Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 12, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-22742 Leadership for Success: Health Policy Change in Canada PLOS ONE Dear Ms Brigid Delaney Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by 1 November 2019. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: OVERALL COMMENT: This is a worthwhile and interesting study. - Would be useful to know what the legislation does say in Canada about abortion. - To know the power of different bodies in this process. To understand better what value the LEADS framework provides in comparison to other framework for these issues. ABSTRACT Line 47: Mention is made of a Canadian First Global deregulation: This is unclear – this not in main body of article and needs justification that this is a global first. INTRODUCTION - The introduction could explain better point one above i.e. Provide background to what the legislation says about abortion choice and rights in Canada. It would be value for the reader to know what the actual law in Canada says about abortion - is it allowed under any circumstances, at all stages of pregnancy? Any restrictions? Any health personnel needing to authorize an abortion at any stage of pregnancy before women can undergo a procedure? Any age restrictions? - Identifies lack of access to medical abortion as a gap, inequity – should mention some other areas that have barriers. Should be worded so that this is not the only solution to lack of access to abortion. - Description of Canadian setting could be expanded on a bit. - Are there any other countries that have dealt with this kind of problem, given that a number of countries have medical abortion? - If LEADS is an acronym, write out in full first time a it is used – if not then explain where it comes from. - Value of LEADS framework can be expanded on in comparison with other frameworks METHODS Line 140: use of a consistent guide: Can the authors explain the rationale for this as one of the benefits of qualitative research is its flexibility and not necessary using a consist guide. RESULTS Lines 249 and 250: Would be good to show to expand a bit more on the data analyzed on these points. Lines 337 and 338: “ knowing who to use..” An expansion of this explanation is needed for this to b clearer for the reader. Line 379: PDSA cycle: More description of this model needed. And which components of the model this project adhered to. Lines 386 and 387: More information on this needed on the interactive cycles of engagement with reference to the data is needed to understand how this worked and had an important effect. Lines 400 and 401:” leaders are aware….” Need to expand to explain to what end – was this for championing and orchestrating change as in the sub-title? Lines 443 and 444: more information on the conflict resolutions suggestions in LEADS is needed for the reader to understand this aspect better. Line 467: recognition as an important factor for improvement: More explanation is need to clarify what this means and where is this in the findings. DISCUSSION - Although focus in on the system and leadership it would be valuable in the discussion or conclusion to note limitation of the study - the role of providers in implementing etc. Other barriers to abortion access either not LIMITATIONS Mention any limitations of this study and not only emerging from areas not dealt with in the interviews or the data.. CONCLUSION - Could link this better to use in the international context. TYPOS Check for missing punctuation and need for spacing between words in some of the text. Reviewer #2: This is an interesting and important case study. The paper is well written and structured overall. The title of the article is quite vague – I would recommend reflecting the focus on mifepristone in the title. Within the introduction discussion about why this analysis was conducted is missing. From a policy perspective why is this important know? i.e. investigate leadership skills, etc.? Proof reading is needed overall (watch spacing, use of full stops, etc.) Methods Why was the LEADS Framework determined to be an appropriate analytical tool to assess policy change? Were policy frameworks such as Kingdon’s policy windows considered? The framework purports that leadership is key for policy change. In your opinion is this true? Are there other factors which are also important and may have helped? Discussion about the role and importance of leadership in relation to policy change is needed. It is not typical to describe the individual team member roles within the methods section in such detail and usually methods are described more broadly. There is a lot of detail in the methods section which may not be necessary. For example, example interview guide questions are usually not included. The discussion at the beginning of the results section is a little repetitive. Page 9 Line 158-159 – sentence is unclear. Results and Discussion The result section is well structured. A diagram including the main thematic areas under the LEAD framework may be helpful. Overall, the paper takes a very positive spin on the topic and role of leaders in policy change. While I’m not disputing this, as there is little to no discussion of challenges or what didn’t work well it makes the reader think that there may have been some selective bias in representation of results. I would have liked to have seen the findings situated more within the wider literature in the discussion section. What are the main limitation of the study? Are there any recommendation or key mess ages that can be included within the discussion/ conclusion? Why is the information worthwhile? What can be done with it? What does it mean for broader policy change? The focus on mifepristone policy change is very interesting. Is there anything that can be said about policy change in relation to social issues which may be viewed as contentious? The fact that the stakeholders were able to implement change in regards to a potentially sensitive topic is impressive and can definitely be learned from. What might take away from the study in their quest to change policy? Are the findings only applicable to Canada or more broadly, including within the US? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Diane Cooper, Professor, School of Public Health, University of the Western Cape, Cape Town, South Africa. 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Leadership for Success in Transforming Medical Abortion Policy in Canada PONE-D-19-22742R1 Dear Dr Brigid Dineley, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Helen Schneider, MBChB, MMed, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Diane Cooper PhD, School of Public Health, University of the Western Cape, Cape Town, South Africa |
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PONE-D-19-22742R1 Leadership for Success in Transforming Medical Abortion Policy in Canada Dear Dr. Dineley: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Helen Schneider Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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