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PONE-D-19-22664 Reconstruction of a two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413 PLOS ONE Dear Dr Ehsan Motamedian, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration by four experts in the field, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the vraious points raised during the review process. English langage should be improved throughout the manuscript and the manuscript should include a discussion or conclusion section. Furthermore, your model should be compared to other existing models We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by end of october. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitle “Reconstruction of a two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413” by Shahkouhi and Motamedian presents modeling work towards the understanding of the phototrophic metabolism of A. variabilis. Authors reconstructed a combined model using two physiological stages of A. variabilis, while studying hydrogen production. Overall, the study is not novel from the modeling perspective because there are available more comprehensive models of Anabaena. Previous studies utilized the same combined model approach, thus, authors should compare their results with modeling outcomes of previously reconstructed models. Additionally, authors should contextualize their experimental evidence for a better data description of the Anabaenas’ metabolism at genome-scale. Critical issues The introductory paragraph must highlight, why authors pick the Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413 strain. Supplementary file S2 couldn’t be simulated due to problems that have been encountered in the model structure inconsistent Fields: S: mets: Size of S does not match elements in mets, b: mets: Size of b does not match elements in mets. Please provide the Supplementary file 2 again. Model structure should be compared with other available models for A. variabilis. Overall, the article is not publishable in this incomplete condition. Authors performed a limited number of analyses, which almost seem like preliminary tests. Moreover, the predictions in this article are not compared or validated with experimental data, which make a confusing situation for the readers. Mostly, the authors’ claims are based on the predictions, which cannot be believed until verified with some experimental data. I was hoping, at least, the scientific community can take some advantage using the proposed model, but the model is in bad shape which cannot be used or propagate by incorporating more pathways or reactions to understand the broader metabolic behavior of the organism. These models contain non-standard reaction and metabolite ids, which do not match to any reaction databases. Minor general issues Line 12. Please, correct the organism name Line 19 to 21. Please reword this sentence Line 25 to 26. Homogenize capital letters Line 35. Rephrase as "basic requirements for life are carbon, oxygen and nitrogen" Line 37, the word "only" is too vague. What is it referring to? Number of different nutrients? Concentrations? Authors should be more specific about this claim Line 39 to 40, this sentence is confusing Line 67. Change “sequenced data” by genomic sequenced data. Line 71. Update references some suggestions are doi: 10.1186/s13068-018-1244-3 and 10.1042/BST20170242. Line 100. Change “applied” by “used” Line 142. Delete “Upper and lower limits of all reversible reactions were set to 1000 and -1000 mmol/gDCW/h, respectively. Fluxes were limited between 0 and 1000 mmol/gDCW/h for all intracellular irreversible reactions”. Figures Figure 1b – no information is provided about what two different colors are meant for. Figure 2 – this figure is confusing. Irradiance values are missing from some of the small squares. Figure 3 – Panel names (a, b ?) are missing. It is not known what the colors in these heatmaps stand for. What data have been plotted here, which is leveled by the color bar? Figure 4 – these proposed alternations are not beneficial until they are not compared with the experimental data. Reviewer #2: In this study the authors have built a genome scale metabolic model to analyze the hydrogen production in the heterocystous cyanobacteria Anabaena Variabilis. Both a single cell model and a two-cell model, accounting for the vegetative cell and heterocyst, were constructed. The models were evaluated by comparing their growth rate against experimentally reported values. The two-cell model was first used to compare the oxygen production rate in the vegetative cell and the heterocyst. The analysis showed that the oxygen production is negligible in the heterocyst as compared to vegetative cell and therefore heterocyst is more suitable for hydrogen production. The model was then used to predict up/down-regulation strategies to enhance the production of hydrogen. For this purpose, the flux distribution under the minimal and maximal hydrogen production were compared and the reactions whose fluxes increased/decreased were identified. The manuscript is a nice contribution of a heterocystous cyanobacterium, however, a number of issues need to be resolved first Major comments: • Page 6 and line 123-132: What is the source of information about the relative fraction of different lipids (MGDG, SQDG, DGDG and PG)? The author should cite the appropriate reference. Similarly, the text should directly indicate what is the source of information for the glycogen content and pigment content. If the authors have taken the peptidoglycan and LPS content from Synechocystis 6803 model (Nogales et al., 2012) and this needs to be mentioned in the text. • Section 2.3.1: What is the purpose of the single cell model? This is not made clear in this study. The only place where the single cell model is used in this study is in Section 3.2. There the authors compare the predictions of the single cell model and two-cell model with the experimental data. However, there is no clear discussion about the purpose of using the single cell model in this analysis. The authors should clarify why the analysis using single model is needed for this study. • Section 2.3.2: Does the two-cell model have separate biomass formation equations for the heterocyst and vegetative cell? If yes, then do the authors assume that their biomass compositions are same/different? The authors should modify the text to include these details. • Section 2.3.2: What is the biomass objective function for the two-cell model? Is it only the growth of the vegetative cell or the growth of both the cell types in the ratio they are found in the filaments. This a very important information and the authors should incorporate this detail into the text in section 2.3.2 • Section 2.3.2: In Anabaena sp. PCC 7120 model (Malatinszky et al., 2017), the intercellular cellular exchange flux of glutamine and glutamate was fixed to 1. If they are not fixed at this ratio, then the heterocyst super-compartment uses glutamate as carbon source instead of sucrose. What are the constraints on the intercellular exchange fluxes in this study? Did the authors constrain the ratio of intercellular exchange fluxes of glutamate and glutamine? Is sucrose the only carbon source used by the heterocyst compartment or does it utilize glutamate as well? The authors should provide these details in the text. • One of the major contributions of this work is the model based prediction of up/down regulation strategies for the enhanced hydrogen production. This was accomplished by comparing the FBA predicted flux under minimal and maximal hydrogen production conditions to identify the reactions/pathways that needs to be up/downregulated for the enhanced production of hydrogen. This strategy is not complete since FBA does not always have a unique solution. The more appropriate way is to consider the feasible flux ranges predicted using Flux variability analysis (FVA) (Mahadevan and Schilling, 2003) under the minimal and maximal hydrogen production e.g. (Englund et al., 2018). Minor comments: • Page 4 and line 58-61: This sentence is grammatically incorrect. The authors should drop the word ‘since’ in the beginning of the sentence or the ‘and’ in the middle of the sentence. • Page 4 and line 73-74: Instead of ‘exchange effect of intercellular metabolites’, it is better to use ‘effect of intercellular exchange of metabolites’. • Page 7 and line 144 to 148: This sentence has grammatical error and that makes it difficult to understand. The others should reframe it or break it into multiple sentences so that it is easy to understand. • Page 13 and line 298 to 300: The short form for bidirectional hydrogenase is ‘Hox’ not ‘Hop’. • In some places the authors use ‘Hup’ to refer to the uptake hydrogenase. But in other places they refer to it as ‘uptake hydrogenase’. The authors should use a consistent nomenclature. • In some places the authors use ‘Hox’ to refer to the bidirectional hydrogenase. But in other places they refer to it as ‘bidirectional hydrogenase’. The authors should use a consistent nomenclature. • Page 13 and line 296: It is not appropriate to use the word ‘activation’ in this sentence as it conveys a different meaning and the oxidative pentose phosphate pathway is already active under the non-hydrogen-producing condition. The word ‘Utilization’ is more appropriate. • Figure 3: Which parameter do the pixel color in heat map correspond to. Growth rate? This needs to be mentioned in the figure legend. References: 1. Englund E, Shabestary K, Hudson EP, Lindberg P (2018) Systematic overexpression study to find target enzymes enhancing production of terpenes in Synechocystis PCC 6803, using isoprene as a model compound. Metabolic Engineering 49: 164-177 2. Mahadevan R, Schilling CH (2003) The effects of alternate optimal solutions in constraint-based genome-scale metabolic models. Metabolic Engineering 5: 264-276 3. Malatinszky D, Steuer R, Jones PR (2017) A Comprehensively Curated Genome-Scale Two-Cell Model for the Heterocystous Cyanobacterium Anabaena sp. PCC 7120. Plant Physiol 173: 509-523 4. Nogales J, Gudmundsson S, Knight EM, Palsson BO, Thiele I (2012) Detailing the optimality of photosynthesis in cyanobacteria through systems biology analysis. Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences 109: 2678 Reviewer #3: General remarks: This article discuss the metabolic interactions of the two differentiated cells and construct a two-cell metabolic model to improve hydrogen production. The authors find that the removal of uptake hydrogenase and activation of some reactions to provide redox cofactors by bidirectional hydrogenase could improve hydrogen production. Overall, this article is well organized and its presentation is good. However, some minor issues still need to be improved: (1) In chapter 1. Introduction: The topic is interesting but the purpose of the article is not clearly stated. After revision please, redefine the introduction and key words. (2) In chapter 2. Material and Methods: It is suggested to revise the section "2.3. In silico simulations". The detailed model simulation (e.g. calculation formulas and so on) needs to be added to the Supporting Information in order to support the description in the text. (3) It is suggested to add the part of "4. Conclusion" in this article. (4) In Table1, the decimal values for points should be given uniformity. For example, the percent of non-gene assigned reactions should be 11.0. (5) In Figure 1(b), please add the title of the coordinate axis x. (6) The list of references is not in our style. It is close but not completely correct. Please revised before submitting a revision. Reviewer #4: Overview:--------------- In the manuscript titled "Reconstruction of a two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413", the authors describe genome-scale network reconstruction (GENRE) and metabolic reconstruction of Anabaena variabilis ATCC29413. Indeed, this will be the first published metabolic model for the species; and thus, by itself is a valuable tool for not only Anabaena variabilis community but also the metabolic modeling community in general. Apart from this authors discussed biohydrogen production in A. variabilis with its distinct cells: vegetative and heterocytes. However, I find that manuscript is poorly written and has a lot of grammatical errors. I have tried to list many of them from introduction but stopped keeping track after a while because there were so many. The authors should go through the manuscript and make sure that these instances are fixed. More importantly, the authors need to provide additional simulations and benchmark their models with existing models of other cyanobacteria or other two-cell models. The only benchmark, Figure 2, is quite opaque and not very informative of the model performance. Figure 3 is missing color axis labels. Figure 4 is not clear from captions. Further, the manuscript does not have a discussion or conclusion section. Overall, keeping the above points in mind, I think the authors need to undergo major revisions of their manuscript. Please find my detailed comments below. Comments:--------- MAJOR: 193-208:The authors spend considerable amount of text just reiterating whats in the table and figure. The authors should provide a schematic of how various pathways are organized across different compartments. The authors have to realize that these are large-scale models and a simplified schematic detailing the model organization goes a long way for the readers and potential users of their model. The authors should also discuss how does this model compare to metabolic network reconstructions of other cyanobacteria such as Synechococcus, Synechocystis, etc. Are these differences represented in their model? How does their model compare with the automatically generated model here (https://www.ebi.ac.uk/biomodels-main/BMID000000140898) or of a different two-cell model here (Malatinszky et al., 2017: http://www.plantphysiol.org/content/173/1/509). Please provide these comparisons. 210-211:In figure 2, I think the authors are trying to compare the growth of their models at different lux. If so, their single cell model is an steady-state FBA model, i.e. it is always linear and will always give global optima of the objective function value. This means that direction of slope of model inputs will be same as that of model outputs (i.e. biomass or growth). They sometimes get a lower growth rate at higher light and higher growth rate at lower light (for e.g. single cell model at 14700 and 8000). This could be because of HCO3 value set by the authors on the model. Basically, this plot is super hard to read and interpret the performance of the model. The authors should also show respective carbon/other nutrient uptake values for these simulations. Just by looking at it as is, I am not sure what's going on with the model. Further, the authors should also explain why they see this output. What is happening in the model when excess light is available? Give us some flux distributions, please explain your results. There are many number of simulations that can be performed to evaluate the model performance and behavior. What is the accuracy of single gene deletion results? Could authors show some of that. As authors of the model, they should perform and discuss such simulations before jumping on the biohydrogen production. 264: The authors are seeing a growth tradeoff in Figure 3(b). What exaplins this growth tradeoff? Also the figure captions need to be written clearly. How is the electron transport chain playing into this? Is the heatmap representing growth or some other flux. Please label the color axes. There is no conclusion or discussion section for results. The only results authors discuss is the biohydrogen production. The authors should provide a conclusion section. Have they achieved what they set out to achieve? What are still the outstanding questions in biohydrogen production using Anabaena variabilis ATCC29413 that the model couldn't address. What is needed to improve the model? MINOR: 48-50: The sentence reads a bit odd. Here's a suggestion: "In absence of nitrate or ammonia in the growth media, vegetative cells undergo heterocyst differentiation enabling nitrogen fixation." 55-58: Again, reads a bit odd. "Heterocysts are characterized by having a thick cell wall that limits the entrance of oxygen, deactivated O2-producing photosystem II, and a high respiration rate that scavenges the remaining oxygen." 59-61: Please check the grammar. Suggestion: "...is absent in the heterocysts; and uses sucrose transported from vegetative cells as the dominant form of carbon." 61-63: Suggestion: "...in heterocysts is transported to vegetative cells.." 64-66: Has metabolic modeling been done before on this species? If so, please provide references. If not, provide explanation for why it is interesting. In the previous paragraph you mention intercellular exchange of metabolites. The presentation of your idea comes across as choppy. Please integrate this idea there on why there is a need for metabolic model; and then, carry on in the next paragraph with "Genome-scale metabolic models..." 74-77: Suggestion: "Eventhough genus Anabena has garnered interest for its biohydrogen production during nitrogen fixation [37-39], its metabolic models have not been used to study biohydrogen production.." 79: Please replace "and researches have been..." with "and has been popular candidate for studying biohydrogen production." 81: Once you say, "hereafter A. variabilis" please use that. 78-95: In the final paragraph, avoid references and authors should just talk about what their work in this study. Anything that needs a reference, should have been said before this point. 155: Please remove "two". 195: Please point the reader to the methods section where you discuss these databases and the process of reconstruction. 280: "improvement"? do the authors mean increase, decrease, and compared to what? 282-295:The paragraph is too word and can be shortened to convey the message succinctly and clearly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-19-22664R1 Reconstruction of a regulated two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413 PLOS ONE Dear Dr Ehsan Motamedian, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. It was examined by four experts in the field, three recommanded acceptance of your paper but one of the reviewers has still some suggestions of amendments. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the various points raised by this reviewers or to answer to his comments in an argumented way. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by end of december. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Marie-Joelle Virolle, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thanks for addressing all comments and suggestions, please make sure that you share the model as MAT, JSON, SBML, or XML. Reviewer #2: Satisfied with replies and changes in the manuscript Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Reconstruction of a two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413 Overview:--------------- In the manuscript titled "Reconstruction of a two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413", the authors prepared a describe genome-scale network reconstruction (GENRE) of Anabaena variabilis ATCC29413 and applied it to the increase production of hydrogen. In general, authors have included many changes while some critical results I think still need to included in the manuscript. This includes comparison of metabolic networks of their model and the previously published photosynthetic bacteria (iJN678 and iSynCJ816: both available through BiGG) More importantly, the authors need to provide additional simulations and benchmark their models with existing models of other cyanobacteria or other two-cell models. The only benchmarks, Figure 1 and 2, are still quite opaque and not very informative of the model as a parameter for theirsimulations. I have suggested possible changes that make the figure clear. Overall, keeping the above points in mind, I think the authors need to undergo major revisions of their manuscript. Please find my detailed comments below. Comments:--------- Major: In the revision, Table 1 compares the size of the model in this study to previously published models. It is possible I didn't clarify what I was looking for. I think the best way for the reader to understand their model is for the authors to show differences in the models. This includes showing genomic metabolic differences between different organisms. This goes beyond comparing the size of the models which is not sufficient is not an indicator of differences. Which pathways are complete/incomplete in Anabaena but complete in other organisms/models. I feel these need to be discussed. One way authors can accomplish this (only a suggestion, authors can improvise) is by drawing a schematic of specific pathways and differently coloring the reactions which are differentially present in their models versus other models. This is an easy way to show that their model does indeed capture biological differences between organisms characterized in their respective genomes. Further, given that their ids are in BiGG database, this analysis/comparison can be easily performed. 305-318: There are two points here: a. The authors are talking about overprediction in high irradiance condition. Typically, models of photosynthetic organisms should behave as such when used with FBA: given the carbon uptake is constant, increase in light flux will increase growth upto a certain point, after that no amount of increase in light flux will cause any change in growth. Further, probably all of the existing models of photosynthetic organisms are likely to show this overprediction in high irradiance condition. After simulating the Two-cell model, I found that the model presented here captures both these aspects. The writeup in the manuscript represents the model in poor light. I would suggest that author find a different way of plotting Figure 2. One way to do this would be to adding two more subfigures in Figure 2: (1) Plot the light flux (x-axis) vs growth (y-axis) and find the ratio of uptake of light to HCO3; (2) Show what is this ratio in experimental conditions tested. Plotting this way does two things: (1) describes behavior of the model and (2) validates that behavior. Other models such as iJN678 and iSynCJ816 also do that. Overprediction in high irradiance condition means that organism reaches the plateau earlier than the model. This is expected as there likely gaps in the model; and hence, do not capture the entire range of bottlenecks. Discuss this point and show. b. In essence, authors are generating context-specific model for two-cell metabolic network. The authors are capturing only the photosystem II gene (PsbJ). However, with changes in light, many other intracellular metabolic genes are likely to get differentially expressed; and thus, are likely to come up as hits for whats happening in the model. There are many transcriptomics studies in photosynthetic bacteria suggesting this. I would suggest that author explain why there's only one hit. Also I think it is important to have a figure for how the expression of various genes from photosystem II change across different light conditions; thus, reinforcing their argument. I understand authors used TRFBA because they developed it. But I think authors should discuss if a different context-specific model extraction algorithm could reproduce the same results. 323-327: Please explain why the authors see this difference. What is the difference in the metabolic network of Malatinzsky et al and their model that yields transport of sucrose. 330: What are "both" substrates: Glutamine-glutamate or sucrose-(?) 331: Please explain this electron limitation and discuss the pathways the model uses to disspate excess electron at high irradiance. 352: Of course, disabling PSII for a photosynthetic organism will not lead to generation of oxygen. This is not surprising and has been known for a long time now. The authors need to discuss differences in metabolic network of vegetative state versus heterocyst state. I recommend that authors provide this comparison for the reader. 370-373: The mechanism described appears to be similar to how photosynthetic organisms deal with light-dark (diel) conditions. Is it the same? Are there any differences? Please discuss. What if my map A. variabilis genes to Synechocystis and use iJN678 to simulate A. variabilis behavior in combination with TRFBA. Will I get the same result. Again for this reason, the authors need to compare the metabolic network of their model with other photosynthetic bacteria. Synechocystis model is most well studied, so I would use that. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-19-22664R2 Reconstruction of a regulated two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Motamedian, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration by two of the three previous reviewers, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the rather minor points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by end of january. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-19-22664R3 Reconstruction of a regulated two-cell metabolic model to study biohydrogen production in a diazotrophic cyanobacterium Anabaena variabilis ATCC 29413 Dear Dr. Motamedian: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Marie-Joelle Virolle Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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