Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 2, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-24654 An automated alarm system for food safety by using electronic invoices PLOS ONE Dear Prof Lian, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== The reviewers commented on your manuscript and despite the fact that they considered your work of practical relevance, interesting and potentially novel, there are a couple of shortcomings that should be addressed before it can be acceptable for publication. Please, address the concerns raised by the reviewers. ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 07 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: "The work was funded by MOST 106-2314-B-O 18-001-MY2 from the Ministry of Science and Technology. The e-invoice data was provided by Fiscal Information Agency of Taiwan Ministry of Finance." We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: The author(s) received no specific funding for this work. 3. Please could you provide further details about the expert-knowledge based process in section 2.2., step 3: *If the 'researchers' involved were not the authors, please provide details of their positions and expertise and how they were recruited for this exercise. *Please clarify if you obtained consent from the researchers to participate in this study. *Please provide details of how the process was carried out: What questions were the researchers asked? How did they come to an agreement? Thank you for your attention to these points. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper presents a system to detect edible oil manufactures that are suspicious to sell adulterated oils. The system makes use of data mining techniques to detect anomalous individuals in a big sample. The aim of the paper is interesting and potentially new. Nevertheless, I have seen several shortcomings in the paper, described below. I recommend the authors considering the comments in order to improve the quality of the paper: 1) The contribution is not contextualized. I miss a section dealing with related work about, at least, systems to detect anomalous individuals using data mining techniques. There are many recent contributions in this aspect, for example in financial fraud detection, which is related to this paper. By doing a literature review, the authors can put it clear what the paper adds to knowledge and practice in this line of research. 2) In the Data section, I miss an explanation of how expert knowledge was extracted. Do you interview some key agents? How many? Which was the criterium to select the experts? 3) The selection of the training data should be also discussed. Why not selecting data from a certain time period (e.g., one year) as training data and the following period as testing data? By doing so, the results would show the system ability to predict suspicious manufactures in the future. 4) Which are the specific features influencing the most on the classification? It would be interesting to know and interpret these features. 5) Related to the previous comment, which would be the interpretation of the naïve decision tree in section 3.2? Do you have any explanation about why this rule identifies suspicious manufacturers? 6) Part of the stuff in the Discussion section (that dealing with figure 4(b)) would be better located in the Results section. I also miss the last column in Table 4, commented in the Discussion section. 7) I also recommend including a Conclusion section. Reviewer #2: I think the manuscript is very interesting and may be very useful to the government from Taiwan. In addition, the method may be inspiring for other countries. I have some suggestions, as follows: “Prevention is always better than remedy”- I think the sentence is very colloquial and should be replaced. “Early detection of food safety events via warning signs of suspicious transactions is thus needed.” – Please give more details about it. Does the e-invoice was already used to detect food adulteration? What are the possible clues to detect a food safety adulteration using the e-invoice system? “All registered edible oil manufacturers with a capital amount of over 1 million USD in Taiwan have been required to use an e-invoice system” – Can you include the reference about this requirement? What is FIC? Please include the meaning of abbreviations on their first use. I think the methods and results sections could be more detailed. The method could be improved to increase the interest from food safety/ food policy specialists and stakeholders I don’t think Table 1 is necessary. You could include the data in the text. “Researchers selected 60 keywords that they agreed could best distinguish edible oil-related items from others.” Can you give some examples? The discussion should be improved. Topics about food safety and consumer’s right could be included. Are there any other studies about using an automated system to detect frauds? The system implementation is expansive? “Prevention is always better than cure” – same as the sentence aforementioned Only one reference is from 2017 and one from 2016. The other references are from <2015. I think more recent studies can be included. More references about food issues could be included. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Juan M Hernandez Reviewer #2: Yes: Diogo Thimoteo da Cunha [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-19-24654R1 An automated alarm system for food safety by using electronic invoices PLOS ONE Dear Prof Lian, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Your revised manuscript has been reassessed by the reviewers and there are a minor revisions to be done before it can be accepted for publication. ============================== We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Feb 16 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Anderson de Souza Sant'Ana, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have followed some of my recommendations in the first review and now the method and results are clearer. Nevertheless, I need further insist in the first point of my previous review, about the contextualization of the contribution. The authors have framed the work in the literature around food fraud prevention using big data (references 5-8, 24-26). That’s fine, but simply mentioning some references in brackets does not help very much. Your study would be more valued if you make a comprehensive (not necessarily very long) review about the state of the art and what this paper adds to this body of research. In other words, I recommend commenting the cited references (perhaps including new ones), maybe in a new section of related work, highlighting the previous findings and what your study adds. I have also some other minor comments: 1) Is there any error when citing references 16-17 and 18? It seems reference 16 should be reference 18. 2) Details about the number and role of experts consulted are better located in epigraph “Step 3”, page 9. 3) The quality of the figures should be much improved. I cannot read Fig 3 and Fig 4B. Reviewer #2: The authors presented a enhanced version of the manuscript. All my comments were addressed. The manuscript can be accepted in my opinion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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An automated alarm system for food safety by using electronic invoices PONE-D-19-24654R2 Dear Dr. Lian, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Anderson de Souza Sant'Ana, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-24654R2 An automated alarm system for food safety by using electronic invoices Dear Dr. Lian: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Anderson de Souza Sant'Ana Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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