Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 12, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-25712 Clinicians’ communication with patients receiving a MCI diagnosis: the ABIDE project. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Visser, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration by 2 Reviewers and an Academic Editor, all of the critiques of both Reviewers must be addressed in detail in a revision to determine publication status. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision, but revision of the original submission without directly addressing the critiques of the two Reviewers does not guarantee acceptance for publication in PLOS ONE. If the authors do not feel that the queries can be addressed, please consider submitting to another publication medium. A revised submission will be sent out for re-review. The authors are urged to have the manuscript given a hard copyedit for syntax and grammar. ============================== Comments to the Author 1. 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall this is a potentially very useful study for researchers and practitioners in the area of MCI research. I'm not aware of any studies to date that have examined clinical consultations for applications of recommended best practice, so this could be a valuable addition to the literature. It was appropriate in this case not to make the data fully available as per PLOS policy, given the nature of the data (clinical consultations). However I also think there are some important ways the manuscript could be improved. 1. Diagnostic process and categories: Could the authors explain a little more about the diagnostic pathway for MCI in the Netherlands? It looks as though all patients were recruited at the point when the MCI diagnosis was first to be delivered to them, is this correct? Would all the patients have had the same battery of tests to confirm AD/ dementia/ MCI status? Additionally, two of the patients were assigned different clinical labels - prodromal AD and objective cognitive disorders without dementia. I would expect this to affect the sorts of discussions the clinicians had with patients (especially since prodromal AD suggests a more known prognosis than MCI, which may not develop into AD) 2. Recruitment/ sampling: The sample of consultations is quite small at N=13. Quality over quantity in qualitative research, fair enough. But how was the sample size decided on, and what recruitment approach was used? 3. Data presentation: Generally I found the Tables in the manuscript fairly helpful. The one exception is Table 5. Personally, I'd prefer these 'raw' qualitative data included in the flow of the text to illustrate the findings as one reads along. My other point here is that seeing some of the contrasts in the data would help. Eg. Quote 1.1. - the clinician explicitly uses MCI, but in half the cases they did not - what happened in such cases? 4. Data analysis - an a priori coding framework was used, based on current guidelines. This seems like a sensible approach. Was there provision for 'bottom-up' coding of any relevant data that didn't fit the categories? Why/ why not? 5. Clinical implications: In the discussion, there is some implicit criticism of current clinical practice which I think may be a little unfair. I have in mind especially the suggestion to 'clearly communicate' the prognosis (p. 15) - given the uncertainty of prognosis, as you then go on to acknowledge, I think this is a real challenge for clinicians to provide good information. Should risk be positively or negatively framed? Given as absolute or relative risks? etc? This is a really complex issue and clearly, further work is needed to understand what risk information needs giving to which patients, in what format. I also think there is some nuance to add to the points about fostering hope on p. 16. Here I think clinicians are negotiating some tricky, contrasting needs - on the one hand, patients want clinicians to communicate honestly, but often also desire optimism from clinicians (this is quite an old paper now, but illustrates the point nicely: Kutner, J. S., Steiner, J. F., Corbett, K. K., Jahnigen, D. W., & Barton, P. L. (1999). Information needs in terminal illness. Social science & medicine, 48(10), 1341-1352.). Maybe the point here is to improve communication about lifestyle modifications that may have a chance of improving prognosis. 6. Finally, the focus on clinicians' communication was helpful, but I wonder what the patients made of the communication? Were they passive in accepting the clinicians' words? Did they ask further questions if/ when needed? Did they seem to understand their prognosis? Where information was provided on causes, was this proactively given by the clinician or sought by the patient? Etc. I think there is some really useful info you'll have here that could considerably add to the interest and importance of the article. To take just one example, quote 1.2 in Table 5 is a genuinely bad example of clinical communication - what did the patient do in response? Reviewer #2: This is a nice paper on an important topic that has received surprisingly little attention—diagnostic disclosure of a Mild Cognitive Impairment (MCI) diagnosis. The authors present data from a subset of participants in a large qualitative study, providing an in depth assessment of the delivery of MCI diagnosis in 13 patient interactions (by 7 different clinicians). They observe heterogeneity in diagnostic delivery, including some surprising things that are frequently missing from clinical interactions like discussion of long-term prognosis (risk for dementia) and long-term planning. Yet, the sample is small. And it is quite possible that important trends (e.g., 4 out of 5 exchanges where the presumed etiology was Alzheimer’s disease did include discussion of potential worsening over time [presumably to dementia]) were not fully fleshed out. There is also a question of selection bias that must be addressed. Altogether, this paper is an important contribution and should sound an alarm for clinicians and professional organizations alike, to use formal or informal checklists of the essential topics that should be addressed when delivering the MCI diagnosis. Abstract • Should include the physician specialties • The first conclusion in the abstract is that information provided to patients and families about prognosis could be more personalized. But could it? While some risk estimates exist, are these “ready for primetime?” At best, they face tremendously limitations in generalizability. • Alternatively, perhaps the point above about 4 out of 5 exchanges with patients for whom the presumed etiology was Alzheimer’s disease including discussion of risk for progression indicates that more personalized assessments are being performed for a subset of patients. Introduction • Well written and pithy. It may make sense (here or elsewhere) to give additional context for the study. This might briefly include important information about national practice guidelines (e.g., approved therapies, reimbursement for biomarkers, etc.)? Methods • There is no discussion of saturation or how the number of participants or interviews were determined • Similarly, there is imbalance in the number of interviews from neurologists vs. geriatricians • Presumably these are a subset of patients from a larger study of diagnostic exchange (Visser et al. Alzheimer's & Dementia: Diagnosis, Assessment & Disease Monitoring. 2019). Yet, the selection does not appear to be as simple as all MCI diagnoses from the previous study (n=21). How then were these cases selected and what risk of bias comes with the selection? The paper would be strengthened if all MCI cases from the previous study were used. Results • The heading for section 3.2 is unclear Discussion • The duration of the consult (Table 1) seems worth comment. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Joshua D. 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