively limited; in other words, there are probably other (more important?) barriers at higher levels in the health system; perhaps you could suggest that other studies with other cadres of staff with more influence should complement your study? Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the concerns that I raised comprehensively. I would be happy for this manuscript to be published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Juan Emmanuel Dewez Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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