Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 30, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-26443 Title - TLR5 agonist entolimod reduces the adverse toxicity of TNF while preserving its antitumor effects PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Burdelya, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We received positive feedback on your manuscript from both experts. However, there are few technical issues requires your attention. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 15 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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At this time, we request that you please report additional details in your Methods section regarding animal care, as per our editorial guidelines: (1) Please state the number of mice used in the study (2) Please provide details of animal welfare (e.g., shelter, food, water, environmental enrichment) (3) Please describe any steps taken to minimize animal suffering and distress, such as by administering anaesthesia, during intraperitoneal and subcutaneous injections (4) Please include the method of euthanasia (5) Please state specifically in your Methods section that no mice died before meeting the criteria for euthanasia Thank you for your attention to these requests. 3. At this time, we ask that you please report some additional details regarding the Entolimod used in this study. Specifically, we ask that you state the product number and any lot numbers provided when the compound was purchased from Cleveland BioLabs. 4. 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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Significant work by Haderski et al suggesting the antitumor role of TNF. Below are the points which should be addressed before it's suitable for publication. 1.It's been shown by several groups that LPS activates NRF2 antioxidant pathways. Authors should discuss their perspective on the above mentioned topic on basis of this current study. 2. Authors must add a graphical abstract as a figure and discuss this to the text. It will help readers to get take-home message easily. 3.Fig 1 ang Fig 2 resolution is very low. Every lebel is very hazy and hard to read. Authors should work on that. Reviewer #2: In the study, 'TLR5 agonist entolimid reduces the adverse toxicity of TNF while preserving its antitumor effects,' the authors have successfully demonstrated that combining entolimid with TNF treatment significantly reduces related toxicity while maintaining its efficacy as an anti-cancer agent. This study was performed rigorously, and bears merit. Some minor revisions have been recommended as follows: 1) The authors use the term TNF, however, there are two members- TNF-alpha and TNF-beta. Please specify the correct member. 2) Abstract: Please describe actual results. Mention what was increased and decreased, by what treatment, and by how many fold/was it significant? 3) Introduction: Differentiate between a normal immune response triggered by bacteria which results in release of cytokines versus sepsis. Elaborate on 'cytokine storm'. 4) Introduction: Give a bit more detail about the mechanism of action of TNF. How does TLR4 and NFKB fit in (provide more details)? 5) Introduction: Page 5 Line 88: The authors say TLR5 has narrow tissue distribution. So, if TLR4 is more widespread, how then, does TLR5 neutralize the toxic effects of TLR4 effectively? Is the effect tissue specific and restricted, or is it systemic which would make more sense? 6) Introduction: Page 5, Line 93: How does entolimid preferentially protect only normal tissues? What is the mechanism? Anything previously published? 7) Introduction: Page 6, Line 110: Elaborate on how D-galactosamine administration sensitizes cells to TNF? 8) Materials and methods: Mention how the gene expression profiling was done exactly here. 9) Materials and methods: Please clarify how many mice were in each treatment group exactly? 10) Statistical analysis: Student's t test was performed in some animal studies. If distribution was skewed, a non parametric test should be applied, not t test. 11) Statistical analysis: Was power analysis performed to determine sample size? 12) Figures: Images need to be of higher quality, as some of the labels are blurred. 13) Figure 2F: There should be an Entolimid/TNF/D-GalN only control. 14) Please separate the results section and figure legends sections completely. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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TLR5 agonist entolimod reduces the adverse toxicity of TNF while preserving its antitumor effects PONE-D-19-26443R1 Dear Dr. Burdelya, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Partha Mukhopadhyay, Ph.D. Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Significant work. All concerns have been addressed and modified the manuscript by incorporating the changes. Manuscript is ready for acceptance in plosone. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Suman Mukhopadhyay |
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PONE-D-19-26443R1 TLR5 agonist entolimod reduces the adverse toxicity of TNF while preserving its antitumor effects Dear Dr. Burdelya: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Partha Mukhopadhyay Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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