Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 19, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-23329 Improvement of classification performance of Parkinson’s disease using shape features for machine learning on dopamine transporter single photon emission computed tomography PLOS ONE Dear Dr Shiiba, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 17 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Although both reviewers saw strengths in your manuscript, both also noted major limitations which should be addressed in a revised version. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study applying a novel and promising method. I have only one (yet major) issue: It is unclear to me, how the boundaries for the shape of the striatum were set. It reads like it was done visually, which is suboptimal, given that the aim of the method is automated quantification, or diagnosis. There are several other minor issues: 1. Please state in the methods that you downloaded the reconstructed imaging data. The preprocessing steps were performed our of your hands and should be referenced (e.g. in a prior publication, or website reference) 2. How did you determine, what a "burst striatum" constitutes, when you excluded this data? 3. How did you search for the maximum value of the striatal part to determine the medium of the 5 slices that you averaged? 4. line 243 (page 16) : typo "distribution *is* looks like" 5. either use sensitivity/specificity or true positive/negative rate as terminology, not both, which can be confusing 6. To state PPV and NPV in a preselected sample is not meaningful and can be misleading (see consensus statement in https://doi.org/10.1016/j.dadm.2019.01.011, PMID 30984816) Reviewer #2: Materials and methods Line 120: please specify which method for image normalization was used and how correct normalization was checked for. In datasets with little striatal activity all normalization methods not using coregistered morphological images for determination of normalization parameters are error-prone and may lead to considerable distortion of images, particularly when the primary reconstructed dataset has unusual starting coordinates as often is the case in parkinsonian patients with stiff neck musculature. As shape feature extraction is particularly prone to bias from distortion due to normalization procedure, requirements on robustness of normalization are high and would need some kind of assessment. One could think of submitting the same dataset to normalization with a couple of differently angulated starting coefficients and measuring reproducibility of shape measures for different extremes, especially for cases where there is little putaminal activity left. Calculation of image features: Line 130ff: Are the authors suggesting that for image feature extraction no differentiation between caudate and putaminal activity was done? If so, this would have to be stated explicitly and its implication for disease subentities with predominant caudate pathology discussed. Also, the procedure to determine the „slice with highest striatal activity“ has to be described, as the results will be different if highest activity is measured for caudate, putaminal or global regional activity, and dorsal putaminal slices might not be contributing to summed images if highest activity is in apicoventral caudate. Also, slice thickness of reconstructed images is not reported, but has considerable impact on summed images. Please specify. Line 133: „regions of interest were set...“. What were the criteria for delineation of striatum? Did the technologist delineate based on morphological images or did he just „paint a contour where activity was“? Were there standardized criteria for contouring besides „ten years of experience?“ - As contouring may have considerable effect on shape feature extraction, as the authors correctly note in the discussion section, it has to be explained how bias by contouring was addressed, especially in „low-count-images“, and Assessment of error propagation should be done for reconstruction-attenuation correction-normalization-contouring-feature extraction. Results: Figures show only results of statistical tests. Without image examples, the reader cannot assess the impact of shape feature extraction on tests. Typical images and according shape features should be presented additionally. Discussion: The authors should discuss the effect of their specific reconstruction method on the results as compared to standard clinical reconstructed images. On this behalf, it is suggested to repeat their classification methods with reconstructed datasets as present in the database and compare with their standardized reconstructed datasets in order to assess robustness of classification under standard clinical conditions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-23329R1 Improvement of classification performance of Parkinson’s disease using shape features for machine learning on dopamine transporter single photon emission computed tomography PLOS ONE Dear Dr Shiiba, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 14 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jan Kassubek Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The reviewers appreciated the detailed revision of the manuscript. However, Reviewer 2 still raises some remaining concerns which might be addressed in a (minor) revision of the manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The comments raised are partially addressed. While the revised manuscript now comments on preprocessing by PPMI, the methods section still comments confusingly on processing of SPECT raw data, which is not intelligible by an average reader not accustomed to the PPMI database. In fact, the reviewer had to gain access to the PPMI database and check himself on the data to fully understand what the authors were doing. Please consider the following points: line 130ff: the authors still do not specify if striatal activity was differentiating caudate activity from putaminal activity. It seems they just differentiated left striatal activity from right striatal activity. They might insert a line "left and right striatal ROIs were covering and including all activity visualised in putamen and caudate" Line 113 typo PPIM instead of PPMI Line 114: "SPECT images and SBRs were downloaded from the PPMI website" - please change to "Preprocessed SPECT images and SBRs were downloaded from the PPMI website". Line 114 ff: "SPECT imaging was acquired at each imaging centers as per the PPMI imaging protocol..." The current wording suggests that this part of processing had been done by the authors. In fact the whole paragraph following is plagiating the PPMI methods section where the preprocessing steps performed by PPMI are described, which is misleading the reader. Please consider the following wording: "As by PPMI documentation, preprocessing steps were performed at the Institute for Neurodegenerative Disorders (IND, New Haven, CT) and included the following steps: SPECT imaging and reconstruction: SPECT imaging "was acquired at each imaging centers as per the PPMI imaging protocol [..., up to line 127]. (line 128 insert:) The calculation method of SBR as performed at the IND was as follows: the transaxial slice with... line 146: " The region where the radioactivity is visually accumulated at the site where the striatum exists anatomically was surrounded" - please replace "surrounded" by "manually delineated" Additional comment: reviewer 1 asked for definition of "burst striatum" which is not given in the revised document. Please provide. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Thilo van Eimeren Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Improvement of classification performance of Parkinson’s disease using shape features for machine learning on dopamine transporter single photon emission computed tomography PONE-D-19-23329R2 Dear Dr. Shiiba, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. 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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all comments appropriately. There is only one mishap in the revised manuscript, where at page 9, Line 13 comments and original text have been mixed and the manuscript now reads "Regions of interests (ROIs) were placed on the left and right striatal ROIs were covering and including all activity visualised in putamen and caudate (target region), and the occipital cortex (reference region).", while it should read "Regions of interests (ROIs) were covering and including all activity visualised in putamen and caudate (target region), and the occipital cortex (reference region)." ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Freimut D. Juengling |
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PONE-D-19-23329R2 Improvement of classification performance of Parkinson’s disease using shape features for machine learning on dopamine transporter single photon emission computed tomography Dear Dr. Shiiba: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. Jan Kassubek Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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