Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 4, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-30683 Intra-individual variation of particles in exhaled air and of the contents of Surfactant protein A and albumin PLOS ONE Dear Professor Spela Kokelj, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jan 09 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include the updated Competing Interests Statement and Funding Statement in your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Major revision is necessary. After getting the revised manuscript, the further decision will be given. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper reports findings from a small-sample size study. Given the novelty of the exhaled particle technique and the scarcity of the data on this topic, the results are interesting and important enough to be published despite that the results may be considered preliminary. The findings support the need for a more in-depth study with larger sample size to generate more generalizable results. Specific comments are as follows. Abstract: CRs should be defined. As written, the units of CRs for different analytes are not normalized to mean values. e.g., reporting a CR as 0.85 kn L-1 gives the reader no idea on variability. Table 1: Since this is not a randomly selected cohort of subjects, normal distributions would not be expected for any of the anthropocentric (and perhaps spirometric) parameters shown in Table 1. It is more informative to provide range, median, etc, in addition to mean and SD. Methods: The method of exhaled particle collection should be described in more detail perhaps with a diagram of the sampling set up. How was the sampling air flow controlled? What sampling medium was used to collect particles? How long did it take to collect 120 ng particles? How was this monitored? Statistical analyses section: the sentence starting "particle mean mass differences..." (Line 141-143) is unclear. Next sentence - what's the rationale to define CR as SD multiplied by 1.96? ANOVA tests presented in the paper are okay; but given the data structure, statistical testing for intra-day and between-day differences can be done more appropriately using mix-effects models, allowing control for subject as a random effect. Table 3: the heading should be "mean(95% CI) or median (interquartile range)". Discussion section is very well done. Reviewer #2: This paper reports on measurements of exhaled breath from 16 subjects. It seems to be partly an advertisement for the PExA instrument (the authors state a conflict) and partly an evaluation of some of the contents of exhaled breath. The paper has some major flaws, discussed below, but the bottom line is that the hypothesis is not clearly stated. The hypothesis that I find is that intra-individual variation is small as measured by CR so that larger variations might indicate onset or resolution of disease. The paper should be restructured around this hypothesis or another one if my interpretation is incorrect. In addition, the authors present the context of this work in terms of that of their prior co-authors. There is an extensive and growing literature on exhaled breath analysis. The introduction needs to be restructured to address the goals of this work in the context of other work in the field. Major Comments Line 47-48: this statement needs references. Line 50-51: what is a PExA instrument? The introduction should describe the context for the work not the instrumentation used to perform the work. If the point of this work is to highlight the PExA instrument, it should be compared to other instruments that produce similar results. Line 36: Define lnPEx. Is it the log of PEx? Line 200-201: BAL contains information on cellular content of for instance neutrophils and eosinophils, which are important health markers. It would be very interesting if exhaled breath particles also contained cellular information, but this was not tested in this study. This sentence is more of a sales pitch for the PExA instrument and not a balanced evaluation of the pros and cons of exhaled breath analysis vs. BAL. Lines 202-211: No analysis was performed of SP-D or CC-16 in this study. Why is it discussed here? Line 218: this study did not include any subjects with asthma – why is this included here? Line 223-228: speculation. It could be that gravity plays a role. At night the subjects were horizontal while in the day vertical, which may alter mucociliary transport and may explain some of the observations. This is also speculation. Table 4: wt% might vary with relative humidity – drier conditions might lead to higher concentrations. Was RH in the clinic measured? If not, are these results valid? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Intra-individual variation of particles in exhaled air and of the contents of Surfactant protein A and albumin PONE-D-19-30683R1 Dear Dr. Kokelj, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Ajaya Bhattarai Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Junfeng (Jim) Zhang |
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PONE-D-19-30683R1 Intra-individual variation of particles in exhaled air and of the contents of Surfactant protein A and albumin Dear Dr. Kokelj: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ajaya Bhattarai Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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