Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 12, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-19667 Urban water systems: development of micro-level indicators to support integrated policy PLOS ONE Dear Dr Jensen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 20 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript aspires to provide a set of criteria for prioritizing adoption of integrated urban water management practices in Jakarta, Indonesia. The particular contribution the authors seek to make is two-fold: to first provide a set of indicators of water insecurity/security; and second, to provide hard data, based on locally-available sources of information, to help calibrate the magnitude of these local water security indicators. The effort is worthy of being pursued and refined - and the results could be publishable with additional thought and more rigorous conceptualization of certain challenges - as noted below. However, at this stage the work insufficiently considers important foundational principles needed to generate outcomes useful to decision-makers - and to advancing scholarship on IUWM. There are four major problems with the argument. First, the authors fail to demonstrate why the mere provision of good data and innformation on water security alone should induce institutional change or adoption of these indicators as reasons for implementing IUWM (e.g., lines 112-115). Given the risk aversion of many water agencies toward innovative measures generally, it may be the case that action to implement IUWM would not be induced through identifying the most urgent areas in a city with major water security problems, but instead, in identifying those areas where programmatic change might be easiest to bring about because change would be less prone to political or public resistance. Similarly, the authors have not effectively made the case that where changes at the city level are difficult to implement, that locality or district implementation of IUWM could be easier (lines 85-87). Why should this be so? What incentives or motivations facilitate confidence that these measures are easier to implement in smaller areas? Second, given that water supply within Jakarta's otherwise fragmented mangement and governance system for water provision is currently privatized and controlled by two enterprises (lines 280-283), would it not be reasonable to expect some possible resistence to implementation of IUWM measures, particularly if their adoption might affect profit margins and/or managerial control of water sources? A number of studies of this challenge, including at least one on Indonesia, are worth incorporating in this context - see, for example, the following: 1. Birdsall, N. and Nellis, J. (2003) ‘Winners and Losers: Assessing the Distributional Impact of Privatization’, World Development 31 (10): 1617-33. 2. Davis, J. (2004) ‘Corruption in Public Service Delivery: Experience from South Asia’s Water and Sanitation Sector’, World Development 32 (1): 53-71. 3. Al 'Afghani, M. M. (2012), Anti‐Privatisation Debates, Opaque Rules and ‘Privatised’ Water Services Provision: Some Lessons from Indonesia. IDS Bulletin, 43: 21-26. doi:10.1111/j.1759-5436.2012.00303.x Third, the authors do not enumerate precisely what they mean by IUWM measures and what specific suites of such measures would be appropriate for the tackling of Jakarta's water security challenges (lines 402-406, especially). Would these be measures to better conserve and/or increase the end-use efficiency of potable water use; reuse of wastewater/harvesting stormwater for public use? In the Jakarta context, what might be an IUWM practice, or suite of practices, that have been actively discussed by decision-makers (lines 448-450, for instance)? Finally, the authors fail to account for recent research which tries to link indicators of water security - in the sense of urgent water problems whose solution is not tractable under current urban water management schemes - with incentives for institutional changes (this could expland tjheir discussion on lines 430- 431, for example). this is something that Peter Gleick, for example, refers to as "predictors of urban water transitions" (Peter H. Gleick, Transitions to freshwater sustainability, PNAS September 4, 2018 115 (36) 8863-8871; https://doi.org/10.1073/pnas.1808893115). Gleick's work could be useful in helping characterize the types of indicator data that would be most useful for inducing such transitions to be pursued by decision-makers. Finally, there are a number of more minor, but important issues, omitted or skirted in the manuscript that need to be addressed. For example, line 32 should state "these systems" (plural); line 48 should re-state as "centrally-operated distribution and treatment systems." Finally, in the discussion of flood risk as a water security issue (lines 252 and 253) the authors fail to elaborate on why structural measures taken have been insufficient in reducing risk. Is it due to an increase in impervious surface; more land being prone to flooding due to land settling; a greater risk to populations who have chosen to reside in low-lying areas over time; or some combination of these factors? Similarly, on lines 396-7, the econimic exposure to flood damage in some districts may reflect a different phenomenon - that the poorest, most vulnerable, and least economically productive population lives in flood prone districts. This possibility should at least be explored. Reviewer #2: This paper proposes a set of performance indicators to priorize integrated water projects. A system approached is used for this purpose. The city of Jakarta is used as a case study. Although the topic of the paper is valid to be investigated, the paper suffers from several issues that need improvements. Some of them are the following: a) The paper needs of a strong revision, including the English language and the elimination of several typos; b) The indicators proposed, a better justification and a more holistic approach should be adopted. For example, see the paper of Marques et al. (2015) in Environmental Science & Policy. Vol. 54, pp. 142-151. c) The systems approach adopted needs to be justified. Why not MCDA? d) The introduction should be improved including a clear description of the objectives, methodology and the contributions for the literature; e) The conclusions should provide policy implications of the research carried out. ********** 6. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have effectively responded to all my comments on the initial draft submission and the manuscript is much improved. Reviewer #2: The paper is much better now and I recommend its acceptance. Congratulations and good lucky to the authors. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-19-19667R1 Urban water systems: development of micro-level indicators to support integrated policy Dear Dr. Jensen: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Monjur Mourshed Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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