Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 1, 2019 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-19-18550 Children’s understanding of when a person’s confidence and hesitancy is a cue to their credibility PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Severson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please find below the reviewer's comments, as well as those from my own. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 18 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 1. We note that you have stated that you will provide repository information for your data at acceptance. Should your manuscript be accepted for publication, we will hold it until you provide the relevant accession numbers or DOIs necessary to access your data. If you wish to make changes to your Data Availability statement, please describe these changes in your cover letter and we will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide. 2. We note that Figure [1] includes an image of a [patient / participant / in the study]. As per the PLOS ONE policy (http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-human-subjects-research) on papers that include identifying, or potentially identifying, information, the individual(s) or parent(s)/guardian(s) must be informed of the terms of the PLOS open-access (CC-BY) license and provide specific permission for publication of these details under the terms of this license. Please download the Consent Form for Publication in a PLOS Journal (http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=8ce6/plos-consent-form-english.pdf). The signed consent form should not be submitted with the manuscript, but should be securely filed in the individual's case notes. Please amend the methods section and ethics statement of the manuscript to explicitly state that the patient/participant has provided consent for publication: “The individual in this manuscript has given written informed consent (as outlined in PLOS consent form) to publish these case details”. If you are unable to obtain consent from the subject of the photograph, you will need to remove the figure and any other textual identifying information or case descriptions for this individual. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): I have now collected one review from one expert in the field. Unfortunately, I was unable to collect a second review. However, the one review I could collect is extremely thoughtful. Therefore, I am happy to make a decision with only one review. The reviewer asks for several revisions. Therefore, I would like to invite you to revise your paper following their comments. Needless to say that all comments must be addressed. I am looking forward for the revision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Below is a review of submission PONE-D-19-18550: Children’s understanding of when a person’s confidence and hesitancy is a cue to their credibility This paper reports on findings from three experiments looking at children’s understanding of calibration, the match between an informant’s confidence/hesitancy and knowledge. E1 asks whether 3 to 12-year-olds prefer to learn from “well-calibrated” informants (those who are confident when knowledgeable and hesitant when not), and whether children view well-calibrated informants as “smarter”. The remaining experiments follow-up E1 by equating the informant’s level of confidence (E2) and hesitancy (E3). Findings suggest that by age 4 or 5 children differentiate between well-calibrated from mis-calibrated informants (E1), provided those informants had a history of being confident (E2) rather than hesitant (E3). Overall the article is well-written, the findings are appropriate for the journal, and the topic is likely to be of interest to the journal’s readership. Below are several suggestions intended to help make future drafts of the paper stronger. 1) There are some inconsistencies across the 3 experiments, many of which are not clearly motivated or explained. For example: a. The Endorse and Ask questions are counterbalance in E2 and E3, but not E1. Why not counterbalance in E1? Also, might children’s responses to the Endorse questions have biased their subsequent responses to the Ask questions? b. Each experiment tests a different age range, but there’s really no explanation why. From E1 to E2 3s and 9-12s are dropped. Since 9-12s are not assessed separately in E1, there’s no obvious reason why they should be eliminated from E2. And, quite confusingly, 4s were dropped from E3. This is confusing because 4s did provide interesting data in E2 and because the authors state that they “opted” not to include younger participants based on the “analyses of these data” but provide no further explanation/justification. c. In E2, the question in the History Phase (“What do you think it’s a picture of? A rabbit or a puppy?”) (PG 22) seems to be identical to the Endorse question from E1. But, then E2 also includes an endorse question. Was it the same question or did it change? d. In E2 the response to the History Phase is included with the “learning” DVs but it is not included with those for E1 or E3. The authors explain that, at least for E3, the decision to separate History was based on one informant having visual access (PG 27). But, that is also true in E2 where History is not separated. e. The abrupt change in analysis from E1 (regression) to E2 and E3 (t-test) was confusing given how similar the designs were across the 3 experiments. For overall consistency and for ease in comparison across studies, I would recommend that the authors use the same analysis throughout. f. Age is treated as a continuous variable in the main analysis for E1, but as categorical for the main analysis in E2 and E3. g. Amanda is frequently favored over Emily, sometimes by a wide margin (it appears that informant identity might be a stronger effect than condition). The authors state that they will discuss the differences but never really do. h. Comparisons to chance are provided for E2 and E3, but not E1. Given that many of the E1 proportions hover around 50%, and may not differ from chance, it is important to know if random guessing could account for children’s pattern of performance. i. “Directional” tests seem to only be used when the analysis yields a p-value close to .05 which makes the decision seem convenient (to achieve a significant effect below the p = .05 cutoff) rather than theoretical. 2) There are some places where clarification would be helpful. For example: a. E1 states that both models answered “confidently” in the test phase but the example script provided indicates the model say “I think…” (PG 13) which is a cure to hesitancy, not confidence. Given that both informants do this it’s probably not meaningful for the results, but it still might be worth clarifying in the E1 discussion. b. The authors choose to include children who fail the manipulation check (which amounts to 10-26% depending on E and question) in the analyses. “Being conservative” and “maintaining representativeness” are given as supporting reasons in E1, but I worry about these. In terms of representativeness, E1 benefits from a huge sample size (at least by developmental research standards) and I would think it could absorb the loss of some participants without threatening representativeness. If not, the authors could analyze the “failed” sub-sample and list exactly how they erode representativeness. The “conservativeness” argument sounds honorable, but given how close children’s performance is to 50/50 in so many cases I think this approach is not fair to the data. And, logically, how can children who fail to correctly identify confident and hesitant informants be expected to use confidence/hesitancy to later distinguish between the testimony of those informants? c. In E3, the authors report that 7-8s “preferred to learn” (PG 27) but the only time this age group differed was during the history (and not the “future learning”) phase. d. Is there a typo after “Trial Type” (PG 27) … should history be deleted? e. I really appreciated the paragraph (PG 34-35) detailing the real world challenge of detecting and using calibration. One additional point the authors might consider including in this paragraph is that identifying a well-calibrated individual in context often means knowing whether the informant is accurate or not. Paradoxically however, if the learner knew the accurate information she would not need an informant (i.e., there’d be no need for learning). f. It would be helpful if the authors enlisted specific findings and citations to clarify support the 3-stage progression for understanding confidence and hesitancy (PG 35-36). In particular, it was not clear what the best support for Stage 3 was. Perhaps the authors want to suggest that 7 to 8-yr-olds response to the History question in E3 supports Stage 3, but this age group does not differentiate between hesitant informants on most of the DVs in E3 and the abstract describes this age group as “insensitive to calibration”. Or, perhaps they see the Brosseau-Liard et al. results as supporting Stage 3, but then it becomes difficult to understand the timeline for when children might progress through the stages. g. Given its relevance to this paper, the Huh et al. paper should be cited and discussed earlier. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Children's understanding of when a person's confidence and hesitancy is a cue to their credibility PONE-D-19-18550R1 Dear Dr. Severson, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall, I am impressed with the thoroughness of the revision and the authors’ attentiveness to my previous comments. Originally, I was most concerned with the model bias (favoring Amanda), what appeared to be near-chance performance, and some unexplained methodological and analytical choices. The authors have thoughtfully responded to each of these, providing important details that lessen my concerns. I am especially appreciative of the authors’ efforts to re-analyze the data to include both the sample with and the sample without exclusions. I’m satisfied with the revision and have no further comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-19-18550R1 Children's understanding of when a person's confidence and hesitancy is a cue to their credibility Dear Dr. Severson: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .